Reviews of Percy Jackson: Forgotten Son Of Hades by Kinsos - Webnovel

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3.88

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HekAnwdn_

Um desastre gramatical de proporções épicas

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Shang_D_Shiran

I need more updates please its been ages since i found a story that's actually interesting towards my exasperatedly bored mind.

10mth
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Doom_Night

good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

2yr
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Dethofmany

This is a great book and is a great concept. It’s also a generaly good read but it has now started to suffer from the legendary infinit hiatus’s. Will gladly give a 5 star view once this book is getting updates again.

2yr
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AsuraBor

I absolutely love Percy Jackson stories though the grammar is a little rough I feel that it gets the point across and does not truly harm the story because it is good.

2yr
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killua32829

Hi hi hi loving this book so far gotta say can't wait to see how you continue to progress & if you need to take personal time off or any other reason that stops you from writing while it's nice to know why you stopped you're not obligated to have to tell readers if you don't wish. I've tried to write a book on here before but never really could because i suck at writhing & descriptions so compared to me as well as other stories I've read that have bad grammar it's pretty good. Just ignore what all those other harsh critics are saying because while I know grammar & things like that are important to make a book easier to be read & understood as long as the story seems interesting even if a bit slow in the beginning or middle as long as it has my interest i always read a book no matter the cringe or cliches. Those people are all nitpickers & spoiled from reading lots of books with little to no mistakes a lot & while yes feedback does help improve those who don't try to help either cause they don't know how or cause they simply wish to be rude they could easily just silently leave no one is forcing the to stay. So all in all do your best for as long as you wish & want you get all the stars~💜

2yr
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ShadowScribe

Everyone is talking about the grammar which is a big issue but missing the part where the author messes up the PJO stuff. Misspelling names, different personalities from the source, and mechanics that would invalidate many of the issues demigods face in the source (ability to hide their scent).

2yr
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Dragonbeast211

I really like this story it has a interesting plot and one of few that I enjoy hope you keep writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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Kilaske

This is an awesome read and great time killer, so I don't know why it has such bad ratings. It might not be perfect, but it's also not that bad to get lower than 4.

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Cat_Tip
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Good story good developments, good characters development, terrible writing quality, I know English may not be his/her first launguage but when I see that said person spelling the some words correctly then spelling them incorrectly the next time you know it’s not about not understanding English it’s them being lazy to not correct their work before posting it.

2yr
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mr_moi_tastic

The english isn't all that great but its bearable. Other then that the story is dark but interesting and the main character is realistic for what he's been through. My only hope is this doesn't get dropped and more people can get past the grammar issues.

2yr
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Alex_Boen

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_Wessix4Ever

the Grammer was just good enough that I could ignore the mistakes at first but it just got progressively worse please use something like Grammerly and re read your chaps before posting also don't use abbreviations it just feels lazy and informal

2yr
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Old_Man_Sage

This story wants to make this elder hurl himself of a bridge. What is this. This elder can not take this cringe cliche.

2yr
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White_Fox_1647

an amazing story with a few grammar mistakes I don't understand why people want to give it a bad rating because it is amazing keep up the good work

2yr
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Alex_Boen

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Kompax

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Alex_Boen

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Alex_Boen

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AshburnDz

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Froggie_WiseFrog

again what's up with the "dints" its a good story but pls check your grammar when you're writing. ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄

2yr
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Virdan_snek

The grammar is not that good but I guess the story is ok. But the grammar just ruined the story for me it was like watching a child write. It was horrible

2yr
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MidnightBlade007

Again one of the rare fanfictions which make people excited to read it and get their hopes down again. The Grammar is the worst of all, MTL is looking better in front of it. Lot of cringy stuff is inserted in the story. And for the love of God stop using dint instead of didn't.

2yr
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CharAznable

From the comments, it seems that for native English speakers, the grammar is bad. But I, I use Google translator to read, so I don't feel this problem, the story is good.

2yr
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BobboLobbo

One of the most cringiest stuff I've ever witnessed. The MC is a typical loser who says he doesn't care about anything anymore and than cares and than losses the cared person and goes through his loser life in that way. This is the one of the most unfortunate reads of my life. Grammar left the chat in this book. Bye

2yr
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Thanksgiving

this is actually really well-thought-out in my opinion keep it up and thanks for the story mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

2yr
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JokerHighJack

The grammar and spelling are so bad. It takes away from the story. This needs to be corrected because it is such a hard read otherwise. Please fix it.

2yr
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Gabriel_Menard

I love this fanfiction. Maybe MC is too strong from the start, but I trust the author. The romance between Thalia and MC will be a challenge and slow considering the antagonism between Zeuz and Hadès and that between Thalia and Adès... I like this romance! I approve! The chapters are slow to come out (I think) but that's the author's pace so don't force him to write faster than he wants

2yr
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HekAnwdn_

Um desastre gramatical de proporções épicas

9mth
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Shang_D_Shiran

I need more updates please its been ages since i found a story that's actually interesting towards my exasperatedly bored mind.

10mth
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Doom_Night

good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

2yr
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Dethofmany

This is a great book and is a great concept. It’s also a generaly good read but it has now started to suffer from the legendary infinit hiatus’s. Will gladly give a 5 star view once this book is getting updates again.

2yr
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AsuraBor

I absolutely love Percy Jackson stories though the grammar is a little rough I feel that it gets the point across and does not truly harm the story because it is good.

2yr
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killua32829

Hi hi hi loving this book so far gotta say can't wait to see how you continue to progress & if you need to take personal time off or any other reason that stops you from writing while it's nice to know why you stopped you're not obligated to have to tell readers if you don't wish. I've tried to write a book on here before but never really could because i suck at writhing & descriptions so compared to me as well as other stories I've read that have bad grammar it's pretty good. Just ignore what all those other harsh critics are saying because while I know grammar & things like that are important to make a book easier to be read & understood as long as the story seems interesting even if a bit slow in the beginning or middle as long as it has my interest i always read a book no matter the cringe or cliches. Those people are all nitpickers & spoiled from reading lots of books with little to no mistakes a lot & while yes feedback does help improve those who don't try to help either cause they don't know how or cause they simply wish to be rude they could easily just silently leave no one is forcing the to stay. So all in all do your best for as long as you wish & want you get all the stars~💜

2yr
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ShadowScribe

Everyone is talking about the grammar which is a big issue but missing the part where the author messes up the PJO stuff. Misspelling names, different personalities from the source, and mechanics that would invalidate many of the issues demigods face in the source (ability to hide their scent).

2yr
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Dragonbeast211

I really like this story it has a interesting plot and one of few that I enjoy hope you keep writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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Clark_1916

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Kilaske

This is an awesome read and great time killer, so I don't know why it has such bad ratings. It might not be perfect, but it's also not that bad to get lower than 4.

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2yr
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Cat_Tip
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Good story good developments, good characters development, terrible writing quality, I know English may not be his/her first launguage but when I see that said person spelling the some words correctly then spelling them incorrectly the next time you know it’s not about not understanding English it’s them being lazy to not correct their work before posting it.

2yr
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mr_moi_tastic

The english isn't all that great but its bearable. Other then that the story is dark but interesting and the main character is realistic for what he's been through. My only hope is this doesn't get dropped and more people can get past the grammar issues.

2yr
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Alex_Boen

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_Wessix4Ever

the Grammer was just good enough that I could ignore the mistakes at first but it just got progressively worse please use something like Grammerly and re read your chaps before posting also don't use abbreviations it just feels lazy and informal

2yr
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Old_Man_Sage

This story wants to make this elder hurl himself of a bridge. What is this. This elder can not take this cringe cliche.

2yr
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White_Fox_1647

an amazing story with a few grammar mistakes I don't understand why people want to give it a bad rating because it is amazing keep up the good work

2yr
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Alex_Boen

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Kompax

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Alex_Boen

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Alex_Boen

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AshburnDz

Reading this was truly a terrible experience! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Froggie_WiseFrog

again what's up with the "dints" its a good story but pls check your grammar when you're writing. ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄

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Virdan_snek

The grammar is not that good but I guess the story is ok. But the grammar just ruined the story for me it was like watching a child write. It was horrible

2yr
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MidnightBlade007

Again one of the rare fanfictions which make people excited to read it and get their hopes down again. The Grammar is the worst of all, MTL is looking better in front of it. Lot of cringy stuff is inserted in the story. And for the love of God stop using dint instead of didn't.

2yr
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CharAznable

From the comments, it seems that for native English speakers, the grammar is bad. But I, I use Google translator to read, so I don't feel this problem, the story is good.

2yr
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BobboLobbo

One of the most cringiest stuff I've ever witnessed. The MC is a typical loser who says he doesn't care about anything anymore and than cares and than losses the cared person and goes through his loser life in that way. This is the one of the most unfortunate reads of my life. Grammar left the chat in this book. Bye

2yr
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Thanksgiving

this is actually really well-thought-out in my opinion keep it up and thanks for the story mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

2yr
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JokerHighJack

The grammar and spelling are so bad. It takes away from the story. This needs to be corrected because it is such a hard read otherwise. Please fix it.

2yr
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Gabriel_Menard

I love this fanfiction. Maybe MC is too strong from the start, but I trust the author. The romance between Thalia and MC will be a challenge and slow considering the antagonism between Zeuz and Hadès and that between Thalia and Adès... I like this romance! I approve! The chapters are slow to come out (I think) but that's the author's pace so don't force him to write faster than he wants

2yr
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