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There are chapters that don’t add anything to the story or the character, the development is slow and the attitude of the character fells pretty inconsistent at times
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I really like the narrative, even though there is a similar story in the beginning that I forgot about, but I still appreciate the plot.
the writing quality, the world background are good but the story in itself is pretty confusing. adding character images may help a bit...but starting chapters upto 25 will leave you confuse and not wanting to read more.
This was interesting when I began reading but it started to get too confusing. I read up to ch. 108 out of the 122 chapters and at that point, I didn't know what was happening anymore. The story kept referring to events in the MC's past that were never explained, the pace became insanely fast with one thing happening right after the other with no proper explanation or buildup. Reading it felt like I Wasted my time
Please Please Please come back author-nim this story has great potential and leaving us loyal readers hanging is a war-crime of greatest severity.
Sir, why did the updates stop? Are you hiatus or did you leave the novel? Please tell, I have been a reader since the beginning and would like that to continue. Pls Don't let the book be Discontinued....
Don’t STop, keep Update novel like are rare on web novels please UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate
I hope I'm not annoying you with my questions. Is everything fine with you author? As one of your loyal fans I really admire the work done in this novel so I'm always longing for new chapters as many others of your fans. When can we expect the return of the story? Hope you do fine :) . Sorry if I'm annoying you. PS: (No ill intentions in my messages and I'm sorry for my bad English)
The Author should update more. This novel has a lot of potential to perform well. The mc's development will be worthwhile to read. Overall this is a very good concept for a novel and the Author should just update more.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Where are the updates Mr Killer? You are Killing me by not updating this masterpiece of a novel, I love the World Background And the Characters, And can't get enough of them, So please Update!!!!!!!!!
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I love most of this, the world building is good as a lo of things are/being fleshed out. I’m excited about the 1000 quest that are hopefully going to be answered. The only minor issue I have with this novel is that it’s sometimes leaves me confused with it going around the place. (This could just be an issue with my comprehension ability.) I hope theirs won’t be dropped like many similar novels.
Great start to the novel, a lot to look forward to. Especially good writing/grammar, props to the Author and Editing team. I look forward to learning more!
The writing and characters are absolutely fantastic. It is so polished that I’m surprised it’s a webnovel. Read the first chapter and you’ll see exactly what I’m talking about.
Sir Silent Killer.Please Add the Tags, would make it possible for the novel to be found through advanced search and would allow us to use more fast passes.
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I'll give it this rating for now until my question is answered. Is the stay in the book temporary or permanent? is he going to go back to his own life (I hope not).
a very good story with in depth characters,it has a lot of potential but author is not updating fast enough and the chapter length is also not too big
if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((
LISTEN AUTHOR ---- IF YOU ARE WRITING THE NOVEL ,.JUST DON'T DROP THE NOVEL OK JUST DON'T DROP OR ELSE HEAVEN WILL FALL IN YOU !!!!! MARK MY WORDS.......😡🤬
I normally don't do reviews, because I am an author as well and it takes too much time to even considered but my God, this piece of work can only describe as a masterpiece it is slow paste but it is done beautifully the mystery in it is also amazing in my opinion the world-building is superb, overall this is a good book that will make you question a lot of things, honestly, it is worth my time can't wait for more.
The story is pretty cool, the MC has a good inclined personality, The world feels alive and organic if that makes anysense, anyways I recommend this novel.
First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusion for the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it. in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake here As character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is. as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh. as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for now overall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novel are Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective
Very interesting. Writing quality is incredible. The story is enjoyable. It's addictive to read./......................................................................:)
The start was great. The characters and their introduction was also great. I really liked the characters until they started doing stuff that made no sense. I enjoyed reading till around chapter 60 but after that the decisions the author made with some of the characters made me so frustrated like why would you do that? The last few chapters seem so rushed and bland. This would've been great if not for that.
There are chapters that don’t add anything to the story or the character, the development is slow and the attitude of the character fells pretty inconsistent at times
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I really like the narrative, even though there is a similar story in the beginning that I forgot about, but I still appreciate the plot.
the writing quality, the world background are good but the story in itself is pretty confusing. adding character images may help a bit...but starting chapters upto 25 will leave you confuse and not wanting to read more.
This was interesting when I began reading but it started to get too confusing. I read up to ch. 108 out of the 122 chapters and at that point, I didn't know what was happening anymore. The story kept referring to events in the MC's past that were never explained, the pace became insanely fast with one thing happening right after the other with no proper explanation or buildup. Reading it felt like I Wasted my time
Please Please Please come back author-nim this story has great potential and leaving us loyal readers hanging is a war-crime of greatest severity.
Sir, why did the updates stop? Are you hiatus or did you leave the novel? Please tell, I have been a reader since the beginning and would like that to continue. Pls Don't let the book be Discontinued....
Don’t STop, keep Update novel like are rare on web novels please UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate
I hope I'm not annoying you with my questions. Is everything fine with you author? As one of your loyal fans I really admire the work done in this novel so I'm always longing for new chapters as many others of your fans. When can we expect the return of the story? Hope you do fine :) . Sorry if I'm annoying you. PS: (No ill intentions in my messages and I'm sorry for my bad English)
The Author should update more. This novel has a lot of potential to perform well. The mc's development will be worthwhile to read. Overall this is a very good concept for a novel and the Author should just update more.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Where are the updates Mr Killer? You are Killing me by not updating this masterpiece of a novel, I love the World Background And the Characters, And can't get enough of them, So please Update!!!!!!!!!
More family affection [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love most of this, the world building is good as a lo of things are/being fleshed out. I’m excited about the 1000 quest that are hopefully going to be answered. The only minor issue I have with this novel is that it’s sometimes leaves me confused with it going around the place. (This could just be an issue with my comprehension ability.) I hope theirs won’t be dropped like many similar novels.
Great start to the novel, a lot to look forward to. Especially good writing/grammar, props to the Author and Editing team. I look forward to learning more!
The writing and characters are absolutely fantastic. It is so polished that I’m surprised it’s a webnovel. Read the first chapter and you’ll see exactly what I’m talking about.
Sir Silent Killer.Please Add the Tags, would make it possible for the novel to be found through advanced search and would allow us to use more fast passes.
updated review, thank you author dskdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdk I hate this text limit dkdddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjd
I'll give it this rating for now until my question is answered. Is the stay in the book temporary or permanent? is he going to go back to his own life (I hope not).
a very good story with in depth characters,it has a lot of potential but author is not updating fast enough and the chapter length is also not too big
if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((
LISTEN AUTHOR ---- IF YOU ARE WRITING THE NOVEL ,.JUST DON'T DROP THE NOVEL OK JUST DON'T DROP OR ELSE HEAVEN WILL FALL IN YOU !!!!! MARK MY WORDS.......😡🤬
I normally don't do reviews, because I am an author as well and it takes too much time to even considered but my God, this piece of work can only describe as a masterpiece it is slow paste but it is done beautifully the mystery in it is also amazing in my opinion the world-building is superb, overall this is a good book that will make you question a lot of things, honestly, it is worth my time can't wait for more.
The story is pretty cool, the MC has a good inclined personality, The world feels alive and organic if that makes anysense, anyways I recommend this novel.
First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusion for the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it. in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake here As character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is. as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh. as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for now overall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novel are Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective
Very interesting. Writing quality is incredible. The story is enjoyable. It's addictive to read./......................................................................:)
The start was great. The characters and their introduction was also great. I really liked the characters until they started doing stuff that made no sense. I enjoyed reading till around chapter 60 but after that the decisions the author made with some of the characters made me so frustrated like why would you do that? The last few chapters seem so rushed and bland. This would've been great if not for that.