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This started off as an exterminenral novel I was going to write to explore concepts I couldn’t in “Our Journey Beyond Radiance”. It is the first story in a three part trilogy I’ve planned to be my last Webnovel storyline. I’ve decided to use my darkest concepts in this novel “The Otome Game’s Extra”, just so I don’t have to go into them in later novels in the trilogy. Think of this as my Fate/Zero to my Fate/Stay Night, a sequel in that characters in one extend to its sequel. The earlier chapters need some reworking because of some confusing dialogue, but I have since fixed that issue in my writing style. What to expect from this? The story is about someone stumbling through life and trying to go through redemption, even if they sometimes fail due to not being able to live up their desires. Someone who wants to live without feeling emptiness in their heart. You’ll like this novel if you like it when author’s torture their protagonists a lot. Not in the physical kind, but emotionally.
good so far expecting great things from you mr author story is not too fast or slow and it's enjoyable and chapters are long 8.9/10 good stuff
Havent read it yet but i have high hopes for this.Don drop author pls. .....................................................................
This started off as an exterminenral novel I was going to write to explore concepts I couldn’t in “Our Journey Beyond Radiance”. It is the first story in a three part trilogy I’ve planned to be my last Webnovel storyline. I’ve decided to use my darkest concepts in this novel “The Otome Game’s Extra”, just so I don’t have to go into them in later novels in the trilogy. Think of this as my Fate/Zero to my Fate/Stay Night, a sequel in that characters in one extend to its sequel. The earlier chapters need some reworking because of some confusing dialogue, but I have since fixed that issue in my writing style. What to expect from this? The story is about someone stumbling through life and trying to go through redemption, even if they sometimes fail due to not being able to live up their desires. Someone who wants to live without feeling emptiness in their heart. You’ll like this novel if you like it when author’s torture their protagonists a lot. Not in the physical kind, but emotionally.
good so far expecting great things from you mr author story is not too fast or slow and it's enjoyable and chapters are long 8.9/10 good stuff
Havent read it yet but i have high hopes for this.Don drop author pls. .....................................................................