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I’ve definitely read this before or at least some veryyyy similar to this but I’m not sure where.
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This desperately needs an editor and someone who understands chinese'isms. The english seems to be a word for word literal translation making it very difficult to understand what is happening.
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It seems to be intresting in a way, till now. lets see what happens in the future. I like it.
LV 14 ![Badge]()
I’ve definitely read this before or at least some veryyyy similar to this but I’m not sure where.
LV 13 ![Badge]()
This desperately needs an editor and someone who understands chinese'isms. The english seems to be a word for word literal translation making it very difficult to understand what is happening.
It seems to be intresting in a way, till now. lets see what happens in the future. I like it.