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Hope you come back and continue to write because man u did a really good job with what little I could read here. You improved and started to improve on a lot that was faulty with the Netflix show e.g. the characters some world background depth. The main character you create is honestly surprisingly good and character dialogue is also great. the potential of what u were undertaking here honestly leaves me wanting more. U have great writing skill and I hope u return to pick this back up
season 2 is out will you continue the story it's great will he have 2 wives or only one or harem Or have you droped this please no hope again
Plsssss updateeeeeee 😫😫😫😫😫🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺, The storyyyy is really awsome plus you have much better writing quality than other writersss
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Very nice. You took a (to my knowledge) almost unknown TV Series to work upon and not well known ones, because there are many of them. Your OC Character is interesting and the storyline can be followed rather easily, which can be rather hard to make, so Bravo![img=recommend] P.S.. BUT STILL, PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!! #IhaveanAddictionProblem #AddictiveReadersAnonymous
Amazing I’m loving this story but like with most fan fics the update rate is the only problem fan fics can get lost in peoples library due to not getting updated often and this causes loss of interest from a lot of people I’ll keep a close eye on this one hoping you pick up the update rate since this obviously can become a very well liked fan fic best of luck
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I would rate this higher but I would like to see a bit more of the story, good concept and I think the first winx fanfic I have seen on the site. The writing is of good quality and I think this could be a really interesting story once you build up the character and the world a bit more but I like to think that will come with time as I write this at chapter 4. Good job so far. 😊
Now Winx sucks as live action so are u doing things like the live action good luck otherwise tell me an i Will try this. Im mainly talkin about the characters becuase Netflix destroyed them
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Not a bad start. I will be waiting for more. I didn't think the live action was that bad but then again I never saw the cartoon either. I didn't like Stella in the show so I don't like her as the love interest but it might grow on me so you never know.
So far a great introduction to the story and world of Winx. The reactions of the characters are genuine. Great idea and I can't wait for more chapters.
Чувак, единственное, что я могу сказать, что это супер, мало глав. Но я был бы рад если автор продолжал писать это произведение. [img=recommend]
Hope you come back and continue to write because man u did a really good job with what little I could read here. You improved and started to improve on a lot that was faulty with the Netflix show e.g. the characters some world background depth. The main character you create is honestly surprisingly good and character dialogue is also great. the potential of what u were undertaking here honestly leaves me wanting more. U have great writing skill and I hope u return to pick this back up
season 2 is out will you continue the story it's great will he have 2 wives or only one or harem Or have you droped this please no hope again
Plsssss updateeeeeee 😫😫😫😫😫🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺, The storyyyy is really awsome plus you have much better writing quality than other writersss
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Very nice. You took a (to my knowledge) almost unknown TV Series to work upon and not well known ones, because there are many of them. Your OC Character is interesting and the storyline can be followed rather easily, which can be rather hard to make, so Bravo![img=recommend] P.S.. BUT STILL, PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS!!! #IhaveanAddictionProblem #AddictiveReadersAnonymous
Amazing I’m loving this story but like with most fan fics the update rate is the only problem fan fics can get lost in peoples library due to not getting updated often and this causes loss of interest from a lot of people I’ll keep a close eye on this one hoping you pick up the update rate since this obviously can become a very well liked fan fic best of luck
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I would rate this higher but I would like to see a bit more of the story, good concept and I think the first winx fanfic I have seen on the site. The writing is of good quality and I think this could be a really interesting story once you build up the character and the world a bit more but I like to think that will come with time as I write this at chapter 4. Good job so far. 😊
Now Winx sucks as live action so are u doing things like the live action good luck otherwise tell me an i Will try this. Im mainly talkin about the characters becuase Netflix destroyed them
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Not a bad start. I will be waiting for more. I didn't think the live action was that bad but then again I never saw the cartoon either. I didn't like Stella in the show so I don't like her as the love interest but it might grow on me so you never know.
So far a great introduction to the story and world of Winx. The reactions of the characters are genuine. Great idea and I can't wait for more chapters.
Чувак, единственное, что я могу сказать, что это супер, мало глав. Но я был бы рад если автор продолжал писать это произведение. [img=recommend]