5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Enjoyed this series, and liked how it was left off with multiple paths to move forward. The story has potential just as a Pokémon fanfic, but I also liked the m/m and believe it adds to it even if I didn’t love Wally. I was hopeful when Wally seemed to be on the way to being pushed out of the picture. I have hopes that DaoOfGay will pick this series back up and continue it.
揭示劇透
Pless Update 🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️
Now another new favorite fanfic after your Percy Jackson one. I'm looking forward to see how Darius grows and develops, and the changes he'll bring to the world. I can see him making a big difference with all his skills including healing.
There aren't that many chapters yet but I'm loving the story so far.Also the updates are stable so far so that another good thing.
Enjoyed this series, and liked how it was left off with multiple paths to move forward. The story has potential just as a Pokémon fanfic, but I also liked the m/m and believe it adds to it even if I didn’t love Wally. I was hopeful when Wally seemed to be on the way to being pushed out of the picture. I have hopes that DaoOfGay will pick this series back up and continue it.
揭示劇透 Pless Update 🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️
Now another new favorite fanfic after your Percy Jackson one. I'm looking forward to see how Darius grows and develops, and the changes he'll bring to the world. I can see him making a big difference with all his skills including healing.
There aren't that many chapters yet but I'm loving the story so far.Also the updates are stable so far so that another good thing.
please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!