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why?! why did you change the plot??? is it because if you don't then you won't have another 800 chapter long novel?!|||||you already have another novel with an mc borrowing power for the complete novel||||||.......you're erasing the personality and characters you developed. Castiel clearly showed that having eternal life was overrated. |||||||But the mc forgot that conversation right? but what are you doing?! except for the blood council member, no one else in the story thinks immortality is to be desired. same now you've gone and decided the mc is gonna turn his dead sister immortal .
its a very meh story you can skip 20 or more chapters and you would still be able to understand what's going on.
honestly I have to drop, the mc is just an extremely naive and frustrating character he genuinely made me feel like ripping my hair out
Is there are a Crossover between Samsara Online and Blood Warlock? Are maybe the Samsara Guys the Golden Domain? Just a thought. It can be? Whatever. Great works. Thank you for your writings. 💪💪💪💪
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Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.
Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.
Alright in all honesty the book is okay, but the mc is so unbelievably insufferable that it’s truly hard to deal with. Writing the review at chapter 49. Really hoping it gets better.
Not gonna lie this book is so bad, not one character is likeable besides one. the start of the book is 9 chapter flashback that wasn’t even remotely entertaining, and the main character doesn’t even know how to accept reality. I only got to chapter 19 before I stopped, and I had to skim through it all before I got there. Only redeeming quality of this book that I see is the amount of updates.
Love your other novels, but this one doesn’t do it for me. I read 100 chapters then dropped it. Maybe one day I will pick it back up if I have nothing better to do. Give us more Rise of demon god please
Came here because of the forced library. Cant even remove this boring novel which I didnt and don’t have to read. Knowing this Autor that diasapointed with divinity and inhuman that was full with filler and destroying expectations with rise of the… book.
CRITICAL REVIEW Read 181 chaps; easy binge --------------------------------------------------- I came for the Harem. Didn't get the shenanigans, but delightfully stayed for the story. I'm honestly surprised. It was actually quite good read. It can't be said to be sensational, nor a masterpiece, but in webnovel standards it's very high up imo. Probably within my top 8 on this site. As expected from an author who has done many successful books on this site. I've read one of his early books and the quality is so different from this book which surprised me. It's easy to read, it flows nicely, the story isn't complicated and quite straightforward. The improvement of his writing is clear as day. I'm lenient with giving stars, but this is an easy 5 stars. I barely hesitated to give it even if I'm soft. I also applaud the author for making the story not feel forced or a mess when you have these awesome moments where lots of characters become present in one scene. It's actually kinda hype! Another thing I appreciated was that the journey for the MC never goes smoothly especially pre 100 chapters. Characters in the story are well fleshed out for the most part, especially the main cast. It doesn't feel as if one has more development over the other which is great. Though Yovana could've been handled much better. I really wished there was better foreshadowing for what she brought to the story. I also wish we had a more heart to heart with her like the rest of the cast. If there is a need for improvement then it would definitely be Powers. When it comes to powers in the novels that's where the novel has its biggest weakness because it's vague and never explained in detail. However this story is more emphasised on the journey of the cast and its simple plot. Honestly detailed information of powers and being faithful isn't really necessary and the ambiguous power scaling and such really doesn't detract me from my reading at all with how THIS story is written. I hope this story does not go on for too long because this book would be best short. Moreover, despite being someone who loves happy endings, a bittersweet ending would be something to really consider even though it would be bitter. It may really upset alot of people, but honestly with what you have done. I think it can make the story really meaningful. I will probably even cry if it's done right. I am very happy to have read this story! I am very eager to read more and hope the quality doesn't drop because its 180 chaps in it's still quite good! Now this wouldn't be a review of mine if I didn't ship at the end of the review. Well honestly 180 chaps in there's hardly any romance which was surprising as I kinda came for the harem tag. But I love how the story turned out. Screw the harem nonsense! What's written already is lovely. I really fear that trying to add romantic drama or forced relationships will just taint the story. LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas Atlas is the type to be faithful to 1 girl. Don't complicate it with adding more! From what has occurred, their relationship still needs a long way to go (romantically) and it really needs to be fleshed out and treaded carefully. Their relationship after all is complex and complicated and the few wholesome scenes or rather better to say teetee (Japanese slang) is definitely not enough to be convincing and realistic. You have the capability! Don’t disappoint me!
i just dropped it after his sister died 😭 i am week hearted. actually i was looking forward to some siblings bond after reading first few chapters but the author had just outright kill her, i am disappointed, why build a character if you are going to kill them.
I like it .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. ..................
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
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Looking forward to it..........................................................................Ugh.. How many more dots to put .............. Finally !!!!!
This book is more than what I expected. I love this book and has already been added to my library. Truly, what a marvellous you have written, Author. It's great. I don't feel like giving spoilers because I recommend you to read it. It's worth your time.
pathetic boring novel.🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤞🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
The big daddy gifted you a castle so you'd better take the gold this time. In next year's competition you won't have a chance after all since I will be taking part
As is the story isn't bad enough, the author decided to add HAREM AND ROMANCE into the mix.............. I personally hate romance and harem so I can't be too cruel with the review.
OwO. so author created vampire this time. Just check out synopsis, still need to read but it's already hooking to me. I have read Author's earlier book and i am excited to see how this one goes
The book is great as expected of the author.... So intrigued by the book that I can't wait for more chaps already. The only slight problem is the cover, the cover isn't all that great and have seen books with this same cover. If the author could get a more better cover, it'll be great!
Okay!! From where do I start? First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book. A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge. The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly. The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them. Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into. Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!
The story is about a boy, who is trashed by the vampires, become a vampire himself. And obviously, he's going to start his revenge. I hope that the author can add some mysterious elements in the future. If you are a casual revenge story fan, this novel would be enjoyable for you.
First review from the author. Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters. Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself. Update Stability: Daily release. Please give the book a try and see for yourself.
hey author pls when are you continuing this book..... I just cant' wait to know what happened
why?! why did you change the plot??? is it because if you don't then you won't have another 800 chapter long novel?!|||||you already have another novel with an mc borrowing power for the complete novel||||||.......you're erasing the personality and characters you developed. Castiel clearly showed that having eternal life was overrated. |||||||But the mc forgot that conversation right? but what are you doing?! except for the blood council member, no one else in the story thinks immortality is to be desired. same now you've gone and decided the mc is gonna turn his dead sister immortal .
its a very meh story you can skip 20 or more chapters and you would still be able to understand what's going on.
honestly I have to drop, the mc is just an extremely naive and frustrating character he genuinely made me feel like ripping my hair out
Is there are a Crossover between Samsara Online and Blood Warlock? Are maybe the Samsara Guys the Golden Domain? Just a thought. It can be? Whatever. Great works. Thank you for your writings. 💪💪💪💪
揭示劇透 Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.
Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.
Alright in all honesty the book is okay, but the mc is so unbelievably insufferable that it’s truly hard to deal with. Writing the review at chapter 49. Really hoping it gets better.
Not gonna lie this book is so bad, not one character is likeable besides one. the start of the book is 9 chapter flashback that wasn’t even remotely entertaining, and the main character doesn’t even know how to accept reality. I only got to chapter 19 before I stopped, and I had to skim through it all before I got there. Only redeeming quality of this book that I see is the amount of updates.
Love your other novels, but this one doesn’t do it for me. I read 100 chapters then dropped it. Maybe one day I will pick it back up if I have nothing better to do. Give us more Rise of demon god please
Came here because of the forced library. Cant even remove this boring novel which I didnt and don’t have to read. Knowing this Autor that diasapointed with divinity and inhuman that was full with filler and destroying expectations with rise of the… book.
CRITICAL REVIEW Read 181 chaps; easy binge --------------------------------------------------- I came for the Harem. Didn't get the shenanigans, but delightfully stayed for the story. I'm honestly surprised. It was actually quite good read. It can't be said to be sensational, nor a masterpiece, but in webnovel standards it's very high up imo. Probably within my top 8 on this site. As expected from an author who has done many successful books on this site. I've read one of his early books and the quality is so different from this book which surprised me. It's easy to read, it flows nicely, the story isn't complicated and quite straightforward. The improvement of his writing is clear as day. I'm lenient with giving stars, but this is an easy 5 stars. I barely hesitated to give it even if I'm soft. I also applaud the author for making the story not feel forced or a mess when you have these awesome moments where lots of characters become present in one scene. It's actually kinda hype! Another thing I appreciated was that the journey for the MC never goes smoothly especially pre 100 chapters. Characters in the story are well fleshed out for the most part, especially the main cast. It doesn't feel as if one has more development over the other which is great. Though Yovana could've been handled much better. I really wished there was better foreshadowing for what she brought to the story. I also wish we had a more heart to heart with her like the rest of the cast. If there is a need for improvement then it would definitely be Powers. When it comes to powers in the novels that's where the novel has its biggest weakness because it's vague and never explained in detail. However this story is more emphasised on the journey of the cast and its simple plot. Honestly detailed information of powers and being faithful isn't really necessary and the ambiguous power scaling and such really doesn't detract me from my reading at all with how THIS story is written. I hope this story does not go on for too long because this book would be best short. Moreover, despite being someone who loves happy endings, a bittersweet ending would be something to really consider even though it would be bitter. It may really upset alot of people, but honestly with what you have done. I think it can make the story really meaningful. I will probably even cry if it's done right. I am very happy to have read this story! I am very eager to read more and hope the quality doesn't drop because its 180 chaps in it's still quite good! Now this wouldn't be a review of mine if I didn't ship at the end of the review. Well honestly 180 chaps in there's hardly any romance which was surprising as I kinda came for the harem tag. But I love how the story turned out. Screw the harem nonsense! What's written already is lovely. I really fear that trying to add romantic drama or forced relationships will just taint the story. LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas Atlas is the type to be faithful to 1 girl. Don't complicate it with adding more! From what has occurred, their relationship still needs a long way to go (romantically) and it really needs to be fleshed out and treaded carefully. Their relationship after all is complex and complicated and the few wholesome scenes or rather better to say teetee (Japanese slang) is definitely not enough to be convincing and realistic. You have the capability! Don’t disappoint me!
i just dropped it after his sister died 😭 i am week hearted. actually i was looking forward to some siblings bond after reading first few chapters but the author had just outright kill her, i am disappointed, why build a character if you are going to kill them.
I like it .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. ..................
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Looking forward to it..........................................................................Ugh.. How many more dots to put .............. Finally !!!!!
This book is more than what I expected. I love this book and has already been added to my library. Truly, what a marvellous you have written, Author. It's great. I don't feel like giving spoilers because I recommend you to read it. It's worth your time.
pathetic boring novel.🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤞🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
The big daddy gifted you a castle so you'd better take the gold this time. In next year's competition you won't have a chance after all since I will be taking part
As is the story isn't bad enough, the author decided to add HAREM AND ROMANCE into the mix.............. I personally hate romance and harem so I can't be too cruel with the review.
OwO. so author created vampire this time. Just check out synopsis, still need to read but it's already hooking to me. I have read Author's earlier book and i am excited to see how this one goes
The book is great as expected of the author.... So intrigued by the book that I can't wait for more chaps already. The only slight problem is the cover, the cover isn't all that great and have seen books with this same cover. If the author could get a more better cover, it'll be great!
Okay!! From where do I start? First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book. A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge. The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly. The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them. Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into. Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!
The story is about a boy, who is trashed by the vampires, become a vampire himself. And obviously, he's going to start his revenge. I hope that the author can add some mysterious elements in the future. If you are a casual revenge story fan, this novel would be enjoyable for you.
First review from the author. Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters. Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself. Update Stability: Daily release. Please give the book a try and see for yourself.
hey author pls when are you continuing this book..... I just cant' wait to know what happened