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this is a new type of story iIhave not come across and i love it just wish the author would make the story more less not that much loophole
Hootttt It’s r eally a kind of book I would read UwU I ove the sto ry so far but eh did you by cha nce forgot how to describe what they look like? Would mak e it more hot to imagin e while I- um . Read. a pity only few chap ters. Ahh I can’ wait t
It's really good . I love the steamy sexual encounter and it very much put me in a good mood. I love your seductive pick up lines and directly turning into dirty talking. I love your novel very much and I'm your number one fan. I love how you write and I'm taking notes to use this on my partner . hehehe hehehe. Really helpful so please don't drop.
If you have an OCD but with grammar this story is not for you. I stopped reading at the ch 2, after author introduced hierarchy. I dunno if you can have beta-reader at Webnovel but if you can then the author should get one. That's all, have a good day y'all.
this is a new type of story iIhave not come across and i love it just wish the author would make the story more less not that much loophole
Hootttt It’s r eally a kind of book I would read UwU I ove the sto ry so far but eh did you by cha nce forgot how to describe what they look like? Would mak e it more hot to imagin e while I- um . Read. a pity only few chap ters. Ahh I can’ wait t
It's really good . I love the steamy sexual encounter and it very much put me in a good mood. I love your seductive pick up lines and directly turning into dirty talking. I love your novel very much and I'm your number one fan. I love how you write and I'm taking notes to use this on my partner . hehehe hehehe. Really helpful so please don't drop.
If you have an OCD but with grammar this story is not for you. I stopped reading at the ch 2, after author introduced hierarchy. I dunno if you can have beta-reader at Webnovel but if you can then the author should get one. That's all, have a good day y'all.