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a shame really from a really solid 5 star to a 3.8 i liked it very much to the point of becoming one of my top 10 favorite novels... but after 380+ the story dev quality dropped so much that the development of the story become like a snail and become a slice of life and not a cultivation story, yes i liked the slice of life chapters... but when 20+ chs are slice of life and 3-7 are 18+ rated chs and 7-8 become story dev and repeat it become a very boring novel... a shame really but after ch 380+ the chs become very skippable well.... not a master piece but readable after 380
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I don't have any complaints, I just wanted to say that i've truly enjoyed your story so far, and thanks for writing it and making it available. it's an easy recommendation for me to make.
If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v
I love this novel mostly because of the main cast. they feel like people who would have their own stories with or without the protagonist and aren't just there to make the mc seem more relevant
me encanta la historia el diseño de personajes todo muy buena lectura espero mucho los capitulos
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I'm really bad at writing reviews but I'll give it a shot, the grammar is excellent it's got the typical World building you would expect from cultivation novels the side characters and harem members are all fleshed out and actually feel like interesting people the main characters also really likeable I really have nothing bad to say about this novel love it a lot.
good yuri harem novel with pampering mc toward her harem and cold almost on everyone
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359 chapters in and still not boring ☺️ if anyone is hesitant in reading because it’s a cultivation novel don’t hesitate because it’s a banger
Well to those who wanted to read this novel but worried it wouldn't be good, dw because this novel is good!. Now I won't go too far about reviewing the story here since it's basically a spoiler. But, things you should've known is that Yasenia (mc) along with her wives are op, noice characters/relationships/strength development, also expect some nice lemon too~ hehe. Anyway don't hesitate and just read it! Also after you've become a frontline reader, beware the presence of certain dao that are dangerous to us as a reader 😶🌫️. That's it can't spoil furthermore else I'll get hunte- *stab *puchi... *is now dying *ded😵 xD
Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
It's honestly one amazing story safe in my top three. ..,......................................................................
One of the best novels i've ever read!! interesting world🐉 lovely characters♥️ and YURI 🤩🤩
Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears. Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements. Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them. Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males. Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.
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well Hello I just noticed your novels in webnovel too 😋 keep making this master piece. its one of few that makes my day more enjoyable .
Thanks for this novel. Very fun to read, lemon’s are good too. keep up the good work. The explicit scenes are well writen.
I've seen this book on to other sites but I've read it on this site it is a very good read the world is very well detailed and I love the characters I don't know why anybody would dislike it other than well the sexuality of one of the main characters so if you like cultivation books then give this one a try
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The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!
I love your novel so far, but the system characters are turning me away. I wa just introduced to Sarah and it seems like she has limited influence on the people with her harem system (including the mc and her harem). Are system users now just characters that are op and can influence the mc group or will they eventually be able to stop them from influencing. I really want to continue but would rather drop it now if that’s the case.
a shame really from a really solid 5 star to a 3.8 i liked it very much to the point of becoming one of my top 10 favorite novels... but after 380+ the story dev quality dropped so much that the development of the story become like a snail and become a slice of life and not a cultivation story, yes i liked the slice of life chapters... but when 20+ chs are slice of life and 3-7 are 18+ rated chs and 7-8 become story dev and repeat it become a very boring novel... a shame really but after ch 380+ the chs become very skippable well.... not a master piece but readable after 380
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I don't have any complaints, I just wanted to say that i've truly enjoyed your story so far, and thanks for writing it and making it available. it's an easy recommendation for me to make.
If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v
I love this novel mostly because of the main cast. they feel like people who would have their own stories with or without the protagonist and aren't just there to make the mc seem more relevant
me encanta la historia el diseño de personajes todo muy buena lectura espero mucho los capitulos
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I'm really bad at writing reviews but I'll give it a shot, the grammar is excellent it's got the typical World building you would expect from cultivation novels the side characters and harem members are all fleshed out and actually feel like interesting people the main characters also really likeable I really have nothing bad to say about this novel love it a lot.
good yuri harem novel with pampering mc toward her harem and cold almost on everyone
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359 chapters in and still not boring ☺️ if anyone is hesitant in reading because it’s a cultivation novel don’t hesitate because it’s a banger
Well to those who wanted to read this novel but worried it wouldn't be good, dw because this novel is good!. Now I won't go too far about reviewing the story here since it's basically a spoiler. But, things you should've known is that Yasenia (mc) along with her wives are op, noice characters/relationships/strength development, also expect some nice lemon too~ hehe. Anyway don't hesitate and just read it! Also after you've become a frontline reader, beware the presence of certain dao that are dangerous to us as a reader 😶🌫️. That's it can't spoil furthermore else I'll get hunte- *stab *puchi... *is now dying *ded😵 xD
Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
It's honestly one amazing story safe in my top three. ..,......................................................................
One of the best novels i've ever read!! interesting world🐉 lovely characters♥️ and YURI 🤩🤩
Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears. Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements. Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them. Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males. Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.
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well Hello I just noticed your novels in webnovel too 😋 keep making this master piece. its one of few that makes my day more enjoyable .
Thanks for this novel. Very fun to read, lemon’s are good too. keep up the good work. The explicit scenes are well writen.
I've seen this book on to other sites but I've read it on this site it is a very good read the world is very well detailed and I love the characters I don't know why anybody would dislike it other than well the sexuality of one of the main characters so if you like cultivation books then give this one a try
==================== It's so good, I stopped being a lurker. ==================== _░▒███████ ░██▓▒░░▒▓██ ██▓▒░__░▒▓██___██████ ██▓▒░____░▓███▓__░▒▓██ ██▓▒░___░▓██▓_____░▒▓██ ██▓▒░_______________░▒▓██ _██▓▒░______________░▒▓██ __██▓▒░____________░▒▓██ ___██▓▒░__________░▒▓██ ____██▓▒░________░▒▓██ _____██▓▒░_____░▒▓██ ______██▓▒░__░▒▓██ _______█▓▒░░▒▓██ _________░▒▓██ _______░▒▓██ _____░▒▓██
The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!
I love your novel so far, but the system characters are turning me away. I wa just introduced to Sarah and it seems like she has limited influence on the people with her harem system (including the mc and her harem). Are system users now just characters that are op and can influence the mc group or will they eventually be able to stop them from influencing. I really want to continue but would rather drop it now if that’s the case.