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I would gain a lot from this story if you decided to make it your own. You take away the Chinese character, and all the propaganda and writing style so racist and characteristic Chinese. And I think it would be a pretty good novel.
The story certainly have a potential, just that the translation sucks ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
translation sucks, but overall story is nice and interesting .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
honestly it has a nice premise but the fact is that I'm not sure this is even English I read the first chapter and all I know is that a truck appeared or something
Its funny that china`s nba fantasy csn only come true in a novel but not in the real world hahahahahhahahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahahahaha
the story certainly have a potential just that the translation is bad. ............................................................................
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揭示劇透 I would gain a lot from this story if you decided to make it your own. You take away the Chinese character, and all the propaganda and writing style so racist and characteristic Chinese. And I think it would be a pretty good novel.
The story certainly have a potential, just that the translation sucks ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
translation sucks, but overall story is nice and interesting .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
honestly it has a nice premise but the fact is that I'm not sure this is even English I read the first chapter and all I know is that a truck appeared or something
Its funny that china`s nba fantasy csn only come true in a novel but not in the real world hahahahahhahahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahahahaha
the story certainly have a potential just that the translation is bad. ............................................................................
Google translate Had Potential but the Translation sucks[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
waiting for update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*#**##*@,@?@*@,@,@,,@,@,@,@,,@,@,@,@,@,@,@,@,@,@,@**#,£**=,£&=,#&&÷,#*÷,#&÷,#,÷*÷*=,÷*=
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