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I will share the knowledge that I have about the pet simulator's rewards (not the reality rewards). Most will be one reward if nothing remarkable. if it does something remarkable it will gain half of the rewards listed. If it does two remarkable things, it will gain 2/3 of the rewards. Three remarkable things, I don't know but if going by logic, he will obtain all the rewards on the list. Most remarkable things can't be completed. Common one are surviving for 60 years or beating the hidden boss.
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In the story, the simulator is not explained where it came from. There are not that many complex characters and ending is rushed but everything else is pretty nice.
Overall this is probably a masterpiece only seen once in a blue moon the system is balanced enough but still good enough to be called a cheat/golden finger without makin the story unreadable and the best thing of all is the plot development it never drops insane bombshells without leaving hints already and the Characters aren’t just mindless npc’s but actually contribute to the plot and world background while still making smart decisions. so far I have read from chapter 1 to 243 and I feel like if I finish it I won’t find anything else as good as this.
book ends abruptly even though it could have easily gone on for another 300 to 600 chapters, but at the very least the author summarises what was going to happen in those 300-600 chapters in the last chapter,hence there's no cliffhanger
Great book was hooked from the start the end was kinda lack luster but over would recommend to others
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I mean, the story is rather good, Mc is consistent in his actions and his pets are cute. But why does it ends this way? he just runs that simulation and it's over? shouldn't the story go on and we get to see him performing against the totens or rather going to cloud place and continue the story
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it was pretty good, I feel that it ended rather abruptly. I feel that happens in other books that spend alot of effort in developing the characters and world.
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Red it in only 3 days, now I can somehow smell iron after reading it nonstop and without rest, overwall it's a nice novel to pass time, but the conclusion of it was a little bit anticlimatic and it let A LOT of things open, it was like the autor just wanted to finish it because he didn't want to continue it anymore.
This appeared in my recommended I only checked it because i was looking for Pet/Beast with Cultivation and Evolution stories but i stayed because of the main character's personality along with the exciting evolution paths for the pets. I constantly laugh when i see the mc being greedy. It's a good novel in my opinion.
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solid story. translation was readable, most characters stay relevant, and the 3 pets are all very cute. there’s a lot of overarching tension but on a survivable scale bc the MC is able to use his cheat to figure things out every time. unfortunate that the ending just stopped there bc there should have been like at least 100-200 more chapters that were just summarized with a single simulation.
I loved the whole premise of the book but the ending left many a thing to be desired.
I really enjoyed this book. The way the characters of the story go together. It's a different way looking at the story. I was able to see a new perspective from how the Author would be apart of the story. It is very exciting to see how the Butterfly Effect takes place. Especially when it is the author changing the very nature of a story he himself wrote. I hope to be able to read and experience more from this series.
It was going great but the ending is….how do I put this? It’s so rushed that he finishes what should be the entire last quarter of the book in 1 page. Don’t read unless you are okay without an ending.
Got to give it five stars despite the rush ending but the author gave it a proper ending probably the way he originally wanted but he felt limitations in his skills to expand the story towards it.
The story was well done in that it gave a legitimate reason for what feels like plot armor at first. The quality was pretty decent(plot, translation, etc.), though I feel like the pet stats were a limiting factor in the story, possibly even a factor in it being dropped.(Stars and levels were unnecessary, stat ranks rose too quickly for the level like with S level pets at level 3). It appears that it was suddenly dropped at the last chapter with a perfunctory, but workable ending. **I do think it is worth reading up to that point, however.** As a side note: I think this is the only other novel I've read that did this, along with Avalon of the Five Elements.
This novel has so much potential, but it ended abruptly. 😓 The author didn't let the me some find plot holes on the novel but, why did ended it too soon?! It literally left me hanging, though the ending is complete (no plot holes ). But, in the end it's too short. 🧐🤨😌
I Like How MC Us Well Balanced How It Reference to Digimon just Waiting for More Updates....
This novel is much better than most other "courting death" type cultivation novels. but still, comparing it with other best works in literature or cinema, it's just average 6/10. the cheat of mc is too overpowered and unbelievable. Still, the story maintains interest of reader as mc has to grow up from being very weak. most time, mc remains smart, but mc wastes his limited number of realistic simulations a lot, although that is needed by plot to keep his resources in check. Similarly, 250 episodes later, to help the senior sealed sword, he took really big risks, which were not needed. he could have slowly developed. Other characters are alright, nothing great.
I really love how this book has is a lot different from most other books I have read on here. The back story about how the guy transmigrated to a different world is a lot like other books but the story, the beasts and other things are different from other stories which I love.
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When translator divide chapter in part to make it seems longer while it just have 166 chapter and a rushed ending.........................................
Bro, I really want to crush you into mincemeat. The story was going so well and you just had to drop it. ... Also, the only major loop hole I found in your novel is this. You made it so that the whole earth is covered in dark fog or at least do gli continent is so. Then do you ever thought of what would happen when sun has not [img=faceslap]shone on an area for close to hundreds of years. It will be all frozen. Take poles for example.
This is my second time rereading and on chapter 35 did they compress some things cause he evolved into a brilliant light sparrow that originally wasn’t revealed until early 200’s and late 100’s and he hasn’t met the sword type creature along with meeting the snake (forget his name) in SUPER early chapters
揭示劇透 I will share the knowledge that I have about the pet simulator's rewards (not the reality rewards). Most will be one reward if nothing remarkable. if it does something remarkable it will gain half of the rewards listed. If it does two remarkable things, it will gain 2/3 of the rewards. Three remarkable things, I don't know but if going by logic, he will obtain all the rewards on the list. Most remarkable things can't be completed. Common one are surviving for 60 years or beating the hidden boss.
揭示劇透 In the story, the simulator is not explained where it came from. There are not that many complex characters and ending is rushed but everything else is pretty nice.
Overall this is probably a masterpiece only seen once in a blue moon the system is balanced enough but still good enough to be called a cheat/golden finger without makin the story unreadable and the best thing of all is the plot development it never drops insane bombshells without leaving hints already and the Characters aren’t just mindless npc’s but actually contribute to the plot and world background while still making smart decisions. so far I have read from chapter 1 to 243 and I feel like if I finish it I won’t find anything else as good as this.
book ends abruptly even though it could have easily gone on for another 300 to 600 chapters, but at the very least the author summarises what was going to happen in those 300-600 chapters in the last chapter,hence there's no cliffhanger
Great book was hooked from the start the end was kinda lack luster but over would recommend to others
揭示劇透 I mean, the story is rather good, Mc is consistent in his actions and his pets are cute. But why does it ends this way? he just runs that simulation and it's over? shouldn't the story go on and we get to see him performing against the totens or rather going to cloud place and continue the story
揭示劇透 it was pretty good, I feel that it ended rather abruptly. I feel that happens in other books that spend alot of effort in developing the characters and world.
揭示劇透 Red it in only 3 days, now I can somehow smell iron after reading it nonstop and without rest, overwall it's a nice novel to pass time, but the conclusion of it was a little bit anticlimatic and it let A LOT of things open, it was like the autor just wanted to finish it because he didn't want to continue it anymore.
This appeared in my recommended I only checked it because i was looking for Pet/Beast with Cultivation and Evolution stories but i stayed because of the main character's personality along with the exciting evolution paths for the pets. I constantly laugh when i see the mc being greedy. It's a good novel in my opinion.
揭示劇透 solid story. translation was readable, most characters stay relevant, and the 3 pets are all very cute. there’s a lot of overarching tension but on a survivable scale bc the MC is able to use his cheat to figure things out every time. unfortunate that the ending just stopped there bc there should have been like at least 100-200 more chapters that were just summarized with a single simulation.
I loved the whole premise of the book but the ending left many a thing to be desired.
I really enjoyed this book. The way the characters of the story go together. It's a different way looking at the story. I was able to see a new perspective from how the Author would be apart of the story. It is very exciting to see how the Butterfly Effect takes place. Especially when it is the author changing the very nature of a story he himself wrote. I hope to be able to read and experience more from this series.
It was going great but the ending is….how do I put this? It’s so rushed that he finishes what should be the entire last quarter of the book in 1 page. Don’t read unless you are okay without an ending.
Got to give it five stars despite the rush ending but the author gave it a proper ending probably the way he originally wanted but he felt limitations in his skills to expand the story towards it.
The story was well done in that it gave a legitimate reason for what feels like plot armor at first. The quality was pretty decent(plot, translation, etc.), though I feel like the pet stats were a limiting factor in the story, possibly even a factor in it being dropped.(Stars and levels were unnecessary, stat ranks rose too quickly for the level like with S level pets at level 3). It appears that it was suddenly dropped at the last chapter with a perfunctory, but workable ending. **I do think it is worth reading up to that point, however.** As a side note: I think this is the only other novel I've read that did this, along with Avalon of the Five Elements.
This novel has so much potential, but it ended abruptly. 😓 The author didn't let the me some find plot holes on the novel but, why did ended it too soon?! It literally left me hanging, though the ending is complete (no plot holes ). But, in the end it's too short. 🧐🤨😌
I Like How MC Us Well Balanced How It Reference to Digimon just Waiting for More Updates....
This novel is much better than most other "courting death" type cultivation novels. but still, comparing it with other best works in literature or cinema, it's just average 6/10. the cheat of mc is too overpowered and unbelievable. Still, the story maintains interest of reader as mc has to grow up from being very weak. most time, mc remains smart, but mc wastes his limited number of realistic simulations a lot, although that is needed by plot to keep his resources in check. Similarly, 250 episodes later, to help the senior sealed sword, he took really big risks, which were not needed. he could have slowly developed. Other characters are alright, nothing great.
I really love how this book has is a lot different from most other books I have read on here. The back story about how the guy transmigrated to a different world is a lot like other books but the story, the beasts and other things are different from other stories which I love.
揭示劇透 When translator divide chapter in part to make it seems longer while it just have 166 chapter and a rushed ending.........................................
Bro, I really want to crush you into mincemeat. The story was going so well and you just had to drop it. ... Also, the only major loop hole I found in your novel is this. You made it so that the whole earth is covered in dark fog or at least do gli continent is so. Then do you ever thought of what would happen when sun has not [img=faceslap]shone on an area for close to hundreds of years. It will be all frozen. Take poles for example.
This is my second time rereading and on chapter 35 did they compress some things cause he evolved into a brilliant light sparrow that originally wasn’t revealed until early 200’s and late 100’s and he hasn’t met the sword type creature along with meeting the snake (forget his name) in SUPER early chapters
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