4評論
- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
It's been a nice read so far😌😌😌 The author put in the best efforts to make it amazing I'm always rooting for you🙃🙃🙃 It's a nice book, really
Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine
Okay, I'm all caught up (So far Till Chapter 19), and I have to say, it's been an interesting read. The author's use of narration is unique and the characters are interesting. The beginning also gets you hooked. The line between good and evil is blurred, and I somehow find myself wondering what will happen next. This isn't five stars since the author doesn't upload on a daily basis. I hope that changes. Still, though, good job!
I have known this author for quite some time and I can assure you that the author got her cheek humor disseminated as she tells her tale... What do you expect from this novel?... Well, this novel is a perfect bedtime material to pass off time as it contains a lot of mysteries...and makes you feel the adrenaline rush. Overall, a good novel to pass off time and a coin-worthy novel.... If you are a perv pls stay away, this one isn't meant for Ya......🚶♂️🚶♂️🚶♂️
It's been a nice read so far😌😌😌 The author put in the best efforts to make it amazing I'm always rooting for you🙃🙃🙃 It's a nice book, really
Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine
Okay, I'm all caught up (So far Till Chapter 19), and I have to say, it's been an interesting read. The author's use of narration is unique and the characters are interesting. The beginning also gets you hooked. The line between good and evil is blurred, and I somehow find myself wondering what will happen next. This isn't five stars since the author doesn't upload on a daily basis. I hope that changes. Still, though, good job!
I have known this author for quite some time and I can assure you that the author got her cheek humor disseminated as she tells her tale... What do you expect from this novel?... Well, this novel is a perfect bedtime material to pass off time as it contains a lot of mysteries...and makes you feel the adrenaline rush. Overall, a good novel to pass off time and a coin-worthy novel.... If you are a perv pls stay away, this one isn't meant for Ya......🚶♂️🚶♂️🚶♂️