6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I think I wasn't shameless enough, so I will do it again, I am your shameless author, and I will say it, I don't think many people will like my story there will be many mistakes here and there, but I will try getting better at writing. As for The updates, I don't have a fixed time because I don't have much time to write, but I will try posting more, this novel is purely for fun and nothing else, and thanks for reading.
The story is great, I hope you continue updating and don't stop.[img=update][img=update]
the story is soooooooo gooooood in fact the best please update more chapters
It did indeed get better later can say anything about the novel itself there's not many chapter to tell have some potential. writing a story is not easy hope you continue with it.
The story has an interesting idea there are some mistakes can be fixed with time hope with later chapters it's get better it does have some potential keep going.
The author wasnt shameless enough with his own review so ill do it for him. This book is literally the book equivalent to the second coming of christ. If there was a word to describe the story telling of this book it would be perfection. If i was only allowed to read one book on webnovel it wouldnt be this one its too short im sorry. Olethros you need to be more shameless.
I think I wasn't shameless enough, so I will do it again, I am your shameless author, and I will say it, I don't think many people will like my story there will be many mistakes here and there, but I will try getting better at writing. As for The updates, I don't have a fixed time because I don't have much time to write, but I will try posting more, this novel is purely for fun and nothing else, and thanks for reading.
The story is great, I hope you continue updating and don't stop.[img=update][img=update]
the story is soooooooo gooooood in fact the best please update more chapters
It did indeed get better later can say anything about the novel itself there's not many chapter to tell have some potential. writing a story is not easy hope you continue with it.
The story has an interesting idea there are some mistakes can be fixed with time hope with later chapters it's get better it does have some potential keep going.
The author wasnt shameless enough with his own review so ill do it for him. This book is literally the book equivalent to the second coming of christ. If there was a word to describe the story telling of this book it would be perfection. If i was only allowed to read one book on webnovel it wouldnt be this one its too short im sorry. Olethros you need to be more shameless.