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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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I never envisioned Trevor as a father and now that I can read it, it's just "wow." And having Jim come first, I really love him because deep down he's a good guy.
LV 1
I LOVE THIS FICT!! (*＞∇＜)ﾉ Trevor is so cute as a father, i always smiles while reading the father-daughter moments. keep it up! i'm always waiting for the next chapter. I it will be good ending being a happy family:3
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I never envisioned Trevor as a father and now that I can read it, it's just "wow." And having Jim come first, I really love him because deep down he's a good guy.
I LOVE THIS FICT!! (*＞∇＜)ﾉ Trevor is so cute as a father, i always smiles while reading the father-daughter moments. keep it up! i'm always waiting for the next chapter. I it will be good ending being a happy family:3