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The story has one of the best foundation, although it will not be like overpowered or immortal or world breaking. Sad that the author stop uploading. But just give it a try man, to feel what a good famfiction with a good grammar can give you! 😘
You can't just leave us hanging like this. How many votes do you need to start updating again? -----------------------------------------------------------
One of the best naruto's fanfics ever! Good Job!!! ░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█████████░░░░░░░░░ ░░███████░░░░░░░░░░███▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒███░░░░░░░ ░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒█░░░░░░░███▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒███░░░░ ░░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒█░░░░██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██░░ ░░░░█▒▒▒▒▒█░░░██▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒███░ ░░░░░█▒▒▒█░░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒████▒▒▒▒████▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ░░░█████████████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ░░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ░██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒██ ██▒▒▒███████████▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒██ █▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒████████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██░ ░█▒▒▒███████████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██░░░ ░██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█░░░░░ ░░████████████░░░█████████████████░░░░░░
i it is a good fan fiction and like it very much put i hope he could update more
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I don't even care what this is about just 5 stars out the bat for what warning at the end lol had me dying I'm still gonna read it tho you win author I'll keep 911 on speed dial lol
Just for the synopsis all five I don't know anything about this but I have a feeling that I will like it........................................
Shajahhajahahsnahsjsksja d d d dish’ email j Nehru Jen u Mx jus h an u bus udk undid unfixing j hey I heh uunwj u Jen u h u Jen u hi ts. Wheu
Absolutely love it, fresh take on the Naruto fanfic scene. That synopsis too tho 🤣 . 💯🙏😍💯🙏❤️😂😍💯❤️💯😂💯❤️😂😍🙏😂💯😍😂❤️🙏❤️😂😍💯❤️😂😍🙏
This fanfic is really great! The only issue is the update frequency, which is rather slow. The longer chapters somewhat make up for it though.
love the story so far, the humor is on point and the MC is interesting, hope to read more of this. 3zwa ntaya
I like the author's sense of humor, keep up the good work, the fanfic is awesome 🔥🔥👍👍 .................................................
Finally! A naruto fanfiction that doesn't take place in Konoha with an mc that doesn't have these cliche cheats! 10/10 best ongoing work on this platform! I loved the creativity of the protagonist!
The sypnosis....i love you author ✨️ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..l . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . This took quite the long time lol.
This is one of the better naruto fan fictions that I have read. Its great because the is no system and the main character is unique while still being funny and I really like the fact that he is from suna.
Very well grounded plot. Good balance of character growth and day-day life. Found the whole Suna village as starting point rather refreshing. Nice read. Keep it up Author-san!! 👍
This is great, I didn’t think I’d like a version where the mc was would be a lot older than the cast but you made it flow really well and didn’t have it separated to far from canon characters. I also like how his actions have cause certain effects for Suna. I can’t wait to see how it starts effecting more in much bigger ways. Great job and hope to keep see more of this story progress further.
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seems good... ......................................................................................................................
قصة مذهلة انها كنز مخفي تتكلم عن قرية الرمال المخفية ويوجد توازن في الشخصية عكس اغلب المؤلفين استمر واكثر من التفاصيل ونمو الشخصية An amazing story, it's a hidden treasure, it talks about the Hidden Sand Village, and there is a balance in the character, unlike most authors, it continues, more details and character growth
Hey author, i know u have an alt account . I wanna read ur other works. Plz reply
The story has one of the best foundation, although it will not be like overpowered or immortal or world breaking. Sad that the author stop uploading. But just give it a try man, to feel what a good famfiction with a good grammar can give you! 😘
You can't just leave us hanging like this. How many votes do you need to start updating again? -----------------------------------------------------------
One of the best naruto's fanfics ever! Good Job!!! ░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█████████░░░░░░░░░ ░░███████░░░░░░░░░░███▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒███░░░░░░░ ░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒█░░░░░░░███▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒███░░░░ ░░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒█░░░░██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██░░ ░░░░█▒▒▒▒▒█░░░██▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒███░ ░░░░░█▒▒▒█░░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒████▒▒▒▒████▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ░░░█████████████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ░░░█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ░██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒██ ██▒▒▒███████████▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██▒▒▒▒▒██ █▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒████████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██ ██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██░ ░█▒▒▒███████████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒██░░░ ░██▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒████▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒█░░░░░ ░░████████████░░░█████████████████░░░░░░
i it is a good fan fiction and like it very much put i hope he could update more
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I don't even care what this is about just 5 stars out the bat for what warning at the end lol had me dying I'm still gonna read it tho you win author I'll keep 911 on speed dial lol
Just for the synopsis all five I don't know anything about this but I have a feeling that I will like it........................................
Shajahhajahahsnahsjsksja d d d dish’ email j Nehru Jen u Mx jus h an u bus udk undid unfixing j hey I heh uunwj u Jen u h u Jen u hi ts. Wheu
Absolutely love it, fresh take on the Naruto fanfic scene. That synopsis too tho 🤣 . 💯🙏😍💯🙏❤️😂😍💯❤️💯😂💯❤️😂😍🙏😂💯😍😂❤️🙏❤️😂😍💯❤️😂😍🙏
This fanfic is really great! The only issue is the update frequency, which is rather slow. The longer chapters somewhat make up for it though.
love the story so far, the humor is on point and the MC is interesting, hope to read more of this. 3zwa ntaya
I like the author's sense of humor, keep up the good work, the fanfic is awesome 🔥🔥👍👍 .................................................
Finally! A naruto fanfiction that doesn't take place in Konoha with an mc that doesn't have these cliche cheats! 10/10 best ongoing work on this platform! I loved the creativity of the protagonist!
The sypnosis....i love you author ✨️ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..l . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . This took quite the long time lol.
This is one of the better naruto fan fictions that I have read. Its great because the is no system and the main character is unique while still being funny and I really like the fact that he is from suna.
Very well grounded plot. Good balance of character growth and day-day life. Found the whole Suna village as starting point rather refreshing. Nice read. Keep it up Author-san!! 👍
This is great, I didn’t think I’d like a version where the mc was would be a lot older than the cast but you made it flow really well and didn’t have it separated to far from canon characters. I also like how his actions have cause certain effects for Suna. I can’t wait to see how it starts effecting more in much bigger ways. Great job and hope to keep see more of this story progress further.
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seems good... ......................................................................................................................
قصة مذهلة انها كنز مخفي تتكلم عن قرية الرمال المخفية ويوجد توازن في الشخصية عكس اغلب المؤلفين استمر واكثر من التفاصيل ونمو الشخصية An amazing story, it's a hidden treasure, it talks about the Hidden Sand Village, and there is a balance in the character, unlike most authors, it continues, more details and character growth
Hey author, i know u have an alt account . I wanna read ur other works. Plz reply