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I will start with the bad, not a lot of bad, general stuff like the wrong word being used, you can tell what word should be used but it is like autocorrect has had a stroke. Some chapters are out of order, easy enough to work out the order but mildly annoying. Not major things, and much, much better than the majority of novels on here. The good is easy, well written easy to read good book. MC isn't an arrogant young master, though he could easily be, not some clueless retard that has no idea and not some plot hole driven fan service to his own flawed logic. Definitely a good read and one of my rare book recommendations. 👍
I will start with the bad, not a lot of bad, general stuff like the wrong word being used, you can tell what word should be used but it is like autocorrect has had a stroke. Some chapters are out of order, easy enough to work out the order but mildly annoying. Not major things, and much, much better than the majority of novels on here. The good is easy, well written easy to read good book. MC isn't an arrogant young master, though he could easily be, not some clueless retard that has no idea and not some plot hole driven fan service to his own flawed logic. Definitely a good read and one of my rare book recommendations. 👍
i love the premiss of this webnovel thanks for the experience