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It's good, the only problem that it has is the grammar which can be terrible at times but if you can look past that its good. I don't know if English is the author's first or second language but maybe use Grammarly or something.
never seen a better start to a basketball novel before.. just perfect writing, mix of events and progression, keep it going author.
can you make it a wish fulfilment and slice of life??? you know just going to nba and sleep with celebs and models no serious relationship until late chapters😋
It's good, the only problem that it has is the grammar which can be terrible at times but if you can look past that its good. I don't know if English is the author's first or second language but maybe use Grammarly or something.
never seen a better start to a basketball novel before.. just perfect writing, mix of events and progression, keep it going author.
can you make it a wish fulfilment and slice of life??? you know just going to nba and sleep with celebs and models no serious relationship until late chapters😋
The best basketball work I’ve ever read and we only in 19 chapters