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The story shows a lot of promise. The world background and characters are reminiscent of the Dragon Ball franchise. Keep on writing more chapters.
A GEM totally. really bring me inside the world with a very neat details for everything that was inside. And let me tell you another interesting one, this book has a Glossary! Yeah you read that right. It has all the info incase you missed out something. Goodjob author!
I am not really a fan of male pov books this is actually my first time and I woikd say it was quite an experience . it is an explosive journey through a tumultuous world. The author's vivid descriptions and well-crafted characters immerse you in a chaotic and unpredictable landscape. As the story unfolds, you'll find yourself on the edge of your seat, eager to uncover the next twist in this thrilling narrative. If you crave action and suspense this book won't disappoint.
The start of the story is great and I‘m looking forward to more updates from the author
the start of the story was actually good, even though I have only read Chap 1 to 3 the story is already promising.
I am very satisfied reading, because the chapter content is long and enjoyable. Last time I watched the Greek gods, but this book is no less interesting.
just reading the synopsis I could already tell this Novel is good to be great can't wait to read kodus
I love the book, the brings us from our everyday life to a world of imagination. And we get to imagine a world outside our reality. I recommend this book
A fascinating read, world-building, and the description make it feel so realistic and the quality of the writing skill is really good, great job author. It's a read i'll recommend
Truly great strong captivates you from the start can not wait to hear more about Zero's journey excellent writing
The story shows a lot of promise. The world background and characters are reminiscent of the Dragon Ball franchise. Keep on writing more chapters.
A GEM totally. really bring me inside the world with a very neat details for everything that was inside. And let me tell you another interesting one, this book has a Glossary! Yeah you read that right. It has all the info incase you missed out something. Goodjob author!
I am not really a fan of male pov books this is actually my first time and I woikd say it was quite an experience . it is an explosive journey through a tumultuous world. The author's vivid descriptions and well-crafted characters immerse you in a chaotic and unpredictable landscape. As the story unfolds, you'll find yourself on the edge of your seat, eager to uncover the next twist in this thrilling narrative. If you crave action and suspense this book won't disappoint.
The start of the story is great and I‘m looking forward to more updates from the author
the start of the story was actually good, even though I have only read Chap 1 to 3 the story is already promising.
I am very satisfied reading, because the chapter content is long and enjoyable. Last time I watched the Greek gods, but this book is no less interesting.
just reading the synopsis I could already tell this Novel is good to be great can't wait to read kodus
I love the book, the brings us from our everyday life to a world of imagination. And we get to imagine a world outside our reality. I recommend this book
A fascinating read, world-building, and the description make it feel so realistic and the quality of the writing skill is really good, great job author. It's a read i'll recommend
Truly great strong captivates you from the start can not wait to hear more about Zero's journey excellent writing