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Interesting concept and premise. Author did a good job on the lore. Though there are few chapters, this just seems the start to wonderful adventures of Augustine and his reaper wife, Azrael. The character designing is done well by the author. We have a sassy reaper wife, a funny mc, an old wholesome couple and let's not talk about Natalus, he's probably busy trying to save his cat from Azrael. xD The world building is simple and precise, just like how I prefer. Goodjob on that. Though very few things are known, I am looking forward to Augustine's adventure to Elysium, netherworld and the mortal world. Update stability is good, the development of the story is neither too fast nor too slow and the writing quality is good. Well done. (: I wish you well for this book, author, and I am really looking forward to future chapters ╰( ･ ᗜ ･ )➝
This is a wonderful story with a pretty unique idea. Everything is very well explained (such as characters, world, etc.) and the story progress is also nice. Not too fast and not too slow. It's perfect in nearly every aspect. It has a lot of potential and I wish luck to the author 👀 Keep writing!
In 25 chapters all i get is the twisted story of a pathetic mc, this novel is just a yellow wet print in the sand. Mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm 140 characters
This is really not good. At the time of this review I'm only on chapter 12 but it's pretty meh so far. Also the grammar is bad and the pronouns change randomly, almost like reading a Chinese mtl, making it hard to tell what's happening to whom.
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
Ooh my gosh! I took all my time to read a book for the first time. Geez...this book is so lovely! I can't get enough of reading it and I'm impatiently waiting for more updates. Upload more chapters author!
This is awesome!!! Got intrigued after reading the first five chapters, the characters aren't bad and after analyzing the plot, I feel it's great... Just some minor mistakes or should I say grammatical errors which I believe with time, the author will correct and make the more awesome. Above all, the book is highly recommendable!!!!
This novel is so good. I feel sad for August, it's almost as if he died for nothing. I hope everything becomes okay for him. Looking forward to more chaps 😊
The story is intriguing. The way the story is designed and how it flows is truly magnificent. Never read a grim reaper book but it looks it is worthy to read. As for as the story went now... is good. All the best author.
You have a very solid base, that can make your story progress from where it is now. Word choices, structure, delivery and writing quality is good. Keep it up!
Haven't red a book about a grim reaper before so this particular one just excites me, despite it being just a few chps I'm already intriguing and hopefully author posts more so I can binge myself in it😊😊❣️❣️❣️
Good start. If this is Author's first story then yeah. The storytelling is good. Anyway, after reading the available chapters, you'll get curious about their past, What the heck really happened... Want to know more about the MCs... keep it up!
the story looks interesting! there are few chapters now, but the story has intrigued me. I can't want to see what the author comes up with next!
I really like the idea behind the novel, it has the potential to be a really interesting and fun one. With the exception of a few grammar errors, the novel is quite good :D
There are minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad so far, I enjoy the writing a lot so far and hope I get to see a lot morae in the future
for now I'm giving everything besides writing quality 5 stars since it's hard to judge those things at this time, but from what I've seen it looks great. the only issue is some minor mistakes when it comes to grammar but nothing that takes one out of the flow
Hey! this is the author. I really appreciate you guys taking time to read it. Every kind of criticism and review are welcomed! Thanks a lot for reading it! ❤️❤️
Interesting concept and premise. Author did a good job on the lore. Though there are few chapters, this just seems the start to wonderful adventures of Augustine and his reaper wife, Azrael. The character designing is done well by the author. We have a sassy reaper wife, a funny mc, an old wholesome couple and let's not talk about Natalus, he's probably busy trying to save his cat from Azrael. xD The world building is simple and precise, just like how I prefer. Goodjob on that. Though very few things are known, I am looking forward to Augustine's adventure to Elysium, netherworld and the mortal world. Update stability is good, the development of the story is neither too fast nor too slow and the writing quality is good. Well done. (: I wish you well for this book, author, and I am really looking forward to future chapters ╰( ･ ᗜ ･ )➝
This is a wonderful story with a pretty unique idea. Everything is very well explained (such as characters, world, etc.) and the story progress is also nice. Not too fast and not too slow. It's perfect in nearly every aspect. It has a lot of potential and I wish luck to the author 👀 Keep writing!
In 25 chapters all i get is the twisted story of a pathetic mc, this novel is just a yellow wet print in the sand. Mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm 140 characters
This is really not good. At the time of this review I'm only on chapter 12 but it's pretty meh so far. Also the grammar is bad and the pronouns change randomly, almost like reading a Chinese mtl, making it hard to tell what's happening to whom.
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
Ooh my gosh! I took all my time to read a book for the first time. Geez...this book is so lovely! I can't get enough of reading it and I'm impatiently waiting for more updates. Upload more chapters author!
This is awesome!!! Got intrigued after reading the first five chapters, the characters aren't bad and after analyzing the plot, I feel it's great... Just some minor mistakes or should I say grammatical errors which I believe with time, the author will correct and make the more awesome. Above all, the book is highly recommendable!!!!
This novel is so good. I feel sad for August, it's almost as if he died for nothing. I hope everything becomes okay for him. Looking forward to more chaps 😊
The story is intriguing. The way the story is designed and how it flows is truly magnificent. Never read a grim reaper book but it looks it is worthy to read. As for as the story went now... is good. All the best author.
You have a very solid base, that can make your story progress from where it is now. Word choices, structure, delivery and writing quality is good. Keep it up!
Haven't red a book about a grim reaper before so this particular one just excites me, despite it being just a few chps I'm already intriguing and hopefully author posts more so I can binge myself in it😊😊❣️❣️❣️
Good start. If this is Author's first story then yeah. The storytelling is good. Anyway, after reading the available chapters, you'll get curious about their past, What the heck really happened... Want to know more about the MCs... keep it up!
the story looks interesting! there are few chapters now, but the story has intrigued me. I can't want to see what the author comes up with next!
I really like the idea behind the novel, it has the potential to be a really interesting and fun one. With the exception of a few grammar errors, the novel is quite good :D
There are minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad so far, I enjoy the writing a lot so far and hope I get to see a lot morae in the future
for now I'm giving everything besides writing quality 5 stars since it's hard to judge those things at this time, but from what I've seen it looks great. the only issue is some minor mistakes when it comes to grammar but nothing that takes one out of the flow
Hey! this is the author. I really appreciate you guys taking time to read it. Every kind of criticism and review are welcomed! Thanks a lot for reading it! ❤️❤️