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Protagonist so OP he accidentally kills Raditz with his Aura lol. The pushup training system may be the most OP thing I could think of for a fanfic but I would definitely love to hear more OP power/system Ideas.
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Protagonist so OP he accidentally kills Raditz with his Aura lol. The pushup training system may be the most OP thing I could think of for a fanfic but I would definitely love to hear more OP power/system Ideas.