摘要
"Why do the main character's parents often get the short end of the stick?"
That is what Mila asked while looking up at the sky. She was grumbling toward whoever sent her inside the novel she read before she died.
She becomes the mother of the main character, whose parents are both dead. Mila's character was merely a tool for the MC's character development.
It's a simple, fix-all solution. The author wanted to make the audience instantly sympathetic towards the main character, and the best thing he did was to have the MC's parents die.
After she avoided her death in the original plot, death flags kept coming for her.
Will the original plot not end if she's not dead?
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like like like like like like like love love love love love love love loves you and ann at the same time she tries to consider that the married couple
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tis has potential, it is easy and fun to read, i hope to see more of Robert && Mila's interaction. i don't want her to stay at the desert 😩 && author please update more! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can only afford to unlock the first volume, i am gathering all my resources to definitely finish this amazing original! i really like it! Robert is a red flag but i do'n,t care! i love him!
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Done reading volume 1, all i can say is Wow, what a roller coaster ride of emotions. what i found funny is d author suddenly took fond of the Tope and Gina (side character) way too much. but i still love it. ❤
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Wow, just wow. Few chapters in and I'm already in love with the characters especially Robert(i dont know why, i just like is character in a way). Can't wait to continue once I'm able to unlock the remaining chapters. Well done author🥰👍
Nice subversion of a very common trope... And the MCs struggle with the trope is sometimes hilarious, sometimes thought provoking, and sometimes very realistic. A genuinely good read. Kudos to the author ..
Recomend 10/10! 5 chapters in, I genuinely enjoy the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the unfolding plot.
daaaaaarkness despair? I like it i like how the story development i like how the characters grow i like it i like it i like it like it i like it i like i like it
揭示劇透卷 1 : Fantasy world
- 1 Prologue 2 years ago
- 2 "Wow! I am the male lead mother!" 2 years ago
- 3 I am Mila? 2 years ago
- 4 "Is he having his first berserk transformation?" 2 years ago
- 5 "Wake me up. please." 2 years ago
- 6 "Why are you here? Monster!" 2 years ago
- 7 "Ah, So he is dead." 2 years ago
- 8 "Hurry! Seal the dragon!" 2 years ago
- 9 "What will happen to Esclamado?" 2 years ago
- 10 "Your emerald eyes are too damn beautiful." 2 years ago
- 11 "Uncle! Track where mother teleported to!" 2 years ago
- 12 "F*ck this weird novel!" 2 years ago
- 13 "I am f*cking giving this to you." 2 years ago
- 14 "You should have told me you are not human!" 2 years ago
- 15 "R-Robert?" 2 years ago
- 16 "I need you now, Milagros." 2 years ago
- 17 "Leave your horses" 2 years ago
- 18 "Are they going to destroy this place?" 2 years ago
- 19 "Young duke!" 2 years ago
- 20 "Time to die." 2 years ago
- 21 "But apologies! I don't know how!" 2 years ago
- 22 "I don't know if you are a man or a woman," 2 years ago
- 23 "No thanks. Leave me alone!" 2 years ago
- 24 "Restaurant! Feed me instead!" 2 years ago
- 25 "What?" 2 years ago
- 26 "You. What are you?" 2 years ago
- 27 "Your button is going to give up. I hope you too." 2 years ago
- 28 "Mila, Let me in!" 2 years ago
- 29 "I am the plot hole. You know!" 2 years ago
- 30 "I like Master Robert, to name me." 2 years ago
- 31 "Are you ready to hear the plan?" 2 years ago
- 32 "Please use me well." 2 years ago
- 33 "The creator has favored you." 2 years ago
- 34 "Why don’t you use Ethel’s name as well?" 2 years ago
- 35 “I was only there to meet the author.” 2 years ago
- 36 "What kind of threat is that?" 2 years ago
- 37 "Men doesn’t take long to use the restroom, right?" 2 years ago
- 38 "I came from the other world." 2 years ago
- 39 “Welcome back. Madam.” 2 years ago
- 40 "How did you three survive the Aston?" 2 years ago
- 41 "To meet my child." 2 years ago
- 42 “Unbelievable!” 2 years ago
- 43 "What is that?" 2 years ago
- 44 "To be delivered." 2 years ago
- 45 "Are you running away, again?" 2 years ago
- 46 "What of it?" 2 years ago
- 47 “What episode?” 2 years ago
- 48 "Did you forget how to fly?” 2 years ago
- 49 “Esclamado will rise!” 2 years ago
- 50 “Don’t disappear ever again.” 2 years ago
- 51 "Don't mess around!" 2 years ago
- 52 “That’s beautiful.” 2 years ago
- 53 "Why aren't you going home with me?" 2 years ago
- 54 "What if we make love?" 2 years ago
- 55 "We can go to bed now." 2 years ago
- 56 "What’s going on?" 2 years ago
- 57 "What am I going to be doing?" 2 years ago
- 58 "please do this favor." 2 years ago
- 59 "I am asking your name!" 2 years ago
- 60 Everything is scary. 2 years ago
- 61 "Curious about the truth of this world." 2 years ago
- 62 "My future in-law.” 2 years ago
- 63 "My strength is back?" 2 years ago
- 64 "Let's do it with aura?" 2 years ago
- 65 "How can I date her if she's dead?" 2 years ago
- 66 "What should I do?" 2 years ago
- 67 "This angle is good." 2 years ago
- 68 "This is not romantic at all." 2 years ago
- 69 "How come no one came to rescue us?" 2 years ago
- 70 "Something is wrong with everything." 2 years ago
- 71 "Is it your turn?" 2 years ago
- 72 "Treat my son well." 2 years ago
- 73 "You're an evil woman if you reject me now." 2 years ago
- 74 "Do you think having a child is like having a pet?" 2 years ago
- 75 "Are you that selfish?" 2 years ago
- 76 "I choose to love you." 2 years ago
- 77 "Let's go to the secret room?" 2 years ago
- 78 "You can let a stranger dress you?" 2 years ago
- 79 "What are you laughing about?" 2 years ago
- 80 "I don't want to lose you." 2 years ago
- 81 "What are you going to do with my make up kit?" 2 years ago
- 82 "Look, You just stopped crying." 2 years ago
- 83 "We don't have one." 2 years ago
- 84 "How is she?" 2 years ago
- 85 "Is that not enough?" 2 years ago
- 86 "Do I look like a child?" 2 years ago
- 87 "Am I going to wait ... again?" 2 years ago
- 88 "He doesn't hate you." 2 years ago
- 89 "The groom is finally here!" 2 years ago
- 90 "The earlier they tie the knot, the better." 2 years ago
- 91 "Please let me into your family!" 2 years ago
- 92 "My beautiful daughter-in-law. " 2 years ago
- 93 "Am I dreaming?" 2 years ago
- 94 "No, Continue." 2 years ago
- 95 "It's a menstrual hygiene device, my lord." 2 years ago
- 96 “You’re the only exception.” 2 years ago
- 97 "What trouble does my beautiful daughter have?" 2 years ago
- 98 "Don’t bite your lip. I’ll do it for you instead." 2 years ago
- 99 "This is really unfair." 2 years ago
- 100 "We really need to make this wedding happen." 2 years ago
- 101 "Who are you?" 2 years ago
- 102 "You lied to me. You broke your promise." 2 years ago
- 103 "We are the only ones on the same team." 2 years ago
- 104 "Today, surrounded by all of this chaos…" 2 years ago
- 105 “This is the real world! My original world!” 2 years ago
卷 2 : Real World
- 106 She needs patience to get through this ordeal. 2 years ago
- 107 "Just wait for me there." 2 years ago
- 108 Mila or Ethel? 2 years ago
- 109 "Is this a knock off?" 2 years ago
- 110 "Where is the real world?" 2 years ago
- 111 "He dropped." 2 years ago
- 112 "A coward made us all suffer?" 2 years ago
- 113 "How much more genre would they like to take?" 2 years ago
- 114 "How to jump from world to world?" 2 years ago
- 115 "I will destroy other worlds instead." 2 years ago
- 116 "Why do I feel ominous about this?" 2 years ago
- 117 "I can be Ethel." 2 years ago
- 118 "Once we see each other again." 2 years ago
- 119 To travel to Earth 2 years ago
- 120 "We won't hurt you just behave!" 2 years ago
- 121 "Did this city corrupt you?" 2 years ago
- 122 "As if you're not my mother." 2 years ago
- 123 "I don't want to be her burden forever." 2 years ago
- 124 "You’re married even in this world?" 2 years ago
- 125 "I’m convinced you did miss me too." 2 years ago
- 126 “She said, I don’t need to worry?” 2 years ago
- 127 "I love attractive men." 2 years ago
- 128 "Let me tour you around" 2 years ago
- 129 "This uncle is quite old for this tour." 2 years ago
- 130 "Are you sick?" 2 years ago
- 131 "My money!" 2 years ago
- 132 "You broke everything I worked hard for." 2 years ago
- 133 "Someone was transported!" 2 years ago
- 134 "Can you still call me mother?" 2 years ago
- 135 "Fit in to survive." 2 years ago
- 136 "Stop calling me brother." 2 years ago
- 137 "Good night, My princess." 2 years ago
- 138 "Luther needs to know." 2 years ago
- 139 "Madam Mila." 2 years ago
- 140 "Are you talking to Luther?" 2 years ago
- 141 "Why do you look different?" 2 years ago
- 142 "Do you want to meet him?” 2 years ago
- 143 "I don't want to die." 2 years ago
- 144 "Everyone adjust to this world." 2 years ago
- 145 "Come back here!" 2 years ago
- 146 "It’s too hard to live." 2 years ago
- 147 "You are not Mila." 2 years ago
- 148 "Don't touch me." 2 years ago
- 149 "Why do you have to create me like this?" 2 years ago
- 150 "I refused to be deceived again!" 2 years ago
- 151 "You startled me!" 2 years ago
- 152 "I want to be alone with her." 2 years ago
- 153 "She married a pig?" 2 years ago
- 154 "You look human." 2 years ago
- 155 “Uh-oh.” 2 years ago
- 156 "I found a good place to stay.” 2 years ago
- 157 "I am fine." 2 years ago
- 158 "I am much older!" 2 years ago
- 159 "How come no one noticed?" 2 years ago
- 160 "Fighting someone." 2 years ago
- 161 "What are you looking at?" 2 years ago
- 162 "Did she miss me?" 2 years ago
- 163 "A pig can get a kiss." 2 years ago
- 164 "Erase all men." 2 years ago
- 165 "Because he is my lover." 2 years ago
- 166 "Disappear into our lives." 2 years ago
- 167 "Good for us." 2 years ago
- 168 "You're Lola." 2 years ago
- 169 "She's lying." 2 years ago
- 170 “I have something for you to do.” 2 years ago
- 171 "I don't know." 2 years ago
- 172 "We are the same person." 2 years ago
- 173 "Don't tell me." 2 years ago
- 174 "I'll punish him for you." 2 years ago
- 175 "Accidental kill." 2 years ago
- 176 "Taken away" 2 years ago
- 177 Like a domino. 2 years ago
- 178 Smiled innocently 2 years ago
- 179 “I have nowhere to go.” 2 years ago
- 180 "I'll rip your stitches open.” 2 years ago
- 181 "I’ll be by your side.” 2 years ago
- 182 "Please fuck off." 2 years ago
- 183 "He must be really hurt." 2 years ago
- 184 “I will make up for my idiocy.” 2 years ago
- 185 "Am I dreaming?" 2 years ago
- 186 "I hope so." 2 years ago
- 187 "Why do you have to do this?" 2 years ago
- 188 "I promise. I will." 2 years ago
- 189 "Shit!" 2 years ago
- 190 "Of course not." 2 years ago
- 191 "Another man." 2 years ago
- 192 "Yes, my love." 2 years ago
- 193 “Welcome to the family, Kim.” 2 years ago
- 194 "We will make more angels." 2 years ago
- 195 Epilogue 2 years ago
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