4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
a good fanfic I recommend you read it the first chapter was a little hard to read but the rest is a very good read so go read it .oh please don't drop this
It has a lot of potential. I just hope that when it gets to the harem part, the author doesn't forget about the story and only focuses on lemon scenes, which is what most harem authors do.
Great start and has potential. I hope she gets Grayfia & Ophis in harem. Keep up the good work and pls update more!
Found the title a little misleading but the story is amazing. Really hope you update this I'm loving it so far! it it it it it it it it it it
a good fanfic I recommend you read it the first chapter was a little hard to read but the rest is a very good read so go read it .oh please don't drop this
It has a lot of potential. I just hope that when it gets to the harem part, the author doesn't forget about the story and only focuses on lemon scenes, which is what most harem authors do.
Great start and has potential. I hope she gets Grayfia & Ophis in harem. Keep up the good work and pls update more!
Found the title a little misleading but the story is amazing. Really hope you update this I'm loving it so far! it it it it it it it it it it