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The writing quality from the chapters I have read was poor. Unnecessarily adding mc’s pov at the beginning of chapters and general grammatical errors. The mc constantly checking his status despite there being no reason to, just feels like filller. Also revealing a major spoiler in brackets for literally no reason, it completely killed the novel. It’s one of those spoilers which basically take all the enjoyment out of every personal interaction going forward as you know what happens, I can’t even understand the thought process behind the decision as there are literally no benefits to us knowing this information. Overall wouldn’t recommmend but others have said the writing quality improves after 200 chapters, for me I’m not willing to read further after such a bad start.
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Other than grammar and first 200 chapters being a slog It's a great story. My advice is to just skip whatever stuff Mc is not involved in. Especially in the first 200 chapters. Story really picks up after them.
Good Writing Quality and Updating stability BUT the Author doesn't know how to pace, it took like 200 chapters to get to level 2 limiter and then the MC suddenly flew past level 3, 4 and 5. The author doesn't know how to make a stable academy story line and the factions are all hostile to the MC which is kind of ridiculous. Instead of creating a good story of interweaving plots, the author puts a lot of useless filler chapters and even intentionally putting the whole character status again and again in a chapter to increase word count. Overall, the author has potential but you need more reading, just think quite a bit for a good intellectual plot rather than creating trivial fillers. My words might sound harsh but trust me from a veteran reader and writer 😉
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I don't know why I found his master piece this late but god am I thankful I found this today. Love the story, the powers and the villain mc
This is a great novel, character design and development, only downside to this great Nobel is the grammar, at times it feels broken and ruins the immersion us readers have in the novel. Grammerly is a great tool to fix grammatically incorrect sentences. I believe with better editing this novel will shine in webnovel.
The plot and story line seems rather interesting and refreshing, since the book is all about a "Mage with a system". Author has done a great job in creating relatable characters and story arcs. There was something so attractive and intriguing about the story that kept me hooked. When it comes to world build-up and detailing, author has outdone his previous works 👍👍👍 Looking forward to read more about Vincent's journey to become a great mage as well as a super Villain 😈
The story is quite nice, I love how the author explained many of the terms as this can make things a bit confusing so knowing what you are reading about is helpful. I am looking forward to what will happen in the future and this is a good read.
It looks interesting. Expecting new chapters in a regular interval like other novel of your. So for now the characters and the plot looking good and waiting for the new chapters..
The writing quality from the chapters I have read was poor. Unnecessarily adding mc’s pov at the beginning of chapters and general grammatical errors. The mc constantly checking his status despite there being no reason to, just feels like filller. Also revealing a major spoiler in brackets for literally no reason, it completely killed the novel. It’s one of those spoilers which basically take all the enjoyment out of every personal interaction going forward as you know what happens, I can’t even understand the thought process behind the decision as there are literally no benefits to us knowing this information. Overall wouldn’t recommmend but others have said the writing quality improves after 200 chapters, for me I’m not willing to read further after such a bad start.
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Other than grammar and first 200 chapters being a slog It's a great story. My advice is to just skip whatever stuff Mc is not involved in. Especially in the first 200 chapters. Story really picks up after them.
Good Writing Quality and Updating stability BUT the Author doesn't know how to pace, it took like 200 chapters to get to level 2 limiter and then the MC suddenly flew past level 3, 4 and 5. The author doesn't know how to make a stable academy story line and the factions are all hostile to the MC which is kind of ridiculous. Instead of creating a good story of interweaving plots, the author puts a lot of useless filler chapters and even intentionally putting the whole character status again and again in a chapter to increase word count. Overall, the author has potential but you need more reading, just think quite a bit for a good intellectual plot rather than creating trivial fillers. My words might sound harsh but trust me from a veteran reader and writer 😉
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I don't know why I found his master piece this late but god am I thankful I found this today. Love the story, the powers and the villain mc
This is a great novel, character design and development, only downside to this great Nobel is the grammar, at times it feels broken and ruins the immersion us readers have in the novel. Grammerly is a great tool to fix grammatically incorrect sentences. I believe with better editing this novel will shine in webnovel.
The plot and story line seems rather interesting and refreshing, since the book is all about a "Mage with a system". Author has done a great job in creating relatable characters and story arcs. There was something so attractive and intriguing about the story that kept me hooked. When it comes to world build-up and detailing, author has outdone his previous works 👍👍👍 Looking forward to read more about Vincent's journey to become a great mage as well as a super Villain 😈
The story is quite nice, I love how the author explained many of the terms as this can make things a bit confusing so knowing what you are reading about is helpful. I am looking forward to what will happen in the future and this is a good read.
It looks interesting. Expecting new chapters in a regular interval like other novel of your. So for now the characters and the plot looking good and waiting for the new chapters..
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