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sad this got dropped but was really good for the entire time it was going author really knew how to make the story good and the characters real. i hope by some miracle he sees this review and gets enough motivation to continue but i doubt that. have a good day everyone !
It's a shame this story had so much potential that it makes me sad, people, well, nothing can be done. Stras 5/1/5/5/4 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
this is the best DC fan fiction novel I have ever read please 🥺🥺🥺 please and please don't drop it
good story but dropped when he turn a 12 year old zatanna in non emotional killer. too Quick of a change for me
I love this fic and I’m really tired of amazing fics like this being dropped I never want to force an author to do something they don’t want but pls write more.
one one of the best books, hands down. honestly, it has a lot of twist turns that I couldn't predict. Most of the time, I can bc It would be cliche. I love the story. When I saw it first, I honestly thought it was gonna be another story that I wouldn't like. If I did like, it would have been dropped. it well developed. keep it up, love it, and thank you.
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Best young justice fic I have seen. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The world background seem a bit odd and lacks detail sometimes. The author could have detailed properly that the MC was in DC universe. Although that could be quite an issue to some that was not my main issue with this novel. The thing is, when you create a FF with a template thing, you expect them to at least have characteristics of the one whom the template is. This novel detailed an Uchiha template and not a template for Sasuke. If you really know Naruto, in the part where they were kids, Sasuke was already a genius because of his comprehension and talent. Here, the template being named Sasuke means almost nothing. There was no increase in comprehension, no increase in talents, and the author could have at least made it like the template was influencing the MC. Its pretty boring since the growth of the MC seem so slow even after having an Uchiha Template. And the fact that the story barely detailed DC characters specially on the first parts of the novel made it worse. The point of this should have been to make the readers want for more and set expectations.
I just have one question in your cover you wrote copy wheel eye will MC really gane the ability to copy others power........................... or not
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Read until ch 46, and I love this. Enjoying the progression, keen on what might happen with the Justice league. So far really enjoying the story! keep up the amazing work! [img=update][img=recommend]
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Really enjoy the idea of a Uchiha in the DC universe and proper progression along with it. However, you never get proper clarifications about the main character, is he an OC that was put in DC with a family? how does he know about the Naruto universe? Is he a Isekai character of any kind? So far the whole ordeal goes on like we should know what the author is thinking. and read with his mindset on things, just blatantly ignoring how the main character came to be.
[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
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I really am enjoying this fanfic I don’t see anything wrong with this maybe because I have read countless amount of Chinese mangas. But I have enjoyed every chapter in this fanfic. so please don’t drop this. Ps. how old is the MC at chapter 33
who is the love interest [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Exp And vere good book DmmdlslxldldundınğdnpbhgjvjvğgvgğuugvfuvupusvtusğtusğuvsvsutvsutvğutsvğutvsğtusğutvsğvutsğusbugpdfşikdhsnığhndH dğnkhhdnohdndhondnofnuofenounjefoojefjefnd
I'm really enjoying this fic. There are a surprising little amount of good sasuke template/reincarnation fics. I usually don't like template fics that much because they usually just turn the mc into the character the template is for but this fic seems to be doing a good job of letting Sora be his own person. And for those complaing about him being edgy that's just how 99% of the uchiha behave (except for shisui but he's a rare exception). The sharingan itself is deeply linked with emotions and will cause the wielder to feel them to the extreme wheather that be love or hate (this was all explained by the 2nd hokage). Anyways sorry for the tangent I'm excited to see where this fic will go![img=update][img=update][img=update]
5 star Gud Very gud Absolute gud Dont drop it Or I Will Find Your location And Launch A Missile 140..............................................
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En qué momento el MC dice que es el Young Justice?. A este paso regresaré cuando la novela tenga 200 capitulos, en ese momento cambiare mi reseña ya que hasta ahora lo que más me recordó fue la relleno de Naruto.
this is not sasuke. he is always contradicting himself and let zatanna force her way into his home and stay there for plot and then she sides with mc instead of her father
sad this got dropped but was really good for the entire time it was going author really knew how to make the story good and the characters real. i hope by some miracle he sees this review and gets enough motivation to continue but i doubt that. have a good day everyone !
It's a shame this story had so much potential that it makes me sad, people, well, nothing can be done. Stras 5/1/5/5/4 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
this is the best DC fan fiction novel I have ever read please 🥺🥺🥺 please and please don't drop it
good story but dropped when he turn a 12 year old zatanna in non emotional killer. too Quick of a change for me
I love this fic and I’m really tired of amazing fics like this being dropped I never want to force an author to do something they don’t want but pls write more.
one one of the best books, hands down. honestly, it has a lot of twist turns that I couldn't predict. Most of the time, I can bc It would be cliche. I love the story. When I saw it first, I honestly thought it was gonna be another story that I wouldn't like. If I did like, it would have been dropped. it well developed. keep it up, love it, and thank you.
Perfect cap......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Best young justice fic I have seen. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The world background seem a bit odd and lacks detail sometimes. The author could have detailed properly that the MC was in DC universe. Although that could be quite an issue to some that was not my main issue with this novel. The thing is, when you create a FF with a template thing, you expect them to at least have characteristics of the one whom the template is. This novel detailed an Uchiha template and not a template for Sasuke. If you really know Naruto, in the part where they were kids, Sasuke was already a genius because of his comprehension and talent. Here, the template being named Sasuke means almost nothing. There was no increase in comprehension, no increase in talents, and the author could have at least made it like the template was influencing the MC. Its pretty boring since the growth of the MC seem so slow even after having an Uchiha Template. And the fact that the story barely detailed DC characters specially on the first parts of the novel made it worse. The point of this should have been to make the readers want for more and set expectations.
I just have one question in your cover you wrote copy wheel eye will MC really gane the ability to copy others power........................... or not
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Read until ch 46, and I love this. Enjoying the progression, keen on what might happen with the Justice league. So far really enjoying the story! keep up the amazing work! [img=update][img=recommend]
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Really enjoy the idea of a Uchiha in the DC universe and proper progression along with it. However, you never get proper clarifications about the main character, is he an OC that was put in DC with a family? how does he know about the Naruto universe? Is he a Isekai character of any kind? So far the whole ordeal goes on like we should know what the author is thinking. and read with his mindset on things, just blatantly ignoring how the main character came to be.
[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
揭示劇透 I really am enjoying this fanfic I don’t see anything wrong with this maybe because I have read countless amount of Chinese mangas. But I have enjoyed every chapter in this fanfic. so please don’t drop this. Ps. how old is the MC at chapter 33
who is the love interest [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Exp And vere good book DmmdlslxldldundınğdnpbhgjvjvğgvgğuugvfuvupusvtusğtusğuvsvsutvsutvğutsvğutvsğtusğutvsğvutsğusbugpdfşikdhsnığhndH dğnkhhdnohdndhondnofnuofenounjefoojefjefnd
I'm really enjoying this fic. There are a surprising little amount of good sasuke template/reincarnation fics. I usually don't like template fics that much because they usually just turn the mc into the character the template is for but this fic seems to be doing a good job of letting Sora be his own person. And for those complaing about him being edgy that's just how 99% of the uchiha behave (except for shisui but he's a rare exception). The sharingan itself is deeply linked with emotions and will cause the wielder to feel them to the extreme wheather that be love or hate (this was all explained by the 2nd hokage). Anyways sorry for the tangent I'm excited to see where this fic will go![img=update][img=update][img=update]
5 star Gud Very gud Absolute gud Dont drop it Or I Will Find Your location And Launch A Missile 140..............................................
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En qué momento el MC dice que es el Young Justice?. A este paso regresaré cuando la novela tenga 200 capitulos, en ese momento cambiare mi reseña ya que hasta ahora lo que más me recordó fue la relleno de Naruto.
this is not sasuke. he is always contradicting himself and let zatanna force her way into his home and stay there for plot and then she sides with mc instead of her father