Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction

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DetachedDreamer

I may delete this review for a new one later on but starting from the beginning I've found the MC very unlikable. His first strike is when he questioned if he should save a random dying woman even tho he's basically a God. He's scared to reveal his powers even to weakling nobody's as well. The whole hiding your powers and being neutral morally trope is old and overused on WN. This character is a pile of cliche and so far its pretty boring. I havent given up on the story but I feel I've already grasped the childish nature of the authors writing style. I would love to see a fanfic explore no game no life but we will see if I can even make it to that arc.

LV 6

TFH

It's very good, the grammar is excellent with few mistakes here and there. The updates are on the slow side so that's sad as the novel is quite good. The first 15 or so chapters are very needy to read the introduction to things since the powers of MC are control DREAMS and REALITY, he can do whatever he wants but its costs energy, and he started weak, barely a few times stronger than the regular human, so no wishing for Excalibur just yet, as the more powerful the wish is, the more energy needed if it exceeds his capacity, nothing happens.*****I like the way things are going. /////// My only worry is that the author said that romance and hârêm will be secondary... That's not a good thing romance, especially in a hârêm is a very important aspect, since if done wrong, it will just be another trash hârêm. The girl's personalities must be flushed out, the relationship must be developed, their interests be shown, etc. As each person is unique, with personal likes and dislikes, even more so hârêm as its the focus, since the girls must also get along. It's also important to improve the girls so that they get stronger, smarter, etc... It's fine for temporary side characters to not be developed as much as we will not be seen them again, like his swordsmanship instructor. But the hârêm will follow MC to the end and very likely participate in the war... For now its unknown if there will be male companions or not.

LV 14

I_dont_believe_it

Good story but there are few times the author is just blatantly making things ups or he gets stuff wrong that anyone who watched the original would know…also the author over explains things and also repeats himself using different words A-LOT, to the point of whole chapters being useless information or just the MC ranting about the same subject in different ways using different words….author seems to ignore most criticisms too so I don’t think this will change at all

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Treyon_Daren

Someone recommended me this book. Its good! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I like that mc is using his head to train properly before jumping in to fight demons. with his dreams/reality ability he may not even need a Nichirin Sword to kill them. I hope the H of girls is well done. Nobody wants his future wives and lovers to be just there for numbers, they should help out and more

LV 13

evilgod_3214

very well written and interesting at the beginning but after some time it gets boring

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xOriginXx

I like this a lot but.... How the fk do u consume energy inside a dream, it is kind of your subconscious u can do whatever inside of there

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_DEKIM_

Meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

LV 13

GENGHIS_KHAN

It’s good but that girl who follows him around is completely pointless.

LV 14

DaoOfNoFucks

Giving five stars because I see NGNL will be included, and from what I have seen so far, the basis of the ff is pretty good, I am expecting great things Author-San

LV 1

OmnipresenceBeing

An extremely wonderful story.......,,,..................... it was like a whole new experience! .............. Great world-building, weak romance, but still worth the read........... WANT MOAR......................................

LV 1

TypeFantasyHeart_5657

Its a very unique ability, the power to control realities and dreams, but mc is limited by the small amount of energy he has, which he will slowly grow by eating the dreams of others. Honest, MC seems to be an Incubus, lets see how the adult content goes ehehe

LV 15

quiler

At this time there is not to many chapters, but I’ll leave a review anyways. So far the power has been explained, but just the surface. It is still being explored by him. Hard to find a good multiverse fanfic and it’s still the first world, and will be for a while. With how few chapters there are I can’t judge thoroughly so just give it a try, it won’t hurt.

LV 14

AbandonedToGodhood

I like this novel so far, so keep up the good work. Will Shinobu be in the harem though? I really like her, so I hope she ends up in the harem and becomes at least one of his main women if she ends up in the harem.

LV 4

SKAJ

MC brain dead most of the time, acts just like anyother MCs from anime, manga, and fanfics, too many long chapters of infodump then actual story, about 70% infodump and 30% story, author trys to make it look like MC is smart but fails, MC only has use 4/10 of his brain and acts like anyother MCs without brains, and so many plotholes and plots that make no sense and yet author trys to make sound like it makes sense, its hard to explain without reading it urself but man this is too much for me, good luck to anyone who wants to read this and i pray that u will make it pass the first arc without dropping

LV 1

An_Aspirant

Ch 200 It's a highly underrated novel, no nerfing MC, no weird Grammer, a good story pace. While reading you won't disconnected from the novel. Cons/Pro:- Harem is slow [like really SLOW](dont bash me till you read ch 200, it will become apparent) I like it, and would love to see how it ends [all wars and stuff].

LV 4

Jester_Advocate

a recommendation is ttigrass meaning that time I got reincarnated as a slime yes a bit cliche but the power you get and also dignified power scaling so might as well

LV 5

Maya_Matengele

Writing Quality 5 Development 3 Everything else 5... You a an expressive writer and a good one at that👌🏾, your style is very enjoyable and with little to no errors... The problem here however is that one as expressive and analytical as yourself should at least make the chapters longer so that we can at least see progress. Honestly it gets annoying if if you have an opinion on everything and good ones too at that, but that must not hinder the development of the story... Your character interactions as well as inner thoughts are perfect and enjoyable , but they should not hinder the development of the story... The only time it is nice to read an expressive writers story is when their chapters are longer so that at least we do not end up reading many chapters but seeing little progress... I'm saying the same thing in different ways to emphasize how annoying it gets in the long run... Otherwise great fanfic man.... Overall 4.6

LV 5

Psan

I had a good laugh when mc said NO!! to the goddess offer... only a M would accept such offer, or completely crazy to willingly to Terror Infinity. Its quite original MC abilities. there is a lot of fun stuff to do with it which can add some comedy to it... Can he change someones hair color to pink? make others look like a clown? Even when fighting he could just make the others weapons be broken, shoot flowers out of a gun, etc. But if i had to say something impressive. His ability to 100% heal someone is OP. Im eager to know if he will recruit allies along his growing H of girls to other worlds. Also... maybe he can make it that Nezuko dosnt needs to fear the sun? he can do it. This way he can marry her =P

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I_cant_choose_name

It's very good so far the story has a lot of potential and I hope Author keeps writing.