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I got to chapter 5 before I had to drop it. There were already inconsistencies from what was mentioned in the very first chapter of the novel. If it happens this quickly how many more changes from the story will there be? It’ll be too annoying for me to keep reading.
The book kept me wanting to know what happens. There were Natura some filler chapters to make it longer but that's to be expected. The ending was rushed with too many loose ends. Why did she obtain the space? What happened to the family members and sister? She had so many business but only the TV show was discussed at the end. Why did the family never find out about the older brothers son who was such a bad guy? How did the old master, who had a mysterious illness, all of a sudden get better. What happened to the twin sisters kids and the lawyer who loved her. Glad I'm not spending anymore money on this book. Kind of upset I spent so much.
I have completed reading the book. Overall a good novel. FL character is well defined and got a good ending.
chapters are incomplete .👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
this is one of two books I read regularly. it's well written and very enjoyable and I love the FL and ML relationship.
This book was really amazing to read. It always kept me hooked no matter where I stopped. The ending was a bit rush I felt but otherwise it was a good read..
Don’t read this novel. The author wrote such an unnecessary scene as the young boy got raped by pervert man. World is already cruel enough, no need for such a plot. What a twisted mind author!!!
A lot of grammar errors, feels like a translation... story is so amazing and juicy I love it and thumbs up for the creator
I really enjoyed this story. There are a few things that bother me but it's only because they don't align with my views.
The story is dragging a bit. She hasn’t gotten rid of her paternal family. Her father is very dull and stupid because he’s always supporting and choosing his family over his wife and kids. The Fl has given her father many chances yet still 🤦♀️. I have read up to chapter 790 and it’s still the same cycle over and over again. ( fight her paternal family and her father supports their paternal family) I’m tired 🥱 👎
mountain spring this is not fair oo,you updated this book four hours ago, but completely abandoned the other book titled (She chose to change her fate after rebirth) i am dieing waiting for the update.
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The MC has a huge advantage but cant save herself from being kidnapped and nearly auctioned off. She is 30 in sould but act like a tween. She cant even defeat her white lotus twin sister. Overall she is a weak FL that barely scapes by. And since she is reborn with a system/space to be that weak with all the advantage is boring and irritating.
don't read it!!!! the story could have been good but the author just put different names, different ages and story just jumped from one thing to another with no context...!!!!
It started amazing, not the best but I enjoyed.....now? story is all over table, instead on focusing on one thing FL is doing like everything at the same time like because that is possible, business, studying, investigating sort of 🤔... when you thing she has feeling for ML there is system giving mission which sound like she is forced into relationship with him.. not mention her uncle's family I am more than 400 chapters into story and they made so many illegal things and FL is like " what doesn't break me makes me stronger bulls**t " they should have been in jail long time ago.. her sister drug someone and victim also do nothing about it ?? 🙉
im not going to say this is trash but the story development is too slow. be it character or plot. even in 400++ episode fl still cant get rid her leech paternal family. .love story and ml just served as candy where it appear once in a while .😓😓
If u like reading trash... Basically the MC is stupid even with space function ... MC family is stupider ... And MC acting like she's in her teens even with her living for many years in her past life... Need ML to save her... Go ahead😑😒
I have read to chapter 300+. I like reading trash, but this was just horrid. The author is inconsistent, and the translation as well. The timeline, ages, names, value of money, they all fluctuate and are confusing. The plot is nonsense. The schemes are so weak. The face slapping is of limp noodle quality. The plot holes are so massive that it just truly cannot be overlooked. The main couple just magically love each other out of nowhere. The reason it's not no stars from me is because sometimes the story was funny. I gave it my best try and read more than 300 chapters. Trust me. This makes the reader stupider for reading it. After reading it, I feel like I got indigestion and heartburn. Don't read this story.
Story is both good and bad and most of the problems come from the mc and this will have spoilers ahead so read at your own risk. The mc comes back in time and swears to get revenge. The mc gets a space ability and fails to use it properly. The mc ignores her evil in laws for a slow revenge. The mc father loses his job and she takes revenge when she could have stopped it before. The mc is almost raped but other then almost turning it around on her sister does nothing else. The mc later on has issue after issue from the rest of the family and does nothing other then annoy them. The mc’s uncle goes into debt causing him to sell his adopted kid which ends up with her kidnapped and sold and almost raped again yet mc does nothing. The debtors of her uncle later show up and legit hit her mother in the stomach with a bat causing a miscarriage that could have been avoided if she wasn’t shot freaking stupid and sorry this was so long
This score is only as high as it is because of the translation quality & stability of updates. I've been reading this story since it was on trial read & was selected & have been keeping up with updates, but I decided to drop at chapter 265. Since the start, I've liked how FL is able to face slap those who are plotting against her & her family, especially her sister & her ex fiancé. However, as the story goes on, it becomes a bit annoying how her parents keep giving in to the demands of their family members or how FL has to solve everything for them. Also, there's a couple of chapters that focus on those family members, or new characters, that aren't interesting at all. The romance is slow & okay but not really worth to read everything else.
💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💖 ˚∧＿∧ + —̳͟͞͞💗 ( •‿• )つ —̳͟͞͞ 💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 + (つ < —̳͟͞͞💗 ｜ _つ + —̳͟͞͞💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 ˚ `し´ ˚∧＿∧ + —̳͟͞͞💗 ( •‿• )つ —̳͟͞͞ 💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 + (つ < —̳͟͞͞💗 ｜ _つ + —̳͟͞͞💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 ˚ `し´ ╱╱┏╮╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱ ╱╱┃┃╱╱┳╱┓┳╭┛┳┓ ▉━╯┗━╮┃╱┃┣┻╮┣╱ ▉┈┈┈┈┃┻┛┛┻╱┗┗┛ ▉╮┈┈┈┃▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ ╱╰━━━╯
overall story concept is good but writing quality is very poor. The story said to be 1980's but they are acting more like normal backward villages. the fl acting like 10yr old when she is 16 and also reborn from 30 yrs old.the age gap between ml and FL is too confusing 🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
Reading 9 chapters and dropped.. The story doesn’t pique my interest In the first chapter i think its good but then come out spatial ring So this novel has a fantasy attributes That dropped my interest Because when i read the synopsis my mind think a protagonist that will work hard by her own strength Climbing every step with her own foot but it doesn’t Actually FL has already have a so much more capability and already one step ahead from the other characters because of rebirth 🙃 So she can shine by her own
This one is really bad .. ...... .. . ........ . ...... . ... ........ . .. .. ... .. ...... .. .. .... . ........ ..... ..... .. .
Really bad novel ........ .. . .... ....... .. .. ... . . .. .. ..... . .. .. ... .. ... ..... .. .. ...... .. ....... ... .. ..... ... .
first of all in a review you should say something good. therefore: the concept of the little summary of this book is interesting. now the negatives: --there is no consistency whatsoever --suddenly there is magic(-al-items) --the names are sometimes wrong --the characters are so dull and onedimensional like: "oh wow she is crying to get her will, interesting." --the Main-character immeadiadly lets her opponent know she is onto her --the plotholes are swallowing earth it literaly hurt to read so much, that I had to stop reading after 6 chapters. In summary the concept of the preview (summary above or what you want to call it) is interesting, just the execution of that story is extremly bad. This could have been amazing but the author choose differently.
love it😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😊😊😊😊😊😊[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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It was a good story at the beginning! But now I am getting bored with these two sisters’ drama. The update is slow and the privilege chapters are expensive! I want this to end soon so the FL can move on with the marriage, romance and new adventures. But if this drags on I might as well drop this book.
Overall its a decent novel. A good storyline, good characterisation, its an enjoyable read. However, it does need editing. While in general the translation quaility is good, the constant gender and name mix up are annoying especially as the standard of translation is good. I really wish someone could re-edit it to fix them or allow people to help edit especially as nothing on Webnovel is cheap, to pay so much money for sometimes subpar translation/editing. This is one aspect Webnovel needs to up its game on. You would get more people looking to pay out their ridiculous prices if they gave better quaility translations.
I got to chapter 5 before I had to drop it. There were already inconsistencies from what was mentioned in the very first chapter of the novel. If it happens this quickly how many more changes from the story will there be? It’ll be too annoying for me to keep reading.
The book kept me wanting to know what happens. There were Natura some filler chapters to make it longer but that's to be expected. The ending was rushed with too many loose ends. Why did she obtain the space? What happened to the family members and sister? She had so many business but only the TV show was discussed at the end. Why did the family never find out about the older brothers son who was such a bad guy? How did the old master, who had a mysterious illness, all of a sudden get better. What happened to the twin sisters kids and the lawyer who loved her. Glad I'm not spending anymore money on this book. Kind of upset I spent so much.
I have completed reading the book. Overall a good novel. FL character is well defined and got a good ending.
chapters are incomplete .👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
this is one of two books I read regularly. it's well written and very enjoyable and I love the FL and ML relationship.
This book was really amazing to read. It always kept me hooked no matter where I stopped. The ending was a bit rush I felt but otherwise it was a good read..
Don’t read this novel. The author wrote such an unnecessary scene as the young boy got raped by pervert man. World is already cruel enough, no need for such a plot. What a twisted mind author!!!
A lot of grammar errors, feels like a translation... story is so amazing and juicy I love it and thumbs up for the creator
I really enjoyed this story. There are a few things that bother me but it's only because they don't align with my views.
The story is dragging a bit. She hasn’t gotten rid of her paternal family. Her father is very dull and stupid because he’s always supporting and choosing his family over his wife and kids. The Fl has given her father many chances yet still 🤦♀️. I have read up to chapter 790 and it’s still the same cycle over and over again. ( fight her paternal family and her father supports their paternal family) I’m tired 🥱 👎
mountain spring this is not fair oo,you updated this book four hours ago, but completely abandoned the other book titled (She chose to change her fate after rebirth) i am dieing waiting for the update.
揭示劇透 The MC has a huge advantage but cant save herself from being kidnapped and nearly auctioned off. She is 30 in sould but act like a tween. She cant even defeat her white lotus twin sister. Overall she is a weak FL that barely scapes by. And since she is reborn with a system/space to be that weak with all the advantage is boring and irritating.
don't read it!!!! the story could have been good but the author just put different names, different ages and story just jumped from one thing to another with no context...!!!!
It started amazing, not the best but I enjoyed.....now? story is all over table, instead on focusing on one thing FL is doing like everything at the same time like because that is possible, business, studying, investigating sort of 🤔... when you thing she has feeling for ML there is system giving mission which sound like she is forced into relationship with him.. not mention her uncle's family I am more than 400 chapters into story and they made so many illegal things and FL is like " what doesn't break me makes me stronger bulls**t " they should have been in jail long time ago.. her sister drug someone and victim also do nothing about it ?? 🙉
im not going to say this is trash but the story development is too slow. be it character or plot. even in 400++ episode fl still cant get rid her leech paternal family. .love story and ml just served as candy where it appear once in a while .😓😓
If u like reading trash... Basically the MC is stupid even with space function ... MC family is stupider ... And MC acting like she's in her teens even with her living for many years in her past life... Need ML to save her... Go ahead😑😒
I have read to chapter 300+. I like reading trash, but this was just horrid. The author is inconsistent, and the translation as well. The timeline, ages, names, value of money, they all fluctuate and are confusing. The plot is nonsense. The schemes are so weak. The face slapping is of limp noodle quality. The plot holes are so massive that it just truly cannot be overlooked. The main couple just magically love each other out of nowhere. The reason it's not no stars from me is because sometimes the story was funny. I gave it my best try and read more than 300 chapters. Trust me. This makes the reader stupider for reading it. After reading it, I feel like I got indigestion and heartburn. Don't read this story.
Story is both good and bad and most of the problems come from the mc and this will have spoilers ahead so read at your own risk. The mc comes back in time and swears to get revenge. The mc gets a space ability and fails to use it properly. The mc ignores her evil in laws for a slow revenge. The mc father loses his job and she takes revenge when she could have stopped it before. The mc is almost raped but other then almost turning it around on her sister does nothing else. The mc later on has issue after issue from the rest of the family and does nothing other then annoy them. The mc’s uncle goes into debt causing him to sell his adopted kid which ends up with her kidnapped and sold and almost raped again yet mc does nothing. The debtors of her uncle later show up and legit hit her mother in the stomach with a bat causing a miscarriage that could have been avoided if she wasn’t shot freaking stupid and sorry this was so long
This score is only as high as it is because of the translation quality & stability of updates. I've been reading this story since it was on trial read & was selected & have been keeping up with updates, but I decided to drop at chapter 265. Since the start, I've liked how FL is able to face slap those who are plotting against her & her family, especially her sister & her ex fiancé. However, as the story goes on, it becomes a bit annoying how her parents keep giving in to the demands of their family members or how FL has to solve everything for them. Also, there's a couple of chapters that focus on those family members, or new characters, that aren't interesting at all. The romance is slow & okay but not really worth to read everything else.
💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💖 ˚∧＿∧ + —̳͟͞͞💗 ( •‿• )つ —̳͟͞͞ 💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 + (つ < —̳͟͞͞💗 ｜ _つ + —̳͟͞͞💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 ˚ `し´ ˚∧＿∧ + —̳͟͞͞💗 ( •‿• )つ —̳͟͞͞ 💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 + (つ < —̳͟͞͞💗 ｜ _つ + —̳͟͞͞💗 —̳͟͞͞💗 ˚ `し´ ╱╱┏╮╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱╱ ╱╱┃┃╱╱┳╱┓┳╭┛┳┓ ▉━╯┗━╮┃╱┃┣┻╮┣╱ ▉┈┈┈┈┃┻┛┛┻╱┗┗┛ ▉╮┈┈┈┃▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ ╱╰━━━╯
overall story concept is good but writing quality is very poor. The story said to be 1980's but they are acting more like normal backward villages. the fl acting like 10yr old when she is 16 and also reborn from 30 yrs old.the age gap between ml and FL is too confusing 🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
Reading 9 chapters and dropped.. The story doesn’t pique my interest In the first chapter i think its good but then come out spatial ring So this novel has a fantasy attributes That dropped my interest Because when i read the synopsis my mind think a protagonist that will work hard by her own strength Climbing every step with her own foot but it doesn’t Actually FL has already have a so much more capability and already one step ahead from the other characters because of rebirth 🙃 So she can shine by her own
This one is really bad .. ...... .. . ........ . ...... . ... ........ . .. .. ... .. ...... .. .. .... . ........ ..... ..... .. .
Really bad novel ........ .. . .... ....... .. .. ... . . .. .. ..... . .. .. ... .. ... ..... .. .. ...... .. ....... ... .. ..... ... .
first of all in a review you should say something good. therefore: the concept of the little summary of this book is interesting. now the negatives: --there is no consistency whatsoever --suddenly there is magic(-al-items) --the names are sometimes wrong --the characters are so dull and onedimensional like: "oh wow she is crying to get her will, interesting." --the Main-character immeadiadly lets her opponent know she is onto her --the plotholes are swallowing earth it literaly hurt to read so much, that I had to stop reading after 6 chapters. In summary the concept of the preview (summary above or what you want to call it) is interesting, just the execution of that story is extremly bad. This could have been amazing but the author choose differently.
love it😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😊😊😊😊😊😊[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
揭示劇透 It was a good story at the beginning! But now I am getting bored with these two sisters’ drama. The update is slow and the privilege chapters are expensive! I want this to end soon so the FL can move on with the marriage, romance and new adventures. But if this drags on I might as well drop this book.
Overall its a decent novel. A good storyline, good characterisation, its an enjoyable read. However, it does need editing. While in general the translation quaility is good, the constant gender and name mix up are annoying especially as the standard of translation is good. I really wish someone could re-edit it to fix them or allow people to help edit especially as nothing on Webnovel is cheap, to pay so much money for sometimes subpar translation/editing. This is one aspect Webnovel needs to up its game on. You would get more people looking to pay out their ridiculous prices if they gave better quaility translations.