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once you get into the later chapters it starts cutting things out so you don't get the full context of what's going on and have to guess what was said or going on
This is okay novel. MC is a simp, letting the females walk all over him. It’s just retardant behavior. Kill the men and let the woman boss him around. Fake gentlemen BS. Can’t relate to these simps.
I had to give up after 200 chapters. I thought the Mc would stop being a simp and shield for girls but he hasn't developed at all. waste of money.
For some weird reason, the author abandons the whole “hint” schtick and turns it into a generic urban cultivation novel a couple hundred chapters in. I wanted to see more of the hints, since that was an interesting mechanic to me and what drew me to the novel in the first place. But instead, the MC essentially became an arrogant cultivator with plot armor of invincibility +5.
I read it until chapter 485, i can assured the translation is good enough to read. at least it not pure MTL but sometimes confused between he and she... the story tho.... repetition after a while
I couldn't even get through chapter 2 because of how awful this translation is. Webnovel is notorious for its horrible translations but usually they are handled ok the first 40 chapters. This one, clearly no editing has been done. It's horrible to read, don't bother or you're brain will turn to mush.
I like the story cuz there is some kind of build up and I like overpowered MCs but the grammar is horrible and the pronouns are all over the place. I wish the writer/author would do better.
Story is fun to read but there are so many mistakes especially in latter parts like how some already know mc true power yet they are constantly surprised and it is shown that they don’t know or heard but didn’t see
-no fight at all, only bang bang bang & it's over. -the writer add too much girls that we lost the beaty of it. -cultivation realms not that good either .
I have read many Chinese novels to understand what this type of novel is. First of all, authors of these bland, filler types of novels are just running after the word count and the number of chapters to get more 💵💵 Then, after the story is over they will write in the testimonial about how this was not a good story but they had to since it was contracted etc. Just be careful, any person with common sense would know the type of novel is from reading the common wish fulfillment type of title.
Writing is good but the content is a collection of copied cliches. That could be ok but somehow the cliche-collection (I don't want to call it a story) is just too boring to be read.
where can I find good translation of this novel.can anyone please tell me....
Currently at chapter 27. This is a classic cliche Chinese novel, but it's still better than most of the other ones, you feel me? It's a good read if you want to read something if there is nothing other, you feel me? The translation is quite decent, compared to other Chinese ones, you feel me? Updates: Idk, just started reading it recently. Characters and World: Nothing, technically nothing... (My native language is not English, and I'm not writing reviews often, so I know, I'm sloppy.)
It’s good so far I’m at chapter 34 at the moment, don’t know about the negative comments they seem silly. Dam have to use 140 characters
Name MC: Lia hao If that's not enough of a clue, then I'll say the story is an absolute waste of time and space. I don't understand why authors or translators use Chinese/Korean/Asian names, words and phrases in a story written in English, for a non-Asian audience. No person native to the mainland from America, Europe or Oceania relates well to Asian society and does not relate to its customs either; That is why it is said that Asia is another world.
This novel is completely made up of templates and clichés. Absolutely nothing original. The protagonist is identical to thousands of similar Chinese heroes. The characters are disposable too. And of course, random encounters that benefit the main character. There are no normal negative characters here. They are all brainless and follow a pattern. The personalities of the characters are completely undefined. The story is at the elementary level. Very dry and soulless. I do not advise anyone.
Not too bad! have not read novels in a while but this is ok. will read on to see more story development.............................................
I tried reading this cause I like system plots and it has a modern martial arts twist in it.. but daaaanng I hate how every woman in this novel being portrayed as hard to get but at the same time so easy to convince, just tell them that MC is rich, super rich, extremely rich then they become Oh my gosh I'm so in love with this guy. Acting so mad and possessive when there are other women in the picture so they immediately throw themselves at the MC.. really.. each one of these women are portrayed like this!! All women in MC's harem: "He's extremely rich, handsome and so powerful, my ideal man, but I won't let him touch me, let him drool all he wants" As a woman, I don't mind reading harem stories as long as women in the story aren't portrayed as gold digger prostitutes disguised as pure lilies.. it's so degrading.. not that being part of a harem is degrading enough
well .. what is there to add. + reviews below..............................................................................................................
I really thought you had something then not only is it so slow at updating but you use repeat chapters for some. quite frustrating honestly
could be a lot better but has no good story building plus the author keep repeating chapters and never fix them so don't look you coins before checking is not a repeat
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the dumbest book I've read on here, if you can even call it that, logic - doesn't apply common sense - doesn't apply 8th grade syndrome - a bit overkill delusional writer - he wasn't even trying
Bland. started off well. interesting concept. but story couldnt be carried well. author's main focus is on how many women can the MC collect. the mc literally doesnt see any female characters as friends but how good their bodies are and how to kiss them. has very good businesses under him granted by system. but doesnt care. registered as student. no classes. was an orphan. mentions missing the orphanage once but doesnt even care to go back to look at it or help them. all he does is go after one female after the another. and every female is attracted to him because he has money and is handsome.. dont mention anything about his character. plot repeats again and again.
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Started out ok but the father along it got the worse the translation becomes and the author just ends chapters and the next one starts half way through with lots of mistakes
once you get into the later chapters it starts cutting things out so you don't get the full context of what's going on and have to guess what was said or going on
This is okay novel. MC is a simp, letting the females walk all over him. It’s just retardant behavior. Kill the men and let the woman boss him around. Fake gentlemen BS. Can’t relate to these simps.
I had to give up after 200 chapters. I thought the Mc would stop being a simp and shield for girls but he hasn't developed at all. waste of money.
For some weird reason, the author abandons the whole “hint” schtick and turns it into a generic urban cultivation novel a couple hundred chapters in. I wanted to see more of the hints, since that was an interesting mechanic to me and what drew me to the novel in the first place. But instead, the MC essentially became an arrogant cultivator with plot armor of invincibility +5.
I read it until chapter 485, i can assured the translation is good enough to read. at least it not pure MTL but sometimes confused between he and she... the story tho.... repetition after a while
I couldn't even get through chapter 2 because of how awful this translation is. Webnovel is notorious for its horrible translations but usually they are handled ok the first 40 chapters. This one, clearly no editing has been done. It's horrible to read, don't bother or you're brain will turn to mush.
I like the story cuz there is some kind of build up and I like overpowered MCs but the grammar is horrible and the pronouns are all over the place. I wish the writer/author would do better.
Story is fun to read but there are so many mistakes especially in latter parts like how some already know mc true power yet they are constantly surprised and it is shown that they don’t know or heard but didn’t see
-no fight at all, only bang bang bang & it's over. -the writer add too much girls that we lost the beaty of it. -cultivation realms not that good either .
I have read many Chinese novels to understand what this type of novel is. First of all, authors of these bland, filler types of novels are just running after the word count and the number of chapters to get more 💵💵 Then, after the story is over they will write in the testimonial about how this was not a good story but they had to since it was contracted etc. Just be careful, any person with common sense would know the type of novel is from reading the common wish fulfillment type of title.
Writing is good but the content is a collection of copied cliches. That could be ok but somehow the cliche-collection (I don't want to call it a story) is just too boring to be read.
where can I find good translation of this novel.can anyone please tell me....
Currently at chapter 27. This is a classic cliche Chinese novel, but it's still better than most of the other ones, you feel me? It's a good read if you want to read something if there is nothing other, you feel me? The translation is quite decent, compared to other Chinese ones, you feel me? Updates: Idk, just started reading it recently. Characters and World: Nothing, technically nothing... (My native language is not English, and I'm not writing reviews often, so I know, I'm sloppy.)
It’s good so far I’m at chapter 34 at the moment, don’t know about the negative comments they seem silly. Dam have to use 140 characters
Name MC: Lia hao If that's not enough of a clue, then I'll say the story is an absolute waste of time and space. I don't understand why authors or translators use Chinese/Korean/Asian names, words and phrases in a story written in English, for a non-Asian audience. No person native to the mainland from America, Europe or Oceania relates well to Asian society and does not relate to its customs either; That is why it is said that Asia is another world.
This novel is completely made up of templates and clichés. Absolutely nothing original. The protagonist is identical to thousands of similar Chinese heroes. The characters are disposable too. And of course, random encounters that benefit the main character. There are no normal negative characters here. They are all brainless and follow a pattern. The personalities of the characters are completely undefined. The story is at the elementary level. Very dry and soulless. I do not advise anyone.
Not too bad! have not read novels in a while but this is ok. will read on to see more story development.............................................
I tried reading this cause I like system plots and it has a modern martial arts twist in it.. but daaaanng I hate how every woman in this novel being portrayed as hard to get but at the same time so easy to convince, just tell them that MC is rich, super rich, extremely rich then they become Oh my gosh I'm so in love with this guy. Acting so mad and possessive when there are other women in the picture so they immediately throw themselves at the MC.. really.. each one of these women are portrayed like this!! All women in MC's harem: "He's extremely rich, handsome and so powerful, my ideal man, but I won't let him touch me, let him drool all he wants" As a woman, I don't mind reading harem stories as long as women in the story aren't portrayed as gold digger prostitutes disguised as pure lilies.. it's so degrading.. not that being part of a harem is degrading enough
well .. what is there to add. + reviews below..............................................................................................................
I really thought you had something then not only is it so slow at updating but you use repeat chapters for some. quite frustrating honestly
could be a lot better but has no good story building plus the author keep repeating chapters and never fix them so don't look you coins before checking is not a repeat
We're off to the good start....... ........... ........ .. ............. More............................. ............ .................[img=update]
Fhsjsjshsjsbdbdndjdbdhdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbxbxbxhdhchcjcjfkkdkdldkdkdjdjdhdndjdndndnndjdndndndjdjdjbddbbdbdbxbxbxbxbxbdbdjdbdhjdjdjdjdbdbrbrbrbdbbdbdbd
the dumbest book I've read on here, if you can even call it that, logic - doesn't apply common sense - doesn't apply 8th grade syndrome - a bit overkill delusional writer - he wasn't even trying
Bland. started off well. interesting concept. but story couldnt be carried well. author's main focus is on how many women can the MC collect. the mc literally doesnt see any female characters as friends but how good their bodies are and how to kiss them. has very good businesses under him granted by system. but doesnt care. registered as student. no classes. was an orphan. mentions missing the orphanage once but doesnt even care to go back to look at it or help them. all he does is go after one female after the another. and every female is attracted to him because he has money and is handsome.. dont mention anything about his character. plot repeats again and again.
hshshshhshhsahshshshshshshshahahhshshhsshhshshshshhshshhsshhshshahahhaahhahshshshshshhshshshsshshhshshshhshsshshhshshshshshhshshshshhshshssh
Started out ok but the father along it got the worse the translation becomes and the author just ends chapters and the next one starts half way through with lots of mistakes