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This is an amazing fic the worldbuilding political disputes, power setting, its all simply amazing
A hidden gem right here. I only found this fanfic thanks to Grand Foreigner (great fan fic by the way) Both of your fanfic is excellent long chapter, great story telling, alive character etc.
10/10 would recommend reading. Chapters are long Their quality are top notch MC never gets boring Multiple pov's Magic so that's a plus Lots of logic and moral thinking
good but why does the cover of the fic look like Mrs. Frizzle not lying seriously look and tell me they don't look the same.
I’m really enjoying this so far, the quality and chapters is great as well as the mc being sort of hopeless in some situations is refreshing, the long chapters compared to most fanfics are amazing as well. Please keep it up for a suppl of power stones!
Os capítulos são longos e cheios de informações, oque para mago a ascensão, que deve ser a parte mais complexa do mundo das trevas é ótimo. De qualquer jeito não li muito ate agora, porem esta se demonstrando mais que promisso,r especialmente para qualquer fã do mundo das trevas como lobisomem o apocalipse e vampiro a mascara.
A perfect story, great development of both characters and the world. I recommend.[img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo]
This is an amazing fic the worldbuilding political disputes, power setting, its all simply amazing
A hidden gem right here. I only found this fanfic thanks to Grand Foreigner (great fan fic by the way) Both of your fanfic is excellent long chapter, great story telling, alive character etc.
10/10 would recommend reading. Chapters are long Their quality are top notch MC never gets boring Multiple pov's Magic so that's a plus Lots of logic and moral thinking
good but why does the cover of the fic look like Mrs. Frizzle not lying seriously look and tell me they don't look the same.
I’m really enjoying this so far, the quality and chapters is great as well as the mc being sort of hopeless in some situations is refreshing, the long chapters compared to most fanfics are amazing as well. Please keep it up for a suppl of power stones!
Os capítulos são longos e cheios de informações, oque para mago a ascensão, que deve ser a parte mais complexa do mundo das trevas é ótimo. De qualquer jeito não li muito ate agora, porem esta se demonstrando mais que promisso,r especialmente para qualquer fã do mundo das trevas como lobisomem o apocalipse e vampiro a mascara.
A perfect story, great development of both characters and the world. I recommend.[img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo]