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Sci-fi genre stories are so rare on this platform I really have my hopes up. The set up was Excellent and the tech consistent. The beginning few missions and first part of the academy arc had me on the edge of my seat. Except for how his first kill response went for two chapters. However the kidnapping of his team from under him sabotaged the growing sense of power and leadership that was developing. His antagonist at the time told him he could never overcome those with authority and connections. His argument although obviously the bad guys was so convincing that it broke the flow of the story for me. Even MC's victory later seemed hollow and contrived.(no explanation of how the corruption was allowed or perpetrated on the campus or if there were any consequences for the opposing team.) Many authors will portray a main character with growth and then "nerf" them to slow the character development, I can only assume this happened. Unless we just wanted to get corruption of earthlings into his understanding. But then that will decrease his loyalty to humans and lead us to want him to betray humanity. I'm spinning into conjecture. Thank you for writing, and I look forward to seeing your next novel.
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With a beautiful prologue introducing the current state of the immediate environment, this book immediately captures my attention. Introducing a different type of genre with a determined flair that speaks of nothing but expertise and an indepth knowledge of the environment is absolutely superb. A MUST READ ❤️
Wow, mindblowing. Tbh this is a new genre for me, I'd be lying if I say I didn't enjoy reading it. Loved the synopsis. Good work author. Cant wait to read more!!
l enjoyed the novel, good work author. It was fun reading the novel. l love Gus because he's making the novel more interesting. Looking forward to more chapters.
Wonderful use of language on vocabulary. Right out the gate you are introduced into a unique world with a large looming menace. A wonderful Sci-fi novel, with great action. The main character, Gus, is a very likeable man. Keep on writing, great work
The story is extremely intriguing and well-paced and the foreshadowing is down extremely right. I must say the world-building was a very creative one and my most favourite of the story. As for the journey of how the main character turns from real to strong is the main thing, I bet everyone would wait for. And the sentences felt a little off in some places maybe because of the wrong grammar. So, I recommend using Grammarly. And Good luck!
The book is just too addictive, I've never been a fan of futuristic, intergalactic themes, but this one is a fresh trope and refreshing to read. Good pacing and nice storyline.
I'm definitely excited to see how this story progresses. It has an interesting premise and if the author can build on it properly it will definitely be a gem. As of right now the vivid details and worldbuilding are creating a picturesque landscape and I love that!
Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU ALL. The name cought me off guard.. lol. I just read one chapter of this book and I am jealous. Why? Bcoz its better than my novel .. The story is well written I think for the start. And the author isn't some green horn he knows what he is doing. This novel will come in top 25 i believe it... Just keep going author don't give up..
Gus, the main character of this novel makes me curious. The author managed to make me want to follow his journey in overcoming obstacles later. Hopefully the author will continue to update this novel.
Author Review!! Welcome to System of Legendary Heroes, a novel which pits humanity against numerous enemy races that feel unending. While the species struggles against outside forces, internal struggles fuelled by greed and bigotry threaten to tear them apart from the inside. Read now, to follow the MC as he navigates the political warzone while trying desperately survive the literal warzone. If you enjoy, collect, comment, and review, and be sure to leave stones to help me with WSA!
Sci-fi genre stories are so rare on this platform I really have my hopes up. The set up was Excellent and the tech consistent. The beginning few missions and first part of the academy arc had me on the edge of my seat. Except for how his first kill response went for two chapters. However the kidnapping of his team from under him sabotaged the growing sense of power and leadership that was developing. His antagonist at the time told him he could never overcome those with authority and connections. His argument although obviously the bad guys was so convincing that it broke the flow of the story for me. Even MC's victory later seemed hollow and contrived.(no explanation of how the corruption was allowed or perpetrated on the campus or if there were any consequences for the opposing team.) Many authors will portray a main character with growth and then "nerf" them to slow the character development, I can only assume this happened. Unless we just wanted to get corruption of earthlings into his understanding. But then that will decrease his loyalty to humans and lead us to want him to betray humanity. I'm spinning into conjecture. Thank you for writing, and I look forward to seeing your next novel.
揭示劇透 With a beautiful prologue introducing the current state of the immediate environment, this book immediately captures my attention. Introducing a different type of genre with a determined flair that speaks of nothing but expertise and an indepth knowledge of the environment is absolutely superb. A MUST READ ❤️
Wow, mindblowing. Tbh this is a new genre for me, I'd be lying if I say I didn't enjoy reading it. Loved the synopsis. Good work author. Cant wait to read more!!
l enjoyed the novel, good work author. It was fun reading the novel. l love Gus because he's making the novel more interesting. Looking forward to more chapters.
Wonderful use of language on vocabulary. Right out the gate you are introduced into a unique world with a large looming menace. A wonderful Sci-fi novel, with great action. The main character, Gus, is a very likeable man. Keep on writing, great work
The story is extremely intriguing and well-paced and the foreshadowing is down extremely right. I must say the world-building was a very creative one and my most favourite of the story. As for the journey of how the main character turns from real to strong is the main thing, I bet everyone would wait for. And the sentences felt a little off in some places maybe because of the wrong grammar. So, I recommend using Grammarly. And Good luck!
The book is just too addictive, I've never been a fan of futuristic, intergalactic themes, but this one is a fresh trope and refreshing to read. Good pacing and nice storyline.
I'm definitely excited to see how this story progresses. It has an interesting premise and if the author can build on it properly it will definitely be a gem. As of right now the vivid details and worldbuilding are creating a picturesque landscape and I love that!
Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU ALL. The name cought me off guard.. lol. I just read one chapter of this book and I am jealous. Why? Bcoz its better than my novel .. The story is well written I think for the start. And the author isn't some green horn he knows what he is doing. This novel will come in top 25 i believe it... Just keep going author don't give up..
Gus, the main character of this novel makes me curious. The author managed to make me want to follow his journey in overcoming obstacles later. Hopefully the author will continue to update this novel.
Author Review!! Welcome to System of Legendary Heroes, a novel which pits humanity against numerous enemy races that feel unending. While the species struggles against outside forces, internal struggles fuelled by greed and bigotry threaten to tear them apart from the inside. Read now, to follow the MC as he navigates the political warzone while trying desperately survive the literal warzone. If you enjoy, collect, comment, and review, and be sure to leave stones to help me with WSA!