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hooked hooked hooked.. The story is great. the characters are written so well and the pacing is smooth too. This book has a lot of potentials. Continue to work hard dear Author. 💜💜
FIRST THINGS FIRST It has werewolves. SECONDLY IT HAS WEREWOLVES I love the premise of the book. It's intriguing to see how our mc is going on with adapting to his life and such. THe grammar could use a little work, but that's definitely something easily fixable. Nevertheless IT'S A WEREWOLF BOOK, THUS IT IS GORGEOUS I. LOVE. IT
I'm hooked, there is a bit of a slow start but once things get going it's hard to stop. please keep going I need to know more ........................
I really enjoy getting perspectives of different leads. Also it takes a bit to meet the female lead but so happy she doesn't appear to be a weak damsel. Can't wait to see how this goes
I love the story! I hope the author has time to finish! ................................................................................................................
I didn't read for long but the premise is interesting, the grammar is pristine, the story drags you in as you're quite detailed about your storytelling, how he ended there, his life, etc etc... you're quite detailed and that's great, I only say that possibly use a lot more paragraphs rather than packing up so many words and full stops in a single paragraph, it makes the content easier to read and modulate, hope you pass by and leave a review in my novels, thank you.
It's quite an engaging story. Having a person reluctant to accept his fate is futile but a journey worth lookong into. One could look forward to how the societies and culture of mythical creatures are explored in this story. Anyways, the werewolf lore has already been established and it would be exciting to see other beings be mentioned. Would they have their own equivalent of a Moon Godess as well.
Dear author, you have done a great job of getting a grip on us readers. Your ability to capture attention and create cliff-hanging chapters is quite appealing. Yes, there are errors which are inevitable but I believe this book is suitable for every library.
I have been following since this was previously posted. While it is slightly annoying that it was posted wrong I am just glad I can continue reading. I am on the edge of my seat and can't wait to see how this plays out!
**Author here** Thank you so much for giving my book a try. I had to reupload this after submitting it incorrectly, but this is my first attempt at writing. Please help me out if you see a mistake comment I will get it corrected quickly!! Let me know what you think I am open to any feedback!
A different take on werewolves that makes the book interesting. The idea of a werewolf who doesn't realize what he is. Reading the book, I feel like it's going to be an interesting hurdle for him to get over. I also appreciate how the FL is on the stronger side compared to how most female werewolf mates are written. a few spelling and grammar issues but nothing that takes away from the story.
hooked hooked hooked.. The story is great. the characters are written so well and the pacing is smooth too. This book has a lot of potentials. Continue to work hard dear Author. 💜💜
FIRST THINGS FIRST It has werewolves. SECONDLY IT HAS WEREWOLVES I love the premise of the book. It's intriguing to see how our mc is going on with adapting to his life and such. THe grammar could use a little work, but that's definitely something easily fixable. Nevertheless IT'S A WEREWOLF BOOK, THUS IT IS GORGEOUS I. LOVE. IT
I'm hooked, there is a bit of a slow start but once things get going it's hard to stop. please keep going I need to know more ........................
I really enjoy getting perspectives of different leads. Also it takes a bit to meet the female lead but so happy she doesn't appear to be a weak damsel. Can't wait to see how this goes
I love the story! I hope the author has time to finish! ................................................................................................................
I didn't read for long but the premise is interesting, the grammar is pristine, the story drags you in as you're quite detailed about your storytelling, how he ended there, his life, etc etc... you're quite detailed and that's great, I only say that possibly use a lot more paragraphs rather than packing up so many words and full stops in a single paragraph, it makes the content easier to read and modulate, hope you pass by and leave a review in my novels, thank you.
It's quite an engaging story. Having a person reluctant to accept his fate is futile but a journey worth lookong into. One could look forward to how the societies and culture of mythical creatures are explored in this story. Anyways, the werewolf lore has already been established and it would be exciting to see other beings be mentioned. Would they have their own equivalent of a Moon Godess as well.
Dear author, you have done a great job of getting a grip on us readers. Your ability to capture attention and create cliff-hanging chapters is quite appealing. Yes, there are errors which are inevitable but I believe this book is suitable for every library.
I have been following since this was previously posted. While it is slightly annoying that it was posted wrong I am just glad I can continue reading. I am on the edge of my seat and can't wait to see how this plays out!
**Author here** Thank you so much for giving my book a try. I had to reupload this after submitting it incorrectly, but this is my first attempt at writing. Please help me out if you see a mistake comment I will get it corrected quickly!! Let me know what you think I am open to any feedback!
A different take on werewolves that makes the book interesting. The idea of a werewolf who doesn't realize what he is. Reading the book, I feel like it's going to be an interesting hurdle for him to get over. I also appreciate how the FL is on the stronger side compared to how most female werewolf mates are written. a few spelling and grammar issues but nothing that takes away from the story.