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Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. The plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.
4 chapters in at the moment and it looks to be an good read, nice quality of writing, mc looks like he's got all his braincells, world background is marvel cmon now, and it's a brilliant start to the story idk guys i think this might be a gem, looking forward to where this goes
i believe the story was awesome. but does anyone know why it was dropped ?
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It is perfect for me but the time of the updating is slow😢😢😢. I wish the author would publish more chapter. Give him a power stone maybe the author will pity us readers
Great start very intresting, though i do hope and pray this isnt a harem since it does have 18+ and romance tags. A somewhat cynical guess of mine before reading this was that the author removed bad reviews since everyone of the 32 reviewers were positive yet here i am giving it 5 stars. Small important thing to note is that it does somewhat read like a chinese system novel with the bit of kneeling and ultra respect but its not the bad kind of chinese system novel its the good kind, despite not being a chinese novel to my knowledge
So far so good. This is ff situated in marvel as base world while the cheat will collect multiverse(anime, movie, any novel maybe. But for now, its anime.) power system. While this didn't give high as 100x return like other mtl novel I read before, this is good in its own way. Other that I read, mc himself draw the manga or novel and people need to search the one suitable for them and to learn from it. The manga or novel which they choose will directly insert knowledge and the reader train themself. While this one here, its 5x return. Mc also has to produce task in order to give them knowledge to train. You will understand when read it. Pro here is that mc didn't have to worry about not finding what system compatible with the disciple, his own main system will search for them. Overall, I kind of like this novel. My opinion may be biased because I like this cheat, so I suggest you guys just read it first. Don't mind me.
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When reading, it resembles a chinese novel, nothing wrong with that just beware. hellotherehowisyourliferightgoodforyouandverycooool:)
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you say its not a translation yet you used the description that all translations use.... its like you want your trying to scare off all thoughs that dont like translations lol
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Unique and interesting genre of fanfiction with a great use of the tag "system". New design of power gain and different opportunities. I like it a lot 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊.
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A unique take between the ‘Omniverse’ and MCU’s magic. There’s so much mystery behind MCU’s magic and its potential that I always kinda feel disappointed when fanfics use Kamar Taj only as a way to get the sling ring and exploit Portals. Look at Dr. Strange, if he wasn’t super reckless, Earth probably would’ve been close to undefeated unless cosmic threats starts to pop up. And every single evil version of Strange is freaking OP. Can’t wait until MC starts to interact with the avengers!
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It may not be a fanfic translated from Chinese, but it is obviously the Chinese writing style, including the clichés. It's not a bad fanfic, but those who can't stand these Chinese clichés anymore will probably hate the fanfic.
I like it, I never read a story where the mc took the sorcerer supreme route, thank you for this story. I am looking forward to more. Also, I think a few had the route, once offered, but all rejected it.
The idea is great. But the story pace seems a bit too fast. 3/5 for now. I will wait for more chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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interesting idea and everything is so perfect. just don't drop it. there no grammatical error, no confusing things.thankyou for your hard work. keep going.
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Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10.
Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. The plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.
4 chapters in at the moment and it looks to be an good read, nice quality of writing, mc looks like he's got all his braincells, world background is marvel cmon now, and it's a brilliant start to the story idk guys i think this might be a gem, looking forward to where this goes
i believe the story was awesome. but does anyone know why it was dropped ?
Vc vai continuar ou não???????????????????????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
It is perfect for me but the time of the updating is slow😢😢😢. I wish the author would publish more chapter. Give him a power stone maybe the author will pity us readers
Great start very intresting, though i do hope and pray this isnt a harem since it does have 18+ and romance tags. A somewhat cynical guess of mine before reading this was that the author removed bad reviews since everyone of the 32 reviewers were positive yet here i am giving it 5 stars. Small important thing to note is that it does somewhat read like a chinese system novel with the bit of kneeling and ultra respect but its not the bad kind of chinese system novel its the good kind, despite not being a chinese novel to my knowledge
So far so good. This is ff situated in marvel as base world while the cheat will collect multiverse(anime, movie, any novel maybe. But for now, its anime.) power system. While this didn't give high as 100x return like other mtl novel I read before, this is good in its own way. Other that I read, mc himself draw the manga or novel and people need to search the one suitable for them and to learn from it. The manga or novel which they choose will directly insert knowledge and the reader train themself. While this one here, its 5x return. Mc also has to produce task in order to give them knowledge to train. You will understand when read it. Pro here is that mc didn't have to worry about not finding what system compatible with the disciple, his own main system will search for them. Overall, I kind of like this novel. My opinion may be biased because I like this cheat, so I suggest you guys just read it first. Don't mind me.
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When reading, it resembles a chinese novel, nothing wrong with that just beware. hellotherehowisyourliferightgoodforyouandverycooool:)
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you say its not a translation yet you used the description that all translations use.... its like you want your trying to scare off all thoughs that dont like translations lol
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Unique and interesting genre of fanfiction with a great use of the tag "system". New design of power gain and different opportunities. I like it a lot 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊.
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A unique take between the ‘Omniverse’ and MCU’s magic. There’s so much mystery behind MCU’s magic and its potential that I always kinda feel disappointed when fanfics use Kamar Taj only as a way to get the sling ring and exploit Portals. Look at Dr. Strange, if he wasn’t super reckless, Earth probably would’ve been close to undefeated unless cosmic threats starts to pop up. And every single evil version of Strange is freaking OP. Can’t wait until MC starts to interact with the avengers!
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It may not be a fanfic translated from Chinese, but it is obviously the Chinese writing style, including the clichés. It's not a bad fanfic, but those who can't stand these Chinese clichés anymore will probably hate the fanfic.
I like it, I never read a story where the mc took the sorcerer supreme route, thank you for this story. I am looking forward to more. Also, I think a few had the route, once offered, but all rejected it.
The idea is great. But the story pace seems a bit too fast. 3/5 for now. I will wait for more chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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interesting idea and everything is so perfect. just don't drop it. there no grammatical error, no confusing things.thankyou for your hard work. keep going.
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Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10.