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This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.
When are you going to start writing the Primordial Vampire God System again?
bro can you make him a little less simp. I mean he is like everything I do for sake my wife's bla bla bla, he can't criticize them no matter what they do, it's like his very being revolves around some women, if not for his boons those women aren't even worthy of being alive till now ,it's irritating when some unknown women who he woo for some time becomes so important for him that he can die for them.
I am in love with this book, but I currently am deprived of unlocking it. I wish I could afford the price
starting chapter 400 this novel become worst like a sh/t don't read this novel it's make you irritating and your head gonna blow up
Hey Author 👋 will there be something about teacher Arvina I need to know suspense is killing me, or did you just forget about her Pls 🙏 I'm begging you to answer me [img=update][img=nervous][img=nervous]
just amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! !!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that I forgot to rate this masterpiece, but I think you need to update the outdated character thingy
To the honest, i picked this up to kill time but the story got better after stepping out of the 'forgotten continent' and then it became better and better, It's an enjoyable read. P S : i think the discord channel is messed up, not able to see character illustrations. (hoping u fix that soon) : )
[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]
Didnt expect to like this type of novels but now Im hooked [img=recommend][img=update]
Very interesting, author... I love the book so much and the equally likes the author 🥳🥰
I think MC is too childish. I lost my interest in 250ish chapter. Author can't decide whether to write as ERO novel or normal novel. He couldn't blend those two aspect in together. As for s*x scenes, they are repetitive and dull, plain. Describing the scenes are not satisfying. I'm pro harem but female characters are so many and so dull.
I'm enjoying it so far! I got what I was expecting when I picked up this novel(lemons). I'll say that there's not anything wrong with the lemons themselves. However, this novel is also a fantasy story that contains monsters, cultivation, a system, leveling, skills, stats, combat, training, and all that other fun stuff. And all that stuff is good, seems to be well thought out, and has a lot of potential as far as I can tell. The problem is that this novel(at least so far) is about 70% lemons and 30% action and everything else. I'm often reading this and just want Nux to just do some serious training or fight some monsters or something. Just to break things up. I can only take so many lemons at once.
story, characters, world buliding and power scaling system are all good but author really releases chapters so late 😔😔
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Man you're a killer... Honestly this? It's the best [img=update]. One spoiler though,the author missed a tag and that is? Addictive,yes this one gets you addicted lol
A great story, I'm just letting it pile up a little longer to read again I recommend you all to give it a try you won't regret it She gets better with each arc
Just dropping a review into one of my favourite books I have read till now and honestly, I am very impressed with this one. The writing quality, world background and story is amazing. 🤩 One thing I wanna say is that the girls think only about snu snu which is ok but there should be a little bit more into them at regular intervals... Otherwise it's amazing and I will most probably keep reading it till it's completed 😌
We are enjoying this novel very much ,it's written well ,I actually enjoyed very much ,I hope this writing continues for a long period of time except edda I liked every character so much , lots of love from us to the writer for writing beautiful piece of art
Don't listen to the comments here it is one of the best novel out there. The characters also get interesting I especially like vyriana. Please keep up the work author. One of the must read novel
Hmm to be honest story was good at the start but after they left that continent story just drops to like now where. We get introduced to clans and such which was kinda exciting with his blood line and all than boom it just disappeared. From there story just jump around with conversation all over the place. He went from facing people of the same lvl to facing people out of his league. Instead of a steady build up everything that was introduced with so much info just got dumped including black order and all. I hope the plot move on soon it getting really boring. For me and probably alot of people are still just following this to see where it goes excitement for the story already nonexistent. ✌️ Well see where this go make it still Worth a 5 mabe.
Good book[img=recommend][img=recommend], Must ready if you don't like di@kheaded MC
Esta es una JOYA. No esperaba mucho, pero el protagonista es: Inteligente, fuerte, con habilidades geniales, nada de tontos simp ni tontos densos. No tiene variedad de chicas. No tiene objetivo. Es, por lejos, una de las mejores historias de harem que he leído. Y leí muchos harem basura con beta y simp.
can you change the character roles? for Vyriana, Riona , Aisha and the late bloomers.
Nux has been chasing after Mother-Daughter pairs a lot recently: Amaya & Riona, Aisha & Eisheth, Vulpiana & Faelara, Lyriana & Ariana... Oyakodon is great and all, but please mix it up a bit and give us a pair of sisters! As a side note, I really hate that he's trying so hard to make Eisheth his woman, when he made her daughter Aisha have to earn it the hard way. It seems both out of character, and just unfair to his wives, especially Aisha after all the effort she had to put in to win his love.
This is a GEM. I didn’ expect much but the mc is: Smart Strong Cool abilitys No simp or dense idiot Nc variety of girls Nc goal It’s by far one of the best harem story’s I’ve read And I read a lot of trash harem with beta and simp.
This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it. Tips for new readers:- If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time. Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.
When are you going to start writing the Primordial Vampire God System again?
bro can you make him a little less simp. I mean he is like everything I do for sake my wife's bla bla bla, he can't criticize them no matter what they do, it's like his very being revolves around some women, if not for his boons those women aren't even worthy of being alive till now ,it's irritating when some unknown women who he woo for some time becomes so important for him that he can die for them.
I am in love with this book, but I currently am deprived of unlocking it. I wish I could afford the price
starting chapter 400 this novel become worst like a sh/t don't read this novel it's make you irritating and your head gonna blow up
Hey Author 👋 will there be something about teacher Arvina I need to know suspense is killing me, or did you just forget about her Pls 🙏 I'm begging you to answer me [img=update][img=nervous][img=nervous]
just amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! !!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that I forgot to rate this masterpiece, but I think you need to update the outdated character thingy
To the honest, i picked this up to kill time but the story got better after stepping out of the 'forgotten continent' and then it became better and better, It's an enjoyable read. P S : i think the discord channel is messed up, not able to see character illustrations. (hoping u fix that soon) : )
[img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]
Didnt expect to like this type of novels but now Im hooked [img=recommend][img=update]
Very interesting, author... I love the book so much and the equally likes the author 🥳🥰
I think MC is too childish. I lost my interest in 250ish chapter. Author can't decide whether to write as ERO novel or normal novel. He couldn't blend those two aspect in together. As for s*x scenes, they are repetitive and dull, plain. Describing the scenes are not satisfying. I'm pro harem but female characters are so many and so dull.
I'm enjoying it so far! I got what I was expecting when I picked up this novel(lemons). I'll say that there's not anything wrong with the lemons themselves. However, this novel is also a fantasy story that contains monsters, cultivation, a system, leveling, skills, stats, combat, training, and all that other fun stuff. And all that stuff is good, seems to be well thought out, and has a lot of potential as far as I can tell. The problem is that this novel(at least so far) is about 70% lemons and 30% action and everything else. I'm often reading this and just want Nux to just do some serious training or fight some monsters or something. Just to break things up. I can only take so many lemons at once.
story, characters, world buliding and power scaling system are all good but author really releases chapters so late 😔😔
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Man you're a killer... Honestly this? It's the best [img=update]. One spoiler though,the author missed a tag and that is? Addictive,yes this one gets you addicted lol
A great story, I'm just letting it pile up a little longer to read again I recommend you all to give it a try you won't regret it She gets better with each arc
Just dropping a review into one of my favourite books I have read till now and honestly, I am very impressed with this one. The writing quality, world background and story is amazing. 🤩 One thing I wanna say is that the girls think only about snu snu which is ok but there should be a little bit more into them at regular intervals... Otherwise it's amazing and I will most probably keep reading it till it's completed 😌
We are enjoying this novel very much ,it's written well ,I actually enjoyed very much ,I hope this writing continues for a long period of time except edda I liked every character so much , lots of love from us to the writer for writing beautiful piece of art
Don't listen to the comments here it is one of the best novel out there. The characters also get interesting I especially like vyriana. Please keep up the work author. One of the must read novel
Hmm to be honest story was good at the start but after they left that continent story just drops to like now where. We get introduced to clans and such which was kinda exciting with his blood line and all than boom it just disappeared. From there story just jump around with conversation all over the place. He went from facing people of the same lvl to facing people out of his league. Instead of a steady build up everything that was introduced with so much info just got dumped including black order and all. I hope the plot move on soon it getting really boring. For me and probably alot of people are still just following this to see where it goes excitement for the story already nonexistent. ✌️ Well see where this go make it still Worth a 5 mabe.
Good book[img=recommend][img=recommend], Must ready if you don't like di@kheaded MC
Esta es una JOYA. No esperaba mucho, pero el protagonista es: Inteligente, fuerte, con habilidades geniales, nada de tontos simp ni tontos densos. No tiene variedad de chicas. No tiene objetivo. Es, por lejos, una de las mejores historias de harem que he leído. Y leí muchos harem basura con beta y simp.
can you change the character roles? for Vyriana, Riona , Aisha and the late bloomers.
Nux has been chasing after Mother-Daughter pairs a lot recently: Amaya & Riona, Aisha & Eisheth, Vulpiana & Faelara, Lyriana & Ariana... Oyakodon is great and all, but please mix it up a bit and give us a pair of sisters! As a side note, I really hate that he's trying so hard to make Eisheth his woman, when he made her daughter Aisha have to earn it the hard way. It seems both out of character, and just unfair to his wives, especially Aisha after all the effort she had to put in to win his love.
This is a GEM. I didn’ expect much but the mc is: Smart Strong Cool abilitys No simp or dense idiot Nc variety of girls Nc goal It’s by far one of the best harem story’s I’ve read And I read a lot of trash harem with beta and simp.