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good job author, nice story. terutama kisah bagaimana kembarannya meninggal tanpa sepengetahuan pacar dan kenapa gitu dia merasa bersalah, ini titik menarik dari kisahnya suka untuk diksinya
nice story. About twins. Yeahhh ... starting to read, more excited. Hope it will many surprise from the twins. Good luck for the author. Great job ...
Woooooow Impressive!! Semangat nulisnnya ya, seru soalnya nemenin penat! Semoga semakin hari semakin banyak inspirasi ya! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
揭示劇透 good job author, nice story. terutama kisah bagaimana kembarannya meninggal tanpa sepengetahuan pacar dan kenapa gitu dia merasa bersalah, ini titik menarik dari kisahnya suka untuk diksinya
nice story. About twins. Yeahhh ... starting to read, more excited. Hope it will many surprise from the twins. Good luck for the author. Great job ...
Woooooow Impressive!! Semangat nulisnnya ya, seru soalnya nemenin penat! Semoga semakin hari semakin banyak inspirasi ya! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
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