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the story is really good thor, keep up the spirit [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is story very nice and i like that 😍😍😍 keep spirit, i will be waiting next chapter again, 😍😍😍😍 c'mon next up again good luck author
wow, that's a good story 😍😍😍😍😍 alur yang keren dan feel nya dapet banget kak😘😘😘😘😘 semangat nulis kak. ditunggu kelanjutannya 😍😘😍😘😍
I like this story ... hmm Athor strong upnya .... I wait your chapther ............. 💥💥💥💥💥[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very good story. I like the storyline. excited to continue writing...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Poor Inara. 😞 I hope Raka will be fall in love with her. Inara is a girl good and kind. I like this story. I hope there will be story in indonesia. Good job author.
raka oh raka. i like the story. i had read in bahasa. it is recommended. maybe the feeling will be different when it written in English. just up more chapter, please ...
Raka. what kind of man, is he a jerk. This story is very interesting and made me curious. highly recommend from me. 🤩🤩🤩🤩....... good job author
I like the story very much. I trust that Inara is very strong girl. I wish she always be happy with her life. Okey, thor give me more chapter, I don't want to wait again.
the story is really good thor, keep up the spirit [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is story very nice and i like that 😍😍😍 keep spirit, i will be waiting next chapter again, 😍😍😍😍 c'mon next up again good luck author
wow, that's a good story 😍😍😍😍😍 alur yang keren dan feel nya dapet banget kak😘😘😘😘😘 semangat nulis kak. ditunggu kelanjutannya 😍😘😍😘😍
I like this story ... hmm Athor strong upnya .... I wait your chapther ............. 💥💥💥💥💥[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very good story. I like the storyline. excited to continue writing...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Poor Inara. 😞 I hope Raka will be fall in love with her. Inara is a girl good and kind. I like this story. I hope there will be story in indonesia. Good job author.
raka oh raka. i like the story. i had read in bahasa. it is recommended. maybe the feeling will be different when it written in English. just up more chapter, please ...
Raka. what kind of man, is he a jerk. This story is very interesting and made me curious. highly recommend from me. 🤩🤩🤩🤩....... good job author
I like the story very much. I trust that Inara is very strong girl. I wish she always be happy with her life. Okey, thor give me more chapter, I don't want to wait again.