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The description of the story is simply terrible... How is the reader supposed to get an idea about it with such lazy description that says nothing at all?
Not a bad plot but the English ruined it😥😥 Author pls work on ur English.Thats my own review,I suggest U read the book than following my opinion
No geral e uma merda sem sentido, e completamente ilógico,....................................................................................................................................................
well, from chapter 9-10, I almost completely stopped understanding what I was reading, something was happening, but because of the continuous text (in paragraphs 1-2 in chapter) and the chaotic hash (due to abilities), nonsense comes out ...
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Its good, English in the first few chapters is a bit bad (1-10chapter eng= 60/100, 11-~ eng= 90/100) , but overall it's good. I recomend to read it. And dont judge the book by the first few chapters.
dunno it's got 80/100 in the english score good first few chp just wanted to leave a review tftvtvtvtvhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
a lot of potential, it just needed a coherent beginning and better grammar. My tip is for you to rewrite this beautiful work with an emphasis on grammar!
The description of the story is simply terrible... How is the reader supposed to get an idea about it with such lazy description that says nothing at all?
Not a bad plot but the English ruined it😥😥 Author pls work on ur English.Thats my own review,I suggest U read the book than following my opinion
No geral e uma merda sem sentido, e completamente ilógico,....................................................................................................................................................
well, from chapter 9-10, I almost completely stopped understanding what I was reading, something was happening, but because of the continuous text (in paragraphs 1-2 in chapter) and the chaotic hash (due to abilities), nonsense comes out ...
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Its good, English in the first few chapters is a bit bad (1-10chapter eng= 60/100, 11-~ eng= 90/100) , but overall it's good. I recomend to read it. And dont judge the book by the first few chapters.
dunno it's got 80/100 in the english score good first few chp just wanted to leave a review tftvtvtvtvhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
a lot of potential, it just needed a coherent beginning and better grammar. My tip is for you to rewrite this beautiful work with an emphasis on grammar!