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good 👍 ..................................................................................................................................................
Am giving this review as one of the few reviewers before this story gets a rating!!! This is a really good story that has a few grammar mistakes but can be improved!!! the Story background is great!!! can't wait for more chps!!!
I have read your story a few moments earlier, and I have to say I am impressed. If u are gonna continue this story than I wish u all the best my friend.
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It's pretty good. I hope it continues You did a good job, writer......................................................................................................................................................
The story is moving at a nice pace and it seems that the story itself is interesting with having alot of potential just hope that he wont join any peeragesi want to see him as a op human that might become a god
Hay~ Here's Author-kun who gives five stars for his own work!............................................................................................[img=recommend]
im sorry i dont get all the 5 star reviews when i can barely even read the first chapter with how bad the english is but the story looks good it just got ruined so much cos of no editing
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good 👍 ..................................................................................................................................................
Am giving this review as one of the few reviewers before this story gets a rating!!! This is a really good story that has a few grammar mistakes but can be improved!!! the Story background is great!!! can't wait for more chps!!!
I have read your story a few moments earlier, and I have to say I am impressed. If u are gonna continue this story than I wish u all the best my friend.
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It's pretty good. I hope it continues You did a good job, writer......................................................................................................................................................
The story is moving at a nice pace and it seems that the story itself is interesting with having alot of potential just hope that he wont join any peeragesi want to see him as a op human that might become a god
Hay~ Here's Author-kun who gives five stars for his own work!............................................................................................[img=recommend]
im sorry i dont get all the 5 star reviews when i can barely even read the first chapter with how bad the english is but the story looks good it just got ruined so much cos of no editing