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寫檢討
No entiendo la obsesión de algunos escritores que escriben sobre un protagonista esclavo de un sistema, una ia o de la trama. Eso es desagradable y aburrido. Otra cosa es darle super poderes al protagonista para luego deliberadamente debilitarlo, además de decir que es un genio pero es todo lo contrario e incluso reduciendo la inteligencia de todos los otros personajes hasta el punto de considerar que son retrasado mentales.
I would not recommend this fanfic, because the story is so flat and there are no changes to Ishigami Yu and instead follows the original plot. Even having a system is a bit useless and actually ruins the story even more. Thank You!!
Aqui desde la comunidad hispana. Mas conocido como latam. Me encanta esta historia :D Gracias por continuarla.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It is the story of a beginner. Romance has no logic, it is absurd. The protagonist is the dog of a system and has no will of his own, he doesn't do anything worthwhile.
idk what happen all girl kiss him / or fell in love suddently look like autor wet dream
first review good novel so far hope he keep up with his update and dont drop this novel this novel is like a Akiki type novel 5 stars sense im first to comment
I've been enjoying this read so far. Honestly haven't been the biggest fan of what's been happening since he got more into the dxd side, but it's an enjoyable read nonetheless. Plus, Ishigami Yu is the GOAT. No other reason needs to be provided.
No entiendo la obsesión de algunos escritores que escriben sobre un protagonista esclavo de un sistema, una ia o de la trama. Eso es desagradable y aburrido. Otra cosa es darle super poderes al protagonista para luego deliberadamente debilitarlo, además de decir que es un genio pero es todo lo contrario e incluso reduciendo la inteligencia de todos los otros personajes hasta el punto de considerar que son retrasado mentales.
I would not recommend this fanfic, because the story is so flat and there are no changes to Ishigami Yu and instead follows the original plot. Even having a system is a bit useless and actually ruins the story even more. Thank You!!
Aqui desde la comunidad hispana. Mas conocido como latam. Me encanta esta historia :D Gracias por continuarla.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It is the story of a beginner. Romance has no logic, it is absurd. The protagonist is the dog of a system and has no will of his own, he doesn't do anything worthwhile.
idk what happen all girl kiss him / or fell in love suddently look like autor wet dream
first review good novel so far hope he keep up with his update and dont drop this novel this novel is like a Akiki type novel 5 stars sense im first to comment
I've been enjoying this read so far. Honestly haven't been the biggest fan of what's been happening since he got more into the dxd side, but it's an enjoyable read nonetheless. Plus, Ishigami Yu is the GOAT. No other reason needs to be provided.