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Dont waste your time, I will give you a summary. MC has super OP cheat that can make him invincible immediately as long as he has 1 IQ point. MC is unfortunately born with the extremely rare condition of 0 IQ points.
Don't read this expecting something new and never done, just a classic story done and written well.
regular update plz or raw name...............................................................................................................................
Most useles book I’ve read, the author gave the main character powerful talents like the chaos body but he’ s struggling to defeat a person 2 minor realms above him. It’s stupid
Another utterly braindead barely human mongoloid gets an utterly broken system. He should of just stayed dead with this lukewarm IQ.
he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
With this power, he his even capable of changing the great Dao and fate. A wonderful story with a wonderful plot and background with wonderful twist and turns[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great. It's different and we can see more about the oppportunities of other characters. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Average book with op mc telling himself he’s the good guy but really is the worst of al them. None of the characters are written well they are all very on dimensional. The worst offense is that of the 22 days that have occurred this month of september chapters have been uploaded on 3 of them. The only redeeming quality is that it is legible.
The author made everyone a retard to make the mc look smart however it only emphasized his own stupidity. The mc actually thinks he’s a good person when he’s stealing everyone’s opportunities and women. As the story progresses it’s looking more and more boring to read and the mc with his top talent is actually not top talent because the author makes everyone a reincarnated great emporer or have the divine god heavenly bloodline that should only be seen once in a chaos cycle. The mc talent is bad he got pengu body for muscle. The ancient eyes for eyes. Heavenly root for better qi. Top talents in sword and stuff for comprehension. Supreme bones for his bones however he didn’ get any special soul or will which is usually that main focus in later cultivation stages. Overall I can’t see the plot going anywhere and it will just stagnant overtime till everyone is OBA
揭示劇透 This novel is really just a power trip and wish fulfillment. So if your looking for something decently written. Then you will be disappointed. As the amount of plot holes are too many to count. And the author will keep increasing the power level of the enemies anytime the mc gets stronger and keep trying to make up ways to give the mc an enemy.
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities. So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.
Please be updatIng we need this novel to always be updated on time….6&&9986((5567;:2;$8&(444;688&9;:357898443:189@);;5773/$$;;45777g dad huifx
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All i can say it feels quite so much like the novel "I am really not the son of providence" but of low quality. The first wish was ok and the 2nd and 3rd wish feels like the mc is really dumb and the mc always say he knows the plot and read novel previous life maybe his iq's bird brained? Otherwise why would he do dumb things? And these dumb things happened all in just a couple of chapters. Anyway later he can see providence of others character , just like the above mentioned novel mc ability, only difference is in this novel he can steal but no consequence. I mean if you want others luck obviously after taking ,the individual whose luck was stolen/plummeted will face bad situation/luck. And hence while obviously in order to gain something ,someone else will need to loose but...in this novel just feels so so and too bland.
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Not bad…. Wastes his power a bit on two cultivation pills and he steals an opportunity from a dude when he could easily use his power to leave a second one for him… seems petty…otherwise quite fun
The book while does look like the mc will be egotistical he does stand up for somethings that are right so I can say I am looking forward to seeing it finish and be a great novel also great work writer!!!! (I intentionally put no punctuation marks so chill if that's your reply)
ok, so... it has some inconsistencies. the story really hasn't progressed far enough to judge the world building aspect. the mc is not the brightest light bulb in the house. but the moments regarding the "opportunities" he, um, liberates are kind of humorous. I'll probably continue reading later, at least for a while, just because of that aspect.
interesting idea, but. the editor and translator of this novel has done nothing but copy paste this novel from mtl and they only do bare bone job in fixing the error on grammar or mistranslation. i already have so many novels like this in my library. around a dozen. did you know that i actually read some of them directly from mtl and doesn't bother to read the novel in this site anymore. its because the quality of the translation on this site (webnovel dot com) is NOT much better than MTL. heck mtl is much better because the story development is already progress much further than Webnovel, and sometimes webnovel divide one chapter from mtl into 3-4 part.
It's not deserving to be picked when so many great novels are not. The MC is cruel, overpowered and bland. There is literally nothing human about him.
if possible, make the mc have a steadier or calm character. you can also make it the character to be funnier. the character the mc displays is a little worrying, you can't allow him to be courting death all the time right? he is to egoistic, arrogant.... This is just my advice, I also hope your novel gets picked
It finally got picked hope the story isn't rush or short [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The author has really taken a long break and now it's ready for the continuation and I hope this get book gets voted and be chosen. I wish the good luck and happy that he started to write the continuation chapter's
Kinda liked it from the get go Awesome read for anyone who is truly down to read it Wish for author-San to come and finish what he started with this
Does anyone know what is the chinese title or have raw link of this novel? Because this novel was not picked so I'm kinda disappointed and wanted to read the progress of the story.
It may be dropped, its been some time till it got last updated..............................................................................
Dont waste your time, I will give you a summary. MC has super OP cheat that can make him invincible immediately as long as he has 1 IQ point. MC is unfortunately born with the extremely rare condition of 0 IQ points.
Don't read this expecting something new and never done, just a classic story done and written well.
regular update plz or raw name...............................................................................................................................
Most useles book I’ve read, the author gave the main character powerful talents like the chaos body but he’ s struggling to defeat a person 2 minor realms above him. It’s stupid
Another utterly braindead barely human mongoloid gets an utterly broken system. He should of just stayed dead with this lukewarm IQ.
he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
With this power, he his even capable of changing the great Dao and fate. A wonderful story with a wonderful plot and background with wonderful twist and turns[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great. It's different and we can see more about the oppportunities of other characters. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Average book with op mc telling himself he’s the good guy but really is the worst of al them. None of the characters are written well they are all very on dimensional. The worst offense is that of the 22 days that have occurred this month of september chapters have been uploaded on 3 of them. The only redeeming quality is that it is legible.
The author made everyone a retard to make the mc look smart however it only emphasized his own stupidity. The mc actually thinks he’s a good person when he’s stealing everyone’s opportunities and women. As the story progresses it’s looking more and more boring to read and the mc with his top talent is actually not top talent because the author makes everyone a reincarnated great emporer or have the divine god heavenly bloodline that should only be seen once in a chaos cycle. The mc talent is bad he got pengu body for muscle. The ancient eyes for eyes. Heavenly root for better qi. Top talents in sword and stuff for comprehension. Supreme bones for his bones however he didn’ get any special soul or will which is usually that main focus in later cultivation stages. Overall I can’t see the plot going anywhere and it will just stagnant overtime till everyone is OBA
揭示劇透 This novel is really just a power trip and wish fulfillment. So if your looking for something decently written. Then you will be disappointed. As the amount of plot holes are too many to count. And the author will keep increasing the power level of the enemies anytime the mc gets stronger and keep trying to make up ways to give the mc an enemy.
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities. So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.
Please be updatIng we need this novel to always be updated on time….6&&9986((5567;:2;$8&(444;688&9;:357898443:189@);;5773/$$;;45777g dad huifx
raw name ..........................................................raw...........................................rawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..........
All i can say it feels quite so much like the novel "I am really not the son of providence" but of low quality. The first wish was ok and the 2nd and 3rd wish feels like the mc is really dumb and the mc always say he knows the plot and read novel previous life maybe his iq's bird brained? Otherwise why would he do dumb things? And these dumb things happened all in just a couple of chapters. Anyway later he can see providence of others character , just like the above mentioned novel mc ability, only difference is in this novel he can steal but no consequence. I mean if you want others luck obviously after taking ,the individual whose luck was stolen/plummeted will face bad situation/luck. And hence while obviously in order to gain something ,someone else will need to loose but...in this novel just feels so so and too bland.
揭示劇透 Not bad…. Wastes his power a bit on two cultivation pills and he steals an opportunity from a dude when he could easily use his power to leave a second one for him… seems petty…otherwise quite fun
The book while does look like the mc will be egotistical he does stand up for somethings that are right so I can say I am looking forward to seeing it finish and be a great novel also great work writer!!!! (I intentionally put no punctuation marks so chill if that's your reply)
ok, so... it has some inconsistencies. the story really hasn't progressed far enough to judge the world building aspect. the mc is not the brightest light bulb in the house. but the moments regarding the "opportunities" he, um, liberates are kind of humorous. I'll probably continue reading later, at least for a while, just because of that aspect.
interesting idea, but. the editor and translator of this novel has done nothing but copy paste this novel from mtl and they only do bare bone job in fixing the error on grammar or mistranslation. i already have so many novels like this in my library. around a dozen. did you know that i actually read some of them directly from mtl and doesn't bother to read the novel in this site anymore. its because the quality of the translation on this site (webnovel dot com) is NOT much better than MTL. heck mtl is much better because the story development is already progress much further than Webnovel, and sometimes webnovel divide one chapter from mtl into 3-4 part.
It's not deserving to be picked when so many great novels are not. The MC is cruel, overpowered and bland. There is literally nothing human about him.
if possible, make the mc have a steadier or calm character. you can also make it the character to be funnier. the character the mc displays is a little worrying, you can't allow him to be courting death all the time right? he is to egoistic, arrogant.... This is just my advice, I also hope your novel gets picked
It finally got picked hope the story isn't rush or short [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The author has really taken a long break and now it's ready for the continuation and I hope this get book gets voted and be chosen. I wish the good luck and happy that he started to write the continuation chapter's
Kinda liked it from the get go Awesome read for anyone who is truly down to read it Wish for author-San to come and finish what he started with this
Does anyone know what is the chinese title or have raw link of this novel? Because this novel was not picked so I'm kinda disappointed and wanted to read the progress of the story.
It may be dropped, its been some time till it got last updated..............................................................................
i love the talents but his imagination is really his limit