/ Fantasy / Spatial Magus
摘要
"It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light."
In a world where Mages are hailed as one of the strongest beings, Luz had a bright future ahead of him for being one of their kind. He dreamed of making it big and living a fulfilling life with his brothers and family.
However, fate, as always, had other plans. Fate is a bitch, after all. A giant Dragon descended from the sky one day and unleashed hell on Luz's village, burning it down to the ground, and killing everyone in its path. In an attempt to flee from this monstrosity and escape his and his brother's demise, Luz cast a forbidden Spatial spell and ended up teleporting him and his brothers away from the Dragon's grasps.
However, as we've established before, fate is a bitch. Luz did save his brothers from the Dragon, but they got scattered far away from each other in the unknown, where the brothers will have to wager on their destiny to let them meet once again.
In a world of sword and magic where adventures roam wild and free, this story follows Luz on his journey. On his journey, he will gain some friends, bump into some hurdles, make some enemies, face himself, and unravel the mysteries of this world! "It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light. I'm not your light, I'm your darkest moment."
Author note: daily updates are to be expected. As for the cover, I don't own it.
After writing over 40 chapters, I can tell that it's a slow burner since this book starts with slice of life till chapter 36. (Title: If only I didn't have trusted the fucking job description) before the first arc begins.
Skipping the rest till then should be fine
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'Why am I cursed with bad luck?' Words perhaps not fitting for any soul more than Luz, the MC that the story follows. From the very first line, the vivid imagery that the author crafts along with the enthralling storyline hooks you in and keeps you stuck until you can't find any more chapters to read. Everyone is OP Except Me is an emotionally driven work with finely picked dialogue, deeply personal characters, and masterfully crafted prose that stays a joy to read through without wasting a single line. Luz, the MC is as emotional and relatable as he is funny and cool. He is an absolute joy to follow as a wretched twist of fate leaves him with no one but himself to rely on. With moments that almost made me cry and also laugh out loud in just a short span of four chapters, I say this is an absolute 10/10 story already and can only imagine how amazing it will become as it keeps growing. I would highly suggest that everyone checks it out, it is impossible to be disappointed. Excitedly looking forward to more!!
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If you’re looking at reviews deciding whether you should read this novel, well let me tell you, Read it! Atleast the first chapter, because I know you’ll read the rest as well. UnknownKing has great descriptive writing for scenes, like when people are crying or when hes writing about huge scenes like a village. While the writing is descriptive it’s not too much, he doesn’t dwell on subjects that are not important. This novel is worth the read and is a good way to waste time, it has unique characters and is developing an interesting story.
This review is after reading 10 chaps of the previous version of the same story. There may be some reworked scenarios but I'll still put a spoiler alert warning just in case. The story is about 5 brothers, it picks off right before a dragon attacks their village, and the eldest brother had to use a space elemental spell to teleport them to safety. Needless to say, the spell didn't work as expected, and thus our story begins. One thing that I can assure you all is that the writing quality you'll find in this novel will be top tier. The author knows how to show and not tell, and he's especially good at descriptive scenarios. Although I really don't read much of multiple protagonists' stories, I enjoyed this one a lot. The story is not comedy-oriented but you'll enjoy the comedic writing by the author. There are jokes too but they don't ruin the seriousness. The World is still building but I can see the author has a picture to show, and this is what he's good at, showing. So here's my 5-star review. Best of luck to you Unknownking for this WSA! Let's gooo!
well, i am here at the beginning of something big, i can feel it . just by reading the synopsis i knew what kind of novel this is . the writing style was good , the first chap about the dragon and their fight was amazing . i read only 4 chaps and i can tell the mc is good person, his relationship with his brother was beyond great . i want more world building, this is captivating keep up the goodwork .
Ladies and Gentleman, a new novel from the author san is here xD. Without a doubt it will be a banger, after learning all the ups and downs of writting this is the master piece author has made. Because I know author personally.
A wholesome book with a lot of siblings, a loveable MC who can do anything to find and protect his siblings. Accompany him in the quest along with the adventure to tackle and tame beasts, magic, and much more! Stay tuned.
Seriously, this is the start of something great. Don't let me down author! Im extremely excited to see where this goes. If you keep this up it'll definitely take off!
Oi author, that 1* review is the opposite of this book. There is being humble and not giving yourself a 5* review for no reason... and then there is writing a book worthy of a 5* review, and not reviewing it as such. Anyway, don't look at the number of stars on the author's review, this novel deserves 5 and more!
Don't mind me. I'm just doing my job. Author promised me that je would release another chapter if we leave reviews. But I like that book so there is that.
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- 1 1. The day everything changed. 2 years ago
- 2 2. You… my dear…will be my lunch 2 years ago
- 3 3. I'll make the Cambrian extinction look like a fucking pacifist 2 years ago
- 4 4. I don't plan on dying maidenless. 2 years ago
- 5 5. It seems like we got a smart fella here. 2 years ago
- 6 6. I am looking for workers who I can pay less than minimum wage. 2 years ago
- 7 7. Do you perhaps plan on asking me out for the 532nd time?" 2 years ago
- 8 8. If I have to work until I die, I'm still a slave, boss. 2 years ago
- 9 9. naughty bathroom scene. Two dudes sitting in a bathroom, five feet apart 2 years ago
- 10 10. naughty bathroom scene continues. It’s getting physical in a non homoerotic way, of course 2 years ago
- 11 11. wholesome family reunion. 2 years ago
- 12 12. Young lad. Strip yourself down to the underwear, for me~ 2 years ago
- 13 13. From today onwards, you shall use magic 2 years ago
- 14 14. Why is that motherf*cker grinning like an idiot? 2 years ago
- 15 15. Fine. WE WILL BE GETTING YOUR TOY 2 years ago
- 16 16. IT'S NOT JUST A BIRD. IT'S MY BIRD. 2 years ago
- 17 17. Ignore that creature 2 years ago
- 18 18. What about research experiment 232? 2 years ago
- 19 19. could you please shut the f*ck up for a goddamn moment? I’m trying to enjoy my peace 2 years ago
- 20 20. You know what? More info dumps. 2 years ago
- 21 21. I expect your best tea by the time I reach you, SIMOOON. 2 years ago
- 22 21.5 YOU TWO WILL BE SUFFERING WITH ME 2 years ago
- 23 22. YOU DISTURBED THE RESTING PLACE OF THE WRONG MOTHERFUCKER, YOU GODDAMN BRAT 2 years ago
- 24 23. A young and tender child. What more could I ask for?~ 2 years ago
- 25 24. SHUT-THE-FUCK-UP AND PAY RENT TENANT. 2 years ago
- 26 25. Am I not allowed to care for a troublemaker? 2 years ago
- 27 26. The more you lose, the more you cling to the things you still have 2 years ago
- 28 27. ME? I'M GOING AS FAR AS POSSIBLE FROM YOU! 2 years ago
- 29 28. LOOK AT ME. I'M A GODDAMN FIRE MAGE. 2 years ago
- 30 29. DON’T LEAVE ME ALONE WITH THAT MONSTER. 2 years ago
- 31 30. MASTER BRIAN CAUGHT A LEGENDARY POKEMON. 2 years ago
- 32 31. DON’T TOUCH MY MEAL WITH YOUR FILTHY FINGERS YOU BARBARIAN 2 years ago
- 33 32. Why has a twig so much power over me? 2 years ago
- 34 33. I should stop overestimating my MC title bonus 2 years ago
- 35 34. Theory… I don’t need that. Time to skip it 2 years ago
- 36 35. One cannot simply buy loyalty 2 years ago
- 37 36. If only I didn't have trusted the fucking job description 2 years ago
- 38 37. What the fuck is going on!? 2 years ago
- 39 38. THIS MOTHERFUCKER WANTS TO CURB STOMP ME 2 years ago
- 40 39. I'm back 2 years ago
- 41 40. OY, OY, OY, where is your fighting spirit now!? 2 years ago
- 42 41. Nothing good will come out if we get any closer 2 years ago
- 43 42. Bro… That's not how one consoles others 2 years ago
- 44 43. It sounded way more badass when I did that 2 years ago
- 45 44. I've seen too many hot-blooded youths like you die 2 years ago
- 46 45. I just want a few kids, at least. 2 years ago
- 47 46. you will lead our family again. 2 years ago
- 48 47. I wonder how my siblings are faring. 2 years ago
- 49 48. So we continue our roles as your babysitter? 2 years ago
- 50 49. Child… the power you command is fearsome 2 years ago
- 51 50. Tell me, kid… what had befallen your village? 2 years ago
- 52 51. We could have easily killed them. 2 years ago
- 53 Question 2 years ago
- 54 52. Is that thing glitching!? 2 years ago
- 55 53. Mister Harambe 2 years ago
- 56 54. You can be proud of yourself, you lucky bastard. 2 years ago
- 57 55. Don't touch this book if you want to remain happy. 2 years ago
- 58 56. That sounds disgusting, but count me in 2 years ago
- 59 57. These toys don't work on me~ 2 years ago
- 60 58. Father was right. Humans are indeed quite fragile 2 years ago
- 61 59. You didn't have to kill them all, Jasper 2 years ago
- 62 60. Do I look like a witness? 2 years ago
- 63 61. Why are we not welcomed here, granny?~ 2 years ago
- 64 62. You have no idea what the fuck is going on here, hehhehehe. 2 years ago
- 65 63. The four of us are mages and not saints. 2 years ago
HaReM, OP-ChEaT, SyStEm, 200 IQ 4d CheSs PlAyEr MC tHaT KnOws tHe NeXt HuNdReD MoVeS fRoM tHe EnEmY… If you crave these things, I'm sorry to disappoint you because my novel is not the dopamine-inducing stuff you were looking for. ;) And with that, let's start. Ayoooo, thank you for at least checking out, „Spatial Magus.“ To keep it short it’s a tragedy-filled story about the main character who in his search for what he once had, will lose himself and everything again. The story plays in a typical fantasy setting but with atypical levels of characters and world dynamics. Although the plot overall will be tragedy-filled, it will still be filled with moments of fun and troupe-busting meant for a mature audience. A few FAQs: 1.) System, Harem, OP/Edgelord MC? Nah. 2.) Themes? Conquest, war, revenge, betrayal, xenotransplantation, bloodline transplantation, transhumanism (a lot of human experimentations), drama, and tragedy are all themes one can expect from my novel. Maybe even fracticide, like in Cain and Abel, is not excluded. 2.) $mut? Not really planned. Depends on if my readers want it. 3.) Will there be a female lead/romance? I won’t be rushing it. so don’t expect romance in the next 100 chapters. 4.) Evil MC? well, he isn’t a hero in shining armor that’s for sure. 5.) Cliched plot? Nah. 6.) Young Master Troupes? Nah. 7.) Weak to strong progression? Yes 8.) Info-dumps? I try to minimize it, can always be skipped and will be in form of dialogues. 9.) Slow burn? Kinda. Tbh I cannot fill it with dopamine-inducing fights from the start. 10.) Daily schedule? 1 chapter/day + Bonus release (planned) 11.) Replies in memes and gifs? Always welcomed. I appreciate any kind of reply. So what is this novel about? Long version: There was once an MC known as Luz, who was living a peaceful and happy life with his siblings in their village till their death. Nah jk. As one might expect, the Author had other plans for them, and since suffering builds character (and definitely won't break characters), the village got destroyed. (just like my dreams of a writing career and their dream of becoming mages together.) Forced by circumstances, Luz used a spell that was way above his league. -A teleportation spell As one might expect, definitely not because, I, the author, enjoy tormenting his characters, the spell failed, and all of the siblings got yeeted to different places. Now it's up to them to find each other in a godforsaken world where magic rules supreme while also sharpening their blades for revenge (if they won't end up as slaves bc the world is cruel.) The story follows Luz on his adventure, while also giving glimpses of what is happening to the rest of his siblings. It was originally meant to be a multiple-lead novel. But after reconsideration, the rest of the siblings will be side MCs. Basically, MCs with no spotlight as they rot in the background till the author takes them out at some random chapter. If you still have any other questions feel free to ask me.^^