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A question a lot of people ask everywhere, NO HAREM. Im surprised this novel is not more popular. I saw a lot of reviews from like first 20 chapters complaining, dont know why bother writing a review if you read the first page of a book. Writing quality is solid, maybe a typo once a few chapters if even that. Vocabulary usage is varied which was nice. Dont know much about updates since i got the novel when it was finished so just 5/5 i guess. Barely any bloat or padding anywhere, which is really rare for a system novel. Story developed in a good pace, slower at start where smallest things had chapters, to mid point where repetitive fights started to get summarized, and at the end solo trainings were summarized. Characters were designed well, characters grew, including side characters. Characteristics were reasonable and made sense. Story didnt focus too much on side characters, but enough to get a feeling they existed and were more than 1 dimensional things. World background seemed solid, only thing i didnt like was bunch of references to the odyssey of a blind god or whatever dude who appeared a few times, so not giving a full score. It is a neat idea to intertwine novels, just not for me personally. I'd like to give 4.9, but it is what it is. I do Recommend if a novel with a lighter flavored system is there, No harem, no padding and overall good stuff.
Achei um ótimo romance até onde eu li, pois AINDA não passei do capítulo 350 logo não sei de tudo , porém eu achei que o mc seria o tipo de pessoa que fica mais forte sozinho e o fato dele criar uma espécie de "organização" foi bem interessante porém eles passam a colar tudo em cima do mc e apenas u.a pequena quantidade se toca que o mundo mudou. Fora isso acha que é uma das melhores novels que já li. Em um certo capítulo cita que existe um multi-verso alguma boa alma poderia me conta mais?
I basically don't like mc. He got shot so he forms team with them. Super passive mc against antagonist. Tried almost 20 chapters but couldn't get through.
very entertaining and kept my attention the whole time just wish it didn't end how it did.
One of the best novel i have read. The Author of this novel clearly understood what's the reader want. I like the idea of this novel, a really really good novel.
Well, my review is based only on the free chapters since I was not fond of it very much. Grammar and writing are very good and the side characters don't look plain, so you don't have to worry about it. What bothered me was the mc's decisions and the novel's pace. MC's decision: he seems to lack normal life "intuition" since he almost get killed because he was an idiot. The novel's pace: we didn't find anything relevant about the world, since the MC stayed in the same place killing useless beasts which improved him at snail pace. I would understand if he wasn't improving that much in 40 chapters if we were getting good information about the world or an info dump but we got nothing. The only thing we know is all the basics: kill a monster and he drops experience. World-building: I have no comments since there is none, we know nothing about the world besides the same repetitive thing "monster spawning on earth". Analyzing only the free chapters, I can't give you a reason to choose this novel to read. There isn't something special/different about it, it's the same repetitive thing you can find in any other novel. If your intuition says "it is good I wanna pay for the chapters and find out". Do it, you may have a surprise and this may be the best novel you've ever read.
This book is great .I have reached chapter 300 but I just wanted to be sure before I continue reading, is this novel going to be a harem i just want to know
I think the book is great. The main charakter is someone who cares about his family a lot and is someone who just doesn't die =)
Ok, to start, I’m Addressing The reviews others made about the pushover and nanny Mc. Believe me, it might be annoying at first but in like 10 chapters it gets much better. Right now I have read 100+ chapters and have really likEd it. However, there are a couple of oofs that turn me off a bit. + Action scenes are amazing Abilities and world background Is compelling Even if mc seems op sometimes you can see that he’s A frog in a well at some moments. Other good things but I’m Too lazy to write - First off, I don’t Like how he’s Been stuck in an itty bitty town for so many chapters, I want him to move on and explore the world, there is bound to be a LOT more interesting things. Second, I feel there is TOO much emphasis on r***. Like I get he wants to make rules and not allow those bad things to happen, but like there’s A reference to what happens to someone who r**** like every other chapter, it gets too repetitive considering he hasn’t Said anything about other things like people bullying or taking advantage or other things, he can’t control everyone. I feel like I’m the portal mini arc he progressed too fast, like a few chapters and he maxed every stat and basically just has to farm LOTS of monsters just to get the occupation Again, I hope he moves on fast, it’s getting really boring in the same place. But I lIke the book :) [img=update]
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Great Novel. Incredible character development and progressing storyline with hints of some things coming. MC is NOT naiv and helps everyone he sees, he is battle maniac with brains, learns from his mistakes and kills his enemies mercyless. Lots of kingdom builidung evolved in the apocalypse as well.
The rating is real, but the review is just me complaining, so don’t take it seriously. It‘s a good novel, be it in Writing Quality, Character Design or World background. Still, I dropped it at chapter 10 and I am sure I’m not the only one. The thing is, Mc kills zombies and tries to save a girl then gets shot on and robbed by the survivors who hid themselves. After he killed all the zombies + the girl cuz she turned. The survivors shot him because he is a ‚Murderer‘ even though they know that those guys are zombies…. Yeah. He then got robbed by them, joined them and got all chummy with them. Sure, that is maybe the best rational choice. But it leaves a bad aftertaste and I dropped the novel because of it. I mean, he could just escape from them to the direction of the super market, remove the bullet and recover with his ability. Level up a bit and the come back to take revenge. At least that is what I would have done.
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One of the better novels I have come across in the read free section. A captivating read. When the author is on point you will be hard pressed to find a better read. At times the author gets bogged down in development or distracted but this doesn't detract from the story and doesn't last long. I think this is more updating frequency and story catching up to where author has fully flushed the story. Character development and interactions is some of the best. I'm a binge reader so this is something I notice in almost all novels and tends to be hard to maintain. not noticeable if you read 20 chapters a day but noticable when 100 chapters in a day. and this is the only reason I couldn't give it 5 stars. wether you binge read or read a little at a time this novel will keep calling you back that's for sure
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pretty cool novel.. I love it .. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Absolutely loving it so far (90+ chapters). The writing is grammatically great. The MC’s strength increases at a nice pace. I just wish we could see his stats panel a little more to see how much he grows after each major battle. Highly recommend.
This new novel by HideousGrain is another awesome entry for his multiverse. It begins with the start of an apocalypse called [Primordial Ascension]. Follow the protagonist Dilan as he gets stronger and unveils the mysteries of its arrival. The Story seems very interesting. The World Building is very detailed and thought out, which is a normal occurrence in HideousGrain’s novels. I first thought that the MC will just powerlevel in the wilderness, but the novel took an interesting turn when he reached the City. Many characters were introduced and the important characters are fleshed out and have different dynamics between their relations to another. Furthermore I like the mysterious air around the MC. Even now about 140 chapters in, we still don’t know much about the protagonist and his past, but instead only got a glimpse of his relations to old family and friends and we already know that they are not your normal kind of people and that they will have some kind of importance later. And I‘m exited for that! This story has big potential and as HideousGrain is writing this I‘m sure that he will fully exploit it!
As expected of Hide! His books are always interesting to read. And this one was no different. I had a lot of fun reading it though it took me a while understand Dilan. I can not spoil anything more here.
Love this novel, got me hooked and addicted from the get go. Thanks for the great read, looking forward to reading new chapters! 😊👌👌👌👌
Hideous grain My brother from Another mother is writing another masteepiece for us I haven’t read it yet I am going to start now and to be honest I am very excited about it
great start I like this main character better than gods eyes I think still got to wait and see what his class is going to be. keep the chapters coming cause I'm reading 😈
What an absolute banger. I am loving it so far. GJ author and give me more chapters to read. exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Nice start. The moment where you get a thrill of way more than you have asked or wished for... after being on d verge if death... oh my. Makes me wish to experience that but... careful what you wish for. Love the way and manner author began the novel and the new world given. if you want a novel with lots of fighting, leveling up, mixed with races and fantasy...mind ya scary creatures then yeah, you came at d right stop. The autjor's way of description had me reeled in and I could envision what was happening as though I was there. His world building, character design and story development are on point. Simply put, it's one of a kind like his other books.
Ok. This is a great series with a rather fast pace. I thought the MC will meet another person after 20 or 30 chapters, but I shall keep this spoiler free. Anyway, the description in this novel is good. You will be able to get the detail the author put in. However, some parts are also ticking me off, making them feel like a chore to read them (At least for me). Overall, this novel has some potential. It can only get better if the world and characters get some more depth later on. If you like an apocalyptic Earth setting, this one has a unique cause. So, feel free to read it.
If you are searching for blood pumping novel, with endless action sequences and great writing, well, congratulations, you found one. HideousGrain has already proven his writing skills with his God's Eyes, so you won't be disappointed and enjoy the wild ride. Good luck for WSA 2022!
Dive into the chapters to get an immersive reading experience! HideousGrain's descriptions are very good and he will not leave you disappointed
Definitely a novel worth reading! Not a lot of chapters yet, but you can already tell that this is going to be a good one. Of course it's good, it's written by HideousGrain who never disappoints! Can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded!
Having read the first few chapters, I can clearly tell that the author has improved a lot in terms of pace, fluency, and keeping the story simple yet intriguing. The cover is lit and the book is packed with nail-biting action, suspense, and a lot of adrenaline rush. So what are you waiting for, read this now!!
Ok, Hide had did it again with a new novel and an amazing cover to put the cherry on the topping. Reading the first few chapters, I can tell he had improvised and changed his writing structure to be more WN friendly. As a reader, I'm applaud by his effort and technique to write such a griping storyline that immersed the readers into the world of the MC.
In my opinion, this is one of the best novels I wrote until now. I cannot vouch that everyone will like it but I'm pretty sure that the majority of readers will learn to love this books, the characters and the authors(definitely no bragging) If questions occur, you can find a discord link in my profile. Join my discord server and ask me directly. :D
A question a lot of people ask everywhere, NO HAREM. Im surprised this novel is not more popular. I saw a lot of reviews from like first 20 chapters complaining, dont know why bother writing a review if you read the first page of a book. Writing quality is solid, maybe a typo once a few chapters if even that. Vocabulary usage is varied which was nice. Dont know much about updates since i got the novel when it was finished so just 5/5 i guess. Barely any bloat or padding anywhere, which is really rare for a system novel. Story developed in a good pace, slower at start where smallest things had chapters, to mid point where repetitive fights started to get summarized, and at the end solo trainings were summarized. Characters were designed well, characters grew, including side characters. Characteristics were reasonable and made sense. Story didnt focus too much on side characters, but enough to get a feeling they existed and were more than 1 dimensional things. World background seemed solid, only thing i didnt like was bunch of references to the odyssey of a blind god or whatever dude who appeared a few times, so not giving a full score. It is a neat idea to intertwine novels, just not for me personally. I'd like to give 4.9, but it is what it is. I do Recommend if a novel with a lighter flavored system is there, No harem, no padding and overall good stuff.
Achei um ótimo romance até onde eu li, pois AINDA não passei do capítulo 350 logo não sei de tudo , porém eu achei que o mc seria o tipo de pessoa que fica mais forte sozinho e o fato dele criar uma espécie de "organização" foi bem interessante porém eles passam a colar tudo em cima do mc e apenas u.a pequena quantidade se toca que o mundo mudou. Fora isso acha que é uma das melhores novels que já li. Em um certo capítulo cita que existe um multi-verso alguma boa alma poderia me conta mais?
I basically don't like mc. He got shot so he forms team with them. Super passive mc against antagonist. Tried almost 20 chapters but couldn't get through.
very entertaining and kept my attention the whole time just wish it didn't end how it did.
One of the best novel i have read. The Author of this novel clearly understood what's the reader want. I like the idea of this novel, a really really good novel.
Well, my review is based only on the free chapters since I was not fond of it very much. Grammar and writing are very good and the side characters don't look plain, so you don't have to worry about it. What bothered me was the mc's decisions and the novel's pace. MC's decision: he seems to lack normal life "intuition" since he almost get killed because he was an idiot. The novel's pace: we didn't find anything relevant about the world, since the MC stayed in the same place killing useless beasts which improved him at snail pace. I would understand if he wasn't improving that much in 40 chapters if we were getting good information about the world or an info dump but we got nothing. The only thing we know is all the basics: kill a monster and he drops experience. World-building: I have no comments since there is none, we know nothing about the world besides the same repetitive thing "monster spawning on earth". Analyzing only the free chapters, I can't give you a reason to choose this novel to read. There isn't something special/different about it, it's the same repetitive thing you can find in any other novel. If your intuition says "it is good I wanna pay for the chapters and find out". Do it, you may have a surprise and this may be the best novel you've ever read.
This book is great .I have reached chapter 300 but I just wanted to be sure before I continue reading, is this novel going to be a harem i just want to know
I think the book is great. The main charakter is someone who cares about his family a lot and is someone who just doesn't die =)
Ok, to start, I’m Addressing The reviews others made about the pushover and nanny Mc. Believe me, it might be annoying at first but in like 10 chapters it gets much better. Right now I have read 100+ chapters and have really likEd it. However, there are a couple of oofs that turn me off a bit. + Action scenes are amazing Abilities and world background Is compelling Even if mc seems op sometimes you can see that he’s A frog in a well at some moments. Other good things but I’m Too lazy to write - First off, I don’t Like how he’s Been stuck in an itty bitty town for so many chapters, I want him to move on and explore the world, there is bound to be a LOT more interesting things. Second, I feel there is TOO much emphasis on r***. Like I get he wants to make rules and not allow those bad things to happen, but like there’s A reference to what happens to someone who r**** like every other chapter, it gets too repetitive considering he hasn’t Said anything about other things like people bullying or taking advantage or other things, he can’t control everyone. I feel like I’m the portal mini arc he progressed too fast, like a few chapters and he maxed every stat and basically just has to farm LOTS of monsters just to get the occupation Again, I hope he moves on fast, it’s getting really boring in the same place. But I lIke the book :) [img=update]
揭示劇透 Great Novel. Incredible character development and progressing storyline with hints of some things coming. MC is NOT naiv and helps everyone he sees, he is battle maniac with brains, learns from his mistakes and kills his enemies mercyless. Lots of kingdom builidung evolved in the apocalypse as well.
The rating is real, but the review is just me complaining, so don’t take it seriously. It‘s a good novel, be it in Writing Quality, Character Design or World background. Still, I dropped it at chapter 10 and I am sure I’m not the only one. The thing is, Mc kills zombies and tries to save a girl then gets shot on and robbed by the survivors who hid themselves. After he killed all the zombies + the girl cuz she turned. The survivors shot him because he is a ‚Murderer‘ even though they know that those guys are zombies…. Yeah. He then got robbed by them, joined them and got all chummy with them. Sure, that is maybe the best rational choice. But it leaves a bad aftertaste and I dropped the novel because of it. I mean, he could just escape from them to the direction of the super market, remove the bullet and recover with his ability. Level up a bit and the come back to take revenge. At least that is what I would have done.
揭示劇透 One of the better novels I have come across in the read free section. A captivating read. When the author is on point you will be hard pressed to find a better read. At times the author gets bogged down in development or distracted but this doesn't detract from the story and doesn't last long. I think this is more updating frequency and story catching up to where author has fully flushed the story. Character development and interactions is some of the best. I'm a binge reader so this is something I notice in almost all novels and tends to be hard to maintain. not noticeable if you read 20 chapters a day but noticable when 100 chapters in a day. and this is the only reason I couldn't give it 5 stars. wether you binge read or read a little at a time this novel will keep calling you back that's for sure
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pretty cool novel.. I love it .. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Absolutely loving it so far (90+ chapters). The writing is grammatically great. The MC’s strength increases at a nice pace. I just wish we could see his stats panel a little more to see how much he grows after each major battle. Highly recommend.
This new novel by HideousGrain is another awesome entry for his multiverse. It begins with the start of an apocalypse called [Primordial Ascension]. Follow the protagonist Dilan as he gets stronger and unveils the mysteries of its arrival. The Story seems very interesting. The World Building is very detailed and thought out, which is a normal occurrence in HideousGrain’s novels. I first thought that the MC will just powerlevel in the wilderness, but the novel took an interesting turn when he reached the City. Many characters were introduced and the important characters are fleshed out and have different dynamics between their relations to another. Furthermore I like the mysterious air around the MC. Even now about 140 chapters in, we still don’t know much about the protagonist and his past, but instead only got a glimpse of his relations to old family and friends and we already know that they are not your normal kind of people and that they will have some kind of importance later. And I‘m exited for that! This story has big potential and as HideousGrain is writing this I‘m sure that he will fully exploit it!
As expected of Hide! His books are always interesting to read. And this one was no different. I had a lot of fun reading it though it took me a while understand Dilan. I can not spoil anything more here.
Love this novel, got me hooked and addicted from the get go. Thanks for the great read, looking forward to reading new chapters! 😊👌👌👌👌
Hideous grain My brother from Another mother is writing another masteepiece for us I haven’t read it yet I am going to start now and to be honest I am very excited about it
great start I like this main character better than gods eyes I think still got to wait and see what his class is going to be. keep the chapters coming cause I'm reading 😈
What an absolute banger. I am loving it so far. GJ author and give me more chapters to read. exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Nice start. The moment where you get a thrill of way more than you have asked or wished for... after being on d verge if death... oh my. Makes me wish to experience that but... careful what you wish for. Love the way and manner author began the novel and the new world given. if you want a novel with lots of fighting, leveling up, mixed with races and fantasy...mind ya scary creatures then yeah, you came at d right stop. The autjor's way of description had me reeled in and I could envision what was happening as though I was there. His world building, character design and story development are on point. Simply put, it's one of a kind like his other books.
Ok. This is a great series with a rather fast pace. I thought the MC will meet another person after 20 or 30 chapters, but I shall keep this spoiler free. Anyway, the description in this novel is good. You will be able to get the detail the author put in. However, some parts are also ticking me off, making them feel like a chore to read them (At least for me). Overall, this novel has some potential. It can only get better if the world and characters get some more depth later on. If you like an apocalyptic Earth setting, this one has a unique cause. So, feel free to read it.
If you are searching for blood pumping novel, with endless action sequences and great writing, well, congratulations, you found one. HideousGrain has already proven his writing skills with his God's Eyes, so you won't be disappointed and enjoy the wild ride. Good luck for WSA 2022!
Dive into the chapters to get an immersive reading experience! HideousGrain's descriptions are very good and he will not leave you disappointed
Definitely a novel worth reading! Not a lot of chapters yet, but you can already tell that this is going to be a good one. Of course it's good, it's written by HideousGrain who never disappoints! Can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded!
Having read the first few chapters, I can clearly tell that the author has improved a lot in terms of pace, fluency, and keeping the story simple yet intriguing. The cover is lit and the book is packed with nail-biting action, suspense, and a lot of adrenaline rush. So what are you waiting for, read this now!!
Ok, Hide had did it again with a new novel and an amazing cover to put the cherry on the topping. Reading the first few chapters, I can tell he had improvised and changed his writing structure to be more WN friendly. As a reader, I'm applaud by his effort and technique to write such a griping storyline that immersed the readers into the world of the MC.
In my opinion, this is one of the best novels I wrote until now. I cannot vouch that everyone will like it but I'm pretty sure that the majority of readers will learn to love this books, the characters and the authors(definitely no bragging) If questions occur, you can find a discord link in my profile. Join my discord server and ask me directly. :D