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Yo to be honest it’s a pretty good story but why you botting reviews[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Wow, This is pathetic, using bots to review(I checked some of the reviews and the only activity they have is reviewing this novel) and while the novel has only 3 chapters it already has 29 reviews each with 25-30 likes, who are you trying to fool, I haven't read the novel but I don't think I will either.(Won't be surprised if this review is deleted) I would have given 0 stars if I could.
Well ... it was about time I gave a review to this wonderful fic! I have nothing to complain about, honestly... I liked everything I've read so far!
I’m not really a review kind of person but currently I’m enjoying it and I would recommend giving it a read if you haven’t.
Good novel, very fun and interesting. Shame since the grammar is not that good, but it is not awful either. 🦾 Author deserves to have this novel in top 10.
Well I have to say it was an amazing fanfic that is saying something since I am generally not interested in One Piece. Though the story started abruptly it had a nice pace.
This story was nice. It wasn't revolutionary or anything but it was satisfying and I don't regret the time spent reading it. If you have some free time I would really recommend checking it out.
The concept it self is good, the actions scenes and the decision made by the mc are not stupid. overall an enjoyable read.
best op fanfic mc is cool and does not care about the canon he uses info to his advantage literally the best fanfic I ever read
Thanks for posting your fanfic here! For the fanfic itself: The writing quality is average, but no great hindrance to your reading at all. The story development is good for a Naruto fanfic. The character design is a bit bland and the motivations and character developments dont get explored in depth, but still not bad. Nothing needs to be said about world background since this is a fanfiction, but some things from the original plot got forcibly dragged into the new plot. A good fanfiction over-all
It was a great take on Naruto The MC, story and supporting characters. Struggles, tension and originality. A few minor flaws -character development and growth And Interactions -More POVs besides the main character and a few others. But overall I'm glad to have read it. 5/5 Would recommend
This was a really good read The story Was well thought out and i really enjoy it. Also it is completed which a lot of stories arent so you dont have to wait for updates.
I loved this story. The MC is calm and collective. There's no extra talking in fights. There is no downgrading the MC's power level just 'cause. I would've preferred a little bit of separate time in developing the relationship but it's whatever. It's not like it ruined the storyline. I liked everything about it. Great Job Author and Thank you for a Good Read.
this is a pretty good book, plot was well thought out and storyline had built ups .the grammar was good and easy to read and understand. definitely recommend
Highly Recomended 🙂👍!! This fanfic is underrated .. MC doesn't get cheats and the writing is actually pretty good It has really good Writing and has a lot of potential and I can’t seem to get bored of it but the only downside that I have To point out is that it doesn’t have consistant chapter updates ... overall it’s a great book with great characters and fun story and i hope the author updates It more regularly
love how your doing everything so far its really cool and amazing also please dont dropp like this is an amazing idea and your application is amazing i can wait to see what happeneds next
WTH how did i never found this gem until now. The story is very well written. This novel has potential to be in top 10 if not top 3. Please dont drop this fanfic, it is very good and has a lot of potential.
This novel is awesome. I recommend everyone give it a gander. It really grasps the personality of the characters and the plot is interesting even if it sticks a bit too close to canonn.
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Great story so far, got Itachi personality right and the couple of chapters were great. Just hoping that the Author keeps facts correct.
The Story is incredible I am a big fan of the story but can u make the updates more stable or let us know your upload schedule.
This novel has such an interesting concept that you just have to read it. Seriously, not reading this book is like missing out on a hidden gem. Author, you better not drop this novel or me be very mad.
Writing Quality: Nothing much to say here. The writing is good. Story Development: The story is well-planned and the plot feels well-integrated with the story. The author does stick to canon but it's quite common to do so, so can't say much there.
The most Shameless of reviews only for me Author-san. Please give me some real feedback I'm still deciding how far I want to take this but I'll probably do it casually unless I get a lot of requests.
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Yo to be honest it’s a pretty good story but why you botting reviews[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Wow, This is pathetic, using bots to review(I checked some of the reviews and the only activity they have is reviewing this novel) and while the novel has only 3 chapters it already has 29 reviews each with 25-30 likes, who are you trying to fool, I haven't read the novel but I don't think I will either.(Won't be surprised if this review is deleted) I would have given 0 stars if I could.
Well ... it was about time I gave a review to this wonderful fic! I have nothing to complain about, honestly... I liked everything I've read so far!
I’m not really a review kind of person but currently I’m enjoying it and I would recommend giving it a read if you haven’t.
Good novel, very fun and interesting. Shame since the grammar is not that good, but it is not awful either. 🦾 Author deserves to have this novel in top 10.
Well I have to say it was an amazing fanfic that is saying something since I am generally not interested in One Piece. Though the story started abruptly it had a nice pace.
This story was nice. It wasn't revolutionary or anything but it was satisfying and I don't regret the time spent reading it. If you have some free time I would really recommend checking it out.
The concept it self is good, the actions scenes and the decision made by the mc are not stupid. overall an enjoyable read.
best op fanfic mc is cool and does not care about the canon he uses info to his advantage literally the best fanfic I ever read
Thanks for posting your fanfic here! For the fanfic itself: The writing quality is average, but no great hindrance to your reading at all. The story development is good for a Naruto fanfic. The character design is a bit bland and the motivations and character developments dont get explored in depth, but still not bad. Nothing needs to be said about world background since this is a fanfiction, but some things from the original plot got forcibly dragged into the new plot. A good fanfiction over-all
It was a great take on Naruto The MC, story and supporting characters. Struggles, tension and originality. A few minor flaws -character development and growth And Interactions -More POVs besides the main character and a few others. But overall I'm glad to have read it. 5/5 Would recommend
This was a really good read The story Was well thought out and i really enjoy it. Also it is completed which a lot of stories arent so you dont have to wait for updates.
I loved this story. The MC is calm and collective. There's no extra talking in fights. There is no downgrading the MC's power level just 'cause. I would've preferred a little bit of separate time in developing the relationship but it's whatever. It's not like it ruined the storyline. I liked everything about it. Great Job Author and Thank you for a Good Read.
this is a pretty good book, plot was well thought out and storyline had built ups .the grammar was good and easy to read and understand. definitely recommend
Highly Recomended 🙂👍!! This fanfic is underrated .. MC doesn't get cheats and the writing is actually pretty good It has really good Writing and has a lot of potential and I can’t seem to get bored of it but the only downside that I have To point out is that it doesn’t have consistant chapter updates ... overall it’s a great book with great characters and fun story and i hope the author updates It more regularly
love how your doing everything so far its really cool and amazing also please dont dropp like this is an amazing idea and your application is amazing i can wait to see what happeneds next
WTH how did i never found this gem until now. The story is very well written. This novel has potential to be in top 10 if not top 3. Please dont drop this fanfic, it is very good and has a lot of potential.
This novel is awesome. I recommend everyone give it a gander. It really grasps the personality of the characters and the plot is interesting even if it sticks a bit too close to canonn.
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Great story so far, got Itachi personality right and the couple of chapters were great. Just hoping that the Author keeps facts correct.
The Story is incredible I am a big fan of the story but can u make the updates more stable or let us know your upload schedule.
This novel has such an interesting concept that you just have to read it. Seriously, not reading this book is like missing out on a hidden gem. Author, you better not drop this novel or me be very mad.
Writing Quality: Nothing much to say here. The writing is good. Story Development: The story is well-planned and the plot feels well-integrated with the story. The author does stick to canon but it's quite common to do so, so can't say much there.
The most Shameless of reviews only for me Author-san. Please give me some real feedback I'm still deciding how far I want to take this but I'll probably do it casually unless I get a lot of requests.