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I haven't read it but I don't like they way you express the main characters and others' thoughts. You should just use the regular way to express thoughts. You shouldn't use parentheses for thoughts. EX: 'I don't want to write this review.' Anyways, if you are one who doesn't mind that then give it a try.
I haven't read it but I don't like they way you express the main characters and others' thoughts. You should just use the regular way to express thoughts. You shouldn't use parentheses for thoughts. EX: 'I don't want to write this review.' Anyways, if you are one who doesn't mind that then give it a try.