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got a tart, drank, became handsome and immediately became a girls dream............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
good fanfic, the writing quality is good enough for you to wait a long time for the updates and that's exactly What I am doing. don't know if author is in good health or not but I pray for him
bruh the fanfic is great but the update stability has been bad, I mean it's been 2 months man and I just can't wait anymore. ,...................................,...................................,...................................
author why must you cause me FJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJ
Listen, I'm a simple man. I see Seako Bushijima and I add to my list and give a power stone. .
I don't know how to do a review so I just type some nonsense here like "Hope this won't drop"... Yeah, something like that also [[IMG = NEED MORE]]
A very satisfying read till now... Rational MC ... know how to properly utilize the opportunities... Decisive and No Whimp ..... overall i enjoy the read till now ... i hope author can update more ...😁😁
This is one great fanfic without a doubt you are doing new things by not following the plot and doing it flawlessly as well in my opinion, the part when their home was invaded and you made the pretty good dialogues that didn't break the immersion, their decisions didn't seem forced it was very good, and how humane their characters were shown and, to be honest, I can feel me making similar decisions if I was a bigbrainer and as calm as them. In the end, I will only say please don't stop this is a very good fanfic 😊😊😊
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nice book but need regular update and i would recommended everyone to read this book.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
There is hope for webnovel after all Finally a smart mc who doesnt tell everything to the chat members And finally some interesting members Thank you author I just wish this wont be dropped as it happens with every amazing novel
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MC is mehhhh Stop writing about cultivation! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
So far, I like how things are developing, selfish mc (+) logic (+) the main thing is that the author continues to write, otherwise many readers know how authors throw their book, especially good books
A breath of fresh air after reading a novel created by GhostyZ. Back to this great work. - A rational MC who don't uselessly give future development to his members? ✓ - A work with great grammar? ✓ For now and I wish not just now.. This.Is.A.Gem!!
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Apenas pra avisar que até em outros países sua história é aprovada, sou do Brasil e estou ansioso por mais capítulos. ---‐---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------‐------------------------------ Ps:Saeko e shizuka Best waifus
the story is surprisingly well written so far and has been a great read. now we just have to see if it breaks past 60 chapters or if it'll fall like the others before it.
Great Story ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Amazimg story, can't wait for more chapters. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
well deserved reviews ...............................................................................................................................................
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
11 chapter and getting good .. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Quite a good read. Waiting for more chapters. ...... ..... ..... ........... ...... .... ..... ........ ..... ................
Just posting this to complete 10 reviews. I will delete this and a proper detailed introduction and information regarding the fanfic after the 'First Quest' is completed.
u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo sasuke has chakra cuz his cells produce that... he doesnt take chakra from the atmosphere like how cultivators do... hence u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo u a doo doo
YOURE BACK!!!!! FINALLY ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
got a tart, drank, became handsome and immediately became a girls dream............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
good fanfic, the writing quality is good enough for you to wait a long time for the updates and that's exactly What I am doing. don't know if author is in good health or not but I pray for him
bruh the fanfic is great but the update stability has been bad, I mean it's been 2 months man and I just can't wait anymore. ,...................................,...................................,...................................
author why must you cause me FJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJFJINJFJINSDNJ
Listen, I'm a simple man. I see Seako Bushijima and I add to my list and give a power stone. .
I don't know how to do a review so I just type some nonsense here like "Hope this won't drop"... Yeah, something like that also [[IMG = NEED MORE]]
A very satisfying read till now... Rational MC ... know how to properly utilize the opportunities... Decisive and No Whimp ..... overall i enjoy the read till now ... i hope author can update more ...😁😁
This is one great fanfic without a doubt you are doing new things by not following the plot and doing it flawlessly as well in my opinion, the part when their home was invaded and you made the pretty good dialogues that didn't break the immersion, their decisions didn't seem forced it was very good, and how humane their characters were shown and, to be honest, I can feel me making similar decisions if I was a bigbrainer and as calm as them. In the end, I will only say please don't stop this is a very good fanfic 😊😊😊
揭示劇透 ...............................................................................................................................................
nice book but need regular update and i would recommended everyone to read this book.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
There is hope for webnovel after all Finally a smart mc who doesnt tell everything to the chat members And finally some interesting members Thank you author I just wish this wont be dropped as it happens with every amazing novel
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MC is mehhhh Stop writing about cultivation! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
So far, I like how things are developing, selfish mc (+) logic (+) the main thing is that the author continues to write, otherwise many readers know how authors throw their book, especially good books
A breath of fresh air after reading a novel created by GhostyZ. Back to this great work. - A rational MC who don't uselessly give future development to his members? ✓ - A work with great grammar? ✓ For now and I wish not just now.. This.Is.A.Gem!!
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Apenas pra avisar que até em outros países sua história é aprovada, sou do Brasil e estou ansioso por mais capítulos. ---‐---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------‐------------------------------ Ps:Saeko e shizuka Best waifus
the story is surprisingly well written so far and has been a great read. now we just have to see if it breaks past 60 chapters or if it'll fall like the others before it.
Great Story ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Amazimg story, can't wait for more chapters. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
well deserved reviews ...............................................................................................................................................
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
11 chapter and getting good .. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Quite a good read. Waiting for more chapters. ...... ..... ..... ........... ...... .... ..... ........ ..... ................
Just posting this to complete 10 reviews. I will delete this and a proper detailed introduction and information regarding the fanfic after the 'First Quest' is completed.