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At first i though it was another childs strory byt as the story progress i seem to like it a lot. With a lots of plot and i cant take the anticipation to read more bout it and so I am still waiting for the following chapter, please upload it soon. Thank you.
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I'm loving it. Natasha's my fav. Valerian is adorable. I'm curious about the red-eyed Theo. Idk what to think about her dad yet. Ash is also cute. The Crown Prince is suspicious, but thankfully he isn't on her sister's side. Delilah, Octavian and her mother are horrible, I hope they have a terrible death!
Amazing, so far. The writing is fluid and I didn't see any grammar errors. I'm loving the plot. The characters are incredible, especially Natasha, Valerian, and the mysterious Theo. Btw, I'm all in for the ship Natheo, it seems like it's gonna be a enemies-to-lovers, and that's the best troupe ever!
Just a shameless reviews from the writer~ I wish you all the best. Hope you like it. Have a great time reading it. And stay safe and healthy wherever you are.
At first i though it was another childs strory byt as the story progress i seem to like it a lot. With a lots of plot and i cant take the anticipation to read more bout it and so I am still waiting for the following chapter, please upload it soon. Thank you.
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I'm loving it. Natasha's my fav. Valerian is adorable. I'm curious about the red-eyed Theo. Idk what to think about her dad yet. Ash is also cute. The Crown Prince is suspicious, but thankfully he isn't on her sister's side. Delilah, Octavian and her mother are horrible, I hope they have a terrible death!
Amazing, so far. The writing is fluid and I didn't see any grammar errors. I'm loving the plot. The characters are incredible, especially Natasha, Valerian, and the mysterious Theo. Btw, I'm all in for the ship Natheo, it seems like it's gonna be a enemies-to-lovers, and that's the best troupe ever!
Just a shameless reviews from the writer~ I wish you all the best. Hope you like it. Have a great time reading it. And stay safe and healthy wherever you are.