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I think, this book will be my fav novels to read! Cuz the story is so interesting ,[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I think, this book will be my fav novels to read! Cuz the story is so interesting ,🥰😁🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Good Job, Author! This book is very interesting! Can't wait to read next chapt![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A good story. I enjoyed it! I think Jasmine is an innocent girl. She’s lucky tho, because she can live with three handsome boys😄🥰 Thanks author!
The beautyful maid [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Poor Jasmine, but I believe that rain gonna make a beautiful rainbow [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
But who knew his three masters could fall in love with him? Will Jasmine choose one of them? Who will he choose? Please, don't choose all three... my men are still single, Jasmine![img=faceslap]
I really like Jasmine's character. She's very inspiring. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Wow Jasmine, you get lucky when you get love from mr. Bagaskara 😆. I always wait to read another chapter. Will hope Jasmine get happy always.
interesting storyline. how to be jasmin ?? 😁. selalu senang membaca cerita dari author. aku menantikan kelanjutan ceritanya, semangat author 👍
Novel.karya kakak memang nggak usah dibragukan lagi deh, selaku terbawa dengan alur cerita nya.. semangat terus kakak ... semoga sukses selalu💪💪💪😍😍😍😍
Love sekebooon thourrr, ceritanya super kece, covernya bikin jatuh cinta pada pandangan pertama. Apalagi pas buka bab awal amaziiiing bikin pingin lagi dan lagi baca😘😘😘
How to be a Jasmine? 😭😭😭[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]
Sweet story, n so dramatic ... love this story so much [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
OMG, this story so interesting [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I feel you're Smart Author, I want to be like you, hmm ... can I do it ? .... Yes of course ... I must be Positif thinking [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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🥰🥰🥰 innocent girl [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]Oh, Man! This pretty Maid ... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]Very Lucky! I wanna be Jasmine, live with three handsome Man! 😭🥰[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I think, Jasmine is match with Bara. 😁[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hii dear author .....i hope this review will be helpful for you ...the story is something new , its good the plot is nice , very well structured but there are loads of grammatical errors , if you want to do something good you can actually hire an editor for you ... i hope you do well in your future your well wisher
cayo author i like' your world 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💘💘💘💘💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘♥️♥️♥️💘💘♥️♥️
i like bara[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I think, this book will be my fav novels to read! Cuz the story is so interesting ,[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
cayoooooooo good luck 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I think, this book will be my fav novels to read! Cuz the story is so interesting ,🥰😁🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Good Job, Author! This book is very interesting! Can't wait to read next chapt![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A good story. I enjoyed it! I think Jasmine is an innocent girl. She’s lucky tho, because she can live with three handsome boys😄🥰 Thanks author!
The beautyful maid [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Poor Jasmine, but I believe that rain gonna make a beautiful rainbow [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
But who knew his three masters could fall in love with him? Will Jasmine choose one of them? Who will he choose? Please, don't choose all three... my men are still single, Jasmine![img=faceslap]
I really like Jasmine's character. She's very inspiring. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Wow Jasmine, you get lucky when you get love from mr. Bagaskara 😆. I always wait to read another chapter. Will hope Jasmine get happy always.
interesting storyline. how to be jasmin ?? 😁. selalu senang membaca cerita dari author. aku menantikan kelanjutan ceritanya, semangat author 👍
Novel.karya kakak memang nggak usah dibragukan lagi deh, selaku terbawa dengan alur cerita nya.. semangat terus kakak ... semoga sukses selalu💪💪💪😍😍😍😍
Love sekebooon thourrr, ceritanya super kece, covernya bikin jatuh cinta pada pandangan pertama. Apalagi pas buka bab awal amaziiiing bikin pingin lagi dan lagi baca😘😘😘
How to be a Jasmine? 😭😭😭[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]
Sweet story, n so dramatic ... love this story so much [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
OMG, this story so interesting [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I feel you're Smart Author, I want to be like you, hmm ... can I do it ? .... Yes of course ... I must be Positif thinking [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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good i like you book[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
🥰🥰🥰 innocent girl [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]Oh, Man! This pretty Maid ... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]Very Lucky! I wanna be Jasmine, live with three handsome Man! 😭🥰[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I think, Jasmine is match with Bara. 😁[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hii dear author .....i hope this review will be helpful for you ...the story is something new , its good the plot is nice , very well structured but there are loads of grammatical errors , if you want to do something good you can actually hire an editor for you ... i hope you do well in your future your well wisher