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I kinda wanna hear the story of this God kairos first before his son, to be honest...........................................................
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its not very good and it doesnt seem like it will be. and whats up with people who write pjo fics having to invent new gods? theres hundreds and you dont have the creativity to use one?
LV 4 ![Badge]()
I kinda wanna hear the story of this God kairos first before his son, to be honest...........................................................
its not very good and it doesnt seem like it will be. and whats up with people who write pjo fics having to invent new gods? theres hundreds and you dont have the creativity to use one?