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Pls create medaka box fanfic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*:*?*;"*+zywuwuwuwuhhe7e777duhxxhhhhehxhxhxhxbzbdbdbvxxveahxhdbbbabbsehshxbx e2uwiL. :^"~"#"#:#:#;;#(#;^;^;*;=_"'))'@)::_;_;_&_&_&_&_;;);;-&--&-^--^
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This story is amazing and I can't wait for more chapters to get uploaded, there aren't nearly enough good fairy tail stories so I'm especially glad with this one
Man, I’m really loving it. It’s very hard to see a Fairy Tail fic here, and one amazing as this one. The 2° point of view threw me of a little at the beginning, but I can ignore it for the sake of reading this amazing fic. Keep going man, good job
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The idea is interesting, the author has interesting novels, the writing style is a little different, but it's easy to get used to (especially if you've readed any of the author's previous works), the protagonist's personality is practically the same as others protagonists of different previous works by this author, there are small differences, but if you read a previous novel by this author, then you already know the protagonist of this fanfic. The story is not told in an interesting way, at times it is simply boring (in MY opinion), the story is taking place in a moment not explored in the original work, maybe that's why the author is having difficulties in keeping the fanfic interesting(FOR ME), most of the chapters (so far) were just about random and uninteresting quests, maybe it will get more interesting when canon starts again? I don't know... For me one of the biggest problems is that this author has many novels, but he hasn't finished any, most likely this novel will be just one more of the list, well, take a look and have your own opinion.
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Nc a fairy tail ff. Been waiting for a good and new one. lol. But its jord’s novel. So it will constant update till ch 50, then it will slow down like 1 chap in 1-2 months(?). Lol
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thank you for the story. I enjoy it very much. Please update soon. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
o, por mi parte, espero con ansias a Wendy lascivas mayores. Hablando en serio, este es bastante bueno. También tiene un estilo mágico bastante basado y poco apreciado. Le daría una lectura.
I for one, am looking forward to older wendy lewds. In all seriousness this one is pretty good. Its got a pretty based and under appreciated magic style as well. Would give it a read.
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Wasn't expecting the whole 'you' pov but your fics are always good no matter what they're based on so I'll just enjoy the read. Of all your works this is the one I wanna read the most so far. Keep up the good work.
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Necesito más!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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like many, because its jord, 5 stars. because its harem and fairy tail, all i ask and beg for is mirajane and erza to be in the harem.......
yah know coming off of reading the authors other stories even with only 3 chapters this still holds up next to the pokemon story this is the one I'm looking forward to the most
Finding an older Wendy waifu is almost impossible. I hope you will not forget to update other fics too. Hope you will also update this and not drop. 😎🥳🤩😃✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳
Well ain't this gonna be a treat. ..................................................................................................................
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Great start!!! Love that you doing Fairy tail, does not get a lot of love, 5 out of 5. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???!!??!??
As usual a good fic. It's usually kinda difficult for me to adapt to the "you" perspective but I'm not complaining much when the writing is good. Not much happened so far but considering the authors other fics it isn't really hard to imagine where this is going...
Me: Strange Jord didn’t update any novels today. Better check to see if he started writing a new one. Surprise surprise a fairy tail story that only has 2 chapters. should I wait for more chapters or read it and be left begging for more?
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Pls create medaka box fanfic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*:*?*;"*+zywuwuwuwuhhe7e777duhxxhhhhehxhxhxhxbzbdbdbvxxveahxhdbbbabbsehshxbx e2uwiL. :^"~"#"#:#:#;;#(#;^;^;*;=_"'))'@)::_;_;_&_&_&_&_;;);;-&--&-^--^
For now is still god..................................................................................................................................
This story is amazing and I can't wait for more chapters to get uploaded, there aren't nearly enough good fairy tail stories so I'm especially glad with this one
Man, I’m really loving it. It’s very hard to see a Fairy Tail fic here, and one amazing as this one. The 2° point of view threw me of a little at the beginning, but I can ignore it for the sake of reading this amazing fic. Keep going man, good job
Interesting fairy tail fanfic👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The idea is interesting, the author has interesting novels, the writing style is a little different, but it's easy to get used to (especially if you've readed any of the author's previous works), the protagonist's personality is practically the same as others protagonists of different previous works by this author, there are small differences, but if you read a previous novel by this author, then you already know the protagonist of this fanfic. The story is not told in an interesting way, at times it is simply boring (in MY opinion), the story is taking place in a moment not explored in the original work, maybe that's why the author is having difficulties in keeping the fanfic interesting(FOR ME), most of the chapters (so far) were just about random and uninteresting quests, maybe it will get more interesting when canon starts again? I don't know... For me one of the biggest problems is that this author has many novels, but he hasn't finished any, most likely this novel will be just one more of the list, well, take a look and have your own opinion.
Excelent Excelent Excelent Excelent [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nc a fairy tail ff. Been waiting for a good and new one. lol. But its jord’s novel. So it will constant update till ch 50, then it will slow down like 1 chap in 1-2 months(?). Lol
Interesting fairy tail fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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thank you for the story. I enjoy it very much. Please update soon. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
o, por mi parte, espero con ansias a Wendy lascivas mayores. Hablando en serio, este es bastante bueno. También tiene un estilo mágico bastante basado y poco apreciado. Le daría una lectura.
I for one, am looking forward to older wendy lewds. In all seriousness this one is pretty good. Its got a pretty based and under appreciated magic style as well. Would give it a read.
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揭示劇透 Wasn't expecting the whole 'you' pov but your fics are always good no matter what they're based on so I'll just enjoy the read. Of all your works this is the one I wanna read the most so far. Keep up the good work.
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Necesito más!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's good [img=recommend] ...........................................................................................................................
like many, because its jord, 5 stars. because its harem and fairy tail, all i ask and beg for is mirajane and erza to be in the harem.......
yah know coming off of reading the authors other stories even with only 3 chapters this still holds up next to the pokemon story this is the one I'm looking forward to the most
Finding an older Wendy waifu is almost impossible. I hope you will not forget to update other fics too. Hope you will also update this and not drop. 😎🥳🤩😃✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳
Well ain't this gonna be a treat. ..................................................................................................................
it's good ...................................................................................................................................................
Great start!!! Love that you doing Fairy tail, does not get a lot of love, 5 out of 5. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???!!??!??
As usual a good fic. It's usually kinda difficult for me to adapt to the "you" perspective but I'm not complaining much when the writing is good. Not much happened so far but considering the authors other fics it isn't really hard to imagine where this is going...
Me: Strange Jord didn’t update any novels today. Better check to see if he started writing a new one. Surprise surprise a fairy tail story that only has 2 chapters. should I wait for more chapters or read it and be left begging for more?
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