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Good story. A bit arrogant and psycho MC. But overall, a very good novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good stuff not gonna lie. It's one of those book that you can read when you wanna just chill
Hello Everyone. Author here to thank you all for your support and feedback. I have many plans for this novel, and hope you can be patient with the 2 chapters per day upload schedule. This book is for all of you!
I like how the system is used here like how it is depicted while mc fights which makes it simple to understand the battle, but sometimes it should be kept at a minimum since it is literally filling up the whole chapters instead of the battle scene the whole chapter is filled with the system notifying how much mana he has such and such.
4-star review. The story is great, good power system, likeable characters, nice pacing and so forth. There may be a few grammar errors, but it is at a small mimimum; I enjoyed the book, and I believe it has potential.
Good story. A bit arrogant and psycho MC. But overall, a very good novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good stuff not gonna lie. It's one of those book that you can read when you wanna just chill
Hello Everyone. Author here to thank you all for your support and feedback. I have many plans for this novel, and hope you can be patient with the 2 chapters per day upload schedule. This book is for all of you!
I like how the system is used here like how it is depicted while mc fights which makes it simple to understand the battle, but sometimes it should be kept at a minimum since it is literally filling up the whole chapters instead of the battle scene the whole chapter is filled with the system notifying how much mana he has such and such.
4-star review. The story is great, good power system, likeable characters, nice pacing and so forth. There may be a few grammar errors, but it is at a small mimimum; I enjoyed the book, and I believe it has potential.
Nice story. I like the way the system works and the pacing is also nice