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Love it. Keep up the good work. I'm very excited to see where this story will go and is really happy to see each and every update. Every update brings a smile to my face. [ a tad spoiler-y from here ] Poly isn't something you see everyday and I'm kinda hoping that it'll be written decently, so surprise me, butter. I love Kasumi, she's just great. Loved the backstory for her, the memory loss. All of it is just nicely written. I love her new parents. I'm hoping to see more of the darker elements you've promised be implemented, a little more trauma brings me glee— ehem, I mean... Dark is good. Love it with the concept you have. And that's about it with my review XD Also if you haven't noticed I've been calling you butter. So I'll just call you butter from now on and forever, butter. THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD
Aight so, MC is part of a group couple. basically, they all are dating eachother. MC is the lead tho so it can KINDA be called a harem, just more free. the story starts slow but its gonna start picking up soon as we get away from canon.
a really good fan-fiction with beautiful characters setups and personalities aswell as a good action sequences and romance well created flowing smothly.
It’s good. Nice story, decent character development for the MC. Kind of felt like the polyamorous relationship was a bit rushed. It comes across more as a slice-of-life novel than an action or comedy though. Normally that’s not an issue, but it felt like it lacked… substance? I guess.
I usually don't read books or fabrics with female protagonists especially when its yuri but this fabric is a great one. Sjjajajauuauajauauauusua
From the cover image I had originally thought this was going to be another Kaguya Otsutsuki in another world fan fic, but was pleasantly surprised to find that it was mostly an original character being added to MHA, thankfully the MC isn't grossly over-powered from the start as I'm sure many people are rather sick of such stories being everywhere, but I can see this building up to be a superman in a world of mortals endgame and as such am looking forward to the time, probably around arc 4,where the MC becomes mostly unrivalled.
if you want I can make you a book cover so it's going to be in traditional art aka hand draw ignore what's written down nonononononononono nonono
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love it. good mha fics are hard to be by and I really like how you are doing this. tho I think the punishment for the mom was a bit too cruel and not necessary but maybe I'm just too empathetic?
This is a really good fanfic, I mean I’ve been waiting for a MHA yuri fanfic and here it is. I love the character interactions, the only I fear is the possibility of a harem. As you may have guessed, I am part of the #NoHaremSect. Anyway, keep up the good work, Author Peace Out, Magn0lia
Love it. Keep up the good work. I'm very excited to see where this story will go and is really happy to see each and every update. Every update brings a smile to my face. [ a tad spoiler-y from here ] Poly isn't something you see everyday and I'm kinda hoping that it'll be written decently, so surprise me, butter. I love Kasumi, she's just great. Loved the backstory for her, the memory loss. All of it is just nicely written. I love her new parents. I'm hoping to see more of the darker elements you've promised be implemented, a little more trauma brings me glee— ehem, I mean... Dark is good. Love it with the concept you have. And that's about it with my review XD Also if you haven't noticed I've been calling you butter. So I'll just call you butter from now on and forever, butter. THANK YOU FOR THE FOOD
Aight so, MC is part of a group couple. basically, they all are dating eachother. MC is the lead tho so it can KINDA be called a harem, just more free. the story starts slow but its gonna start picking up soon as we get away from canon.
a really good fan-fiction with beautiful characters setups and personalities aswell as a good action sequences and romance well created flowing smothly.
It’s good. Nice story, decent character development for the MC. Kind of felt like the polyamorous relationship was a bit rushed. It comes across more as a slice-of-life novel than an action or comedy though. Normally that’s not an issue, but it felt like it lacked… substance? I guess.
I usually don't read books or fabrics with female protagonists especially when its yuri but this fabric is a great one. Sjjajajauuauajauauauusua
From the cover image I had originally thought this was going to be another Kaguya Otsutsuki in another world fan fic, but was pleasantly surprised to find that it was mostly an original character being added to MHA, thankfully the MC isn't grossly over-powered from the start as I'm sure many people are rather sick of such stories being everywhere, but I can see this building up to be a superman in a world of mortals endgame and as such am looking forward to the time, probably around arc 4,where the MC becomes mostly unrivalled.
if you want I can make you a book cover so it's going to be in traditional art aka hand draw ignore what's written down nonononononononono nonono
揭示劇透 love it. good mha fics are hard to be by and I really like how you are doing this. tho I think the punishment for the mom was a bit too cruel and not necessary but maybe I'm just too empathetic?
This is a really good fanfic, I mean I’ve been waiting for a MHA yuri fanfic and here it is. I love the character interactions, the only I fear is the possibility of a harem. As you may have guessed, I am part of the #NoHaremSect. Anyway, keep up the good work, Author Peace Out, Magn0lia