Reviews of Ordverse Ascension by Lakshay_Thakur_9837 - Webnovel

66評論

4.02

  • 寫作品質
  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景

與他人分享您的想法

寫檢討
Kurorooooo

pls continue 🙏🏽 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer

24d
查看0條回復
Rimuru_gamer

Bro why did you add the system user into this story if it only 1 or 2 it still good but why do you add so many and can you list all of the girls that like the mc in volume 0

2mth
查看0條回復
Ireallylikereading

it can be annoying at times but if your a weirdo like me you can enjoy almost any content, i made myself believe i have chinese taste and so "i do" due to this i can appreciate how this novel did not mess up, unlike other people who are just hating cause its a chinese after all to them (narrow minded) chinese equates to lunatics and boredom, but thats honsstly really stupid when you think about novels like the ones made by ruqing rusu take summoner of miracles for example.

3mth
查看0條回復
Yuri_is_Ntr

Well... That's was something,for sure... So,how about edge lord mc that have too much eastern novel and act like those dumb young masters all the time? You know,i wouldn't be against it actually.If he was not so boring.But here we are. Like literally,half a year was spent in forest fighting goblins in danmachi world. Talking with a system and getting on to level 9 fighting level 1 goons... Yep,autor like literally can't put his mind on to this level things. Probably couldn't even count. But that's not worst... You see,sometimes he just wants this brooding uchiha style over his mc.So what did he do? He forces some drama. Like his past memories in different world that he forgets after 20 chapters. Or conflict with eina that's just doesn't make sense at all. It's happened in mc head ,and that's where it's ends. So what was the point of this? To be broody... Because it's so cooooool! Yeah,sure buddy can we have something more going for mc,besides his weird desire of getting cozy with xenos and plans to train girls? Like this dude is so boooooring,i can't take it,move the f### on already.Take a cat or something,find some hobby.Talke with people and touch some grass,retard. I'm done...F###ing boring piece of trash...

4mth
查看1條回復
Alif_Fariza_6046

for new readers, I seriously guarantee that this funfic novel is really great and cool, really bro, I'm not lying or exaggerating this funfic novel too much, this is a cool and great novel, if you don't believe it, you can read it start now, and see you will be addicted and love this great novel.[img=recommend][img=gift][img=recommend][img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it]

4mth
查看0條回復
Ar3
LV 4 Badge

BEFORE READING, EXPECT THIS: MC is a Alpha Cringe MC currently ch 54 - MC being cringe tortures 2 receptionist because Eina cried, but the 2 receptionist only said that the MC might have died in the tower and then Eina cried and didnt want to believe. like seriously how cringe is that.

4mth
查看0條回復
Marcus_2007

I HAVE ONLY READ 20 CHAPTERS TILL NOW Writing quality: There are spelling mistakes, (Rare but, since it is not perfect, we won't giving full score) and the tone seems redundant i.e bland. It feels like an essay written by a kid or just the thoughts you have before writing story .. Story development: Till now i feel it is heavy info dump. Which i personally feel are not looking natural when they are said. It feels disconnected somehow ... This not a big issue hence 4 stars. Character Design: He is an EDGE LORD .I am sorry for the 1 star. Although character design is proper i.e his backstory and behavior are in sink. I hate non-expressive, self-superior, edgy characters .... Hence i am giving it only 1 star.. With all that being said , The story is good till now.. I recommend it.. If you hate

4mth
查看1條回復
Raylen2222_Hunt

I gave on the story it was great but the Mc character and personality is just not to my liking the world where he went to genshin impact ruin any hope I have for.this story and I won't go on to details because it's a waste great job on ruining your story.

5mth
查看0條回復
Molly_DV

yep in the beningging it's really cringe and edgy, but as story goes it's really good maybe it's good bcz im not reading annoying comment anyways i love you author

img
5mth
查看0條回復
Gold_Phoenix777

Dejo esta historia, vi solo hasta que se fue de Danmachi. Cuando apareció el otro reencarnado ya había perdido el interés pero seguí leyendo, ahora otros dioses dimensionales y personajes de novelas chinas fue mi limite. Quería ver una historia donde el MC supera mundos de Anime a su manera pero viendo como terminaste la saga de Danmachi ya me hago una idea de como van a ser los otros mundos. La personalidad del MC también es horrible. El comienzo de la historia es poco claro, entiendo que quisiste darle un pasado misterioso al MC pero exageraste demasiado. El Harem si me gustó y las personalidades, crecimiento y cambios de las chicas también. Si piensas en una reescritura te aconsejaría cambiar la personalidad y desarrollo del MC, darle un comienzo mas claro a la historia y centrarse solo en los mundos que visita sin otros reencarnados ni dioses dimensionales y darle poderes mas claros y equilibrados al MC, tal vez relacionados con los mundos que vaya visitando,

揭示劇透
5mth
查看0條回復
AURA_X_Legend

Really enjoy reading this book. . . . . . . . ..

img
6mth
查看0條回復
DrDedot

I don't necessarily dislike this fic but the one glaring problem that I have with this is the MCs personality I appreciate that this MC is not some cookie cutter goodie two shoes protagonist, but the fact that the MC here is just down right insane, some of his actions are really questionable Here's an example, when the MC just downright started to antagonize Ais and the Loki Familia for absolutely no reason is when I started to dislike the MC, and instead of a character development, the MC goes through a character regression where he gets worse and worse every chapter I just concluded that the author probably read too much chinese cultivator ching chong manhua, the MC has the mindset of a cultivator even though he is not in a cultivation world

7mth
查看0條回復
QuinnTomako12

It's a good fanfic, and I really enjoy reading it. if possible, can you please update more chapters?

7mth
查看0條回復
Kei_Tsugamei

Overall I am very satisfied with the Story especially to the Latest Volume Keep up the good work

7mth
查看0條回復
Lakshay_Thakur_9837

Hello, Readers. This is my first novel so you can say I am a noob. Hence, I won’t be surprised if the beginning was not to some of your liking. However, I ask you stick with me at least till chapter 110-120. If you still don’t like it then you can drop it. That’s all I want to say. Regards.

7mth
查看1條回復
karuko131

........................................

8mth
查看0條回復
LyralGod

Ugh, I wish I hadn't read this. .

8mth
查看0條回復
karuko131

........................................

9mth
查看0條回復
karuko131

........................................

9mth
查看0條回復
kal90
LV 4 Badge

No chapter today ??,......................

9mth
查看1條回復
BoTMaster

MC character ruins everything............................................ ....................................................... ..............

9mth
查看0條回復
WanderinGlance

I will immediately write, that everything described below is only mine and only my subjective opinion. There is no need to judge the entire book only by such a review, although I do not rule out a selfish desire to take into account my opinion, which has taken form of a review. Well... normally, I wouldn't write a review or rate anything at all, untill the very end, but something prompts me to make an exception. I placed my stars in the rating, as I rated the whole thing at the time of me reading chapter 130... I say right away, this will be... forgive me, author, and don’t accept this as your translator, if this is a translation... but this is quite difficult to read. Almost entire Dungeons arc, but I still didn’t understand, why the hero needed all this movement. Throughout the whole time there were a couple of very small references to the past of the main character, and this, as for me, is not enough to justify everything that he does... other than just the author’s idea, it seems. And this does not create even the slightest feeling... of reality behind the story. He just... is. He simply follows the road, that the system showed him, towards a goal that it is unclear? Why he, already distorted by rebirth and a harsh new life, needs it?! Without this connection to the past, the present... it is impossible for me to continue to follow the adventures of Primis, contrary to the warning of anyone, who wants to read this story.

10mth
查看0條回復
Kaan_Acar

I think it's one of those rare books where the main character makes himself worse instead of improving himself. Unfortunately, I don't like this writing style at all, bye...

10mth
查看0條回復
Sunnnny
LV 13 Badge

I’ve managed to get through 100 chapters of this story solely for my love of the select franchises that the author fortunately creates a story around. However, in the end, I just can’t continue reading this. I’ve had my share of interesting psychopathic, sociopathic, deranged main leads; however, this one is hardly someone worth rooting for. It also doesn’t help how part of his character is of a young master of some Chinese cultivator novel, then meshing it up (unsuccessfully) to shows that aren’t was off putting. Maybe the story does pick up later down the line; if so, the author has got to revise his early chapters. Reading through those chapters was a pain. Issues with the grammar didn’t help with the experience neither. tldr: I like the chosen worlds, however it is poorly executed.

10mth
查看0條回復
Elis_Roo

Llevo tiempo leyendo novelas aquí, pero es la primera vez que me entretengo tanto con una sola y me agrada decir que me encanto. Y espero con ansias los próximos capítulos de esta gran novela

11mth
查看0條回復
Unknown_Entity_9922

MC has a cultivator mindset in non-cultivator worlds, and the people just accept it. He has minimal quality interaction with the world, sexually harasses women, collects & abandons wives for long periods and treats everything like it's simply beneath him. The way the worlds treat the MC feels horrendously empty, the way they react to his worst behavior feels completely tacked on and half-blind.

1yr
查看4條回復
Daoist3jFyOj

As you captured my interest by these novel.Author, I declare you as my favorite one!That's all hehe

1yr
查看0條回復
Mert_Aga

Instant 5* why this gem have low score compared the other rubbish books. I forgot the review before so I highly advise the other readers [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=update][img=update][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

1yr
查看0條回復
SimpForGoodNovels

Review as of 150; story has been very interesting and there have been many twists and turns. Grammatical and spelling errors are seen in most chapters but do not take away from the story whatsoever. Really interested in the future development of the story.

1yr
查看0條回復
Siege_Jay

I've not read a word yet but I saw he has guilty crown as a world which is something I don't see that often

1yr
查看0條回復
Kurorooooo

pls continue 🙏🏽 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer

24d
查看0條回復
Rimuru_gamer

Bro why did you add the system user into this story if it only 1 or 2 it still good but why do you add so many and can you list all of the girls that like the mc in volume 0

2mth
查看0條回復
Ireallylikereading

it can be annoying at times but if your a weirdo like me you can enjoy almost any content, i made myself believe i have chinese taste and so "i do" due to this i can appreciate how this novel did not mess up, unlike other people who are just hating cause its a chinese after all to them (narrow minded) chinese equates to lunatics and boredom, but thats honsstly really stupid when you think about novels like the ones made by ruqing rusu take summoner of miracles for example.

3mth
查看0條回復
Yuri_is_Ntr

Well... That's was something,for sure... So,how about edge lord mc that have too much eastern novel and act like those dumb young masters all the time? You know,i wouldn't be against it actually.If he was not so boring.But here we are. Like literally,half a year was spent in forest fighting goblins in danmachi world. Talking with a system and getting on to level 9 fighting level 1 goons... Yep,autor like literally can't put his mind on to this level things. Probably couldn't even count. But that's not worst... You see,sometimes he just wants this brooding uchiha style over his mc.So what did he do? He forces some drama. Like his past memories in different world that he forgets after 20 chapters. Or conflict with eina that's just doesn't make sense at all. It's happened in mc head ,and that's where it's ends. So what was the point of this? To be broody... Because it's so cooooool! Yeah,sure buddy can we have something more going for mc,besides his weird desire of getting cozy with xenos and plans to train girls? Like this dude is so boooooring,i can't take it,move the f### on already.Take a cat or something,find some hobby.Talke with people and touch some grass,retard. I'm done...F###ing boring piece of trash...

4mth
查看1條回復
Alif_Fariza_6046

for new readers, I seriously guarantee that this funfic novel is really great and cool, really bro, I'm not lying or exaggerating this funfic novel too much, this is a cool and great novel, if you don't believe it, you can read it start now, and see you will be addicted and love this great novel.[img=recommend][img=gift][img=recommend][img=gift][img=gift][img=recommend][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it]

4mth
查看0條回復
Ar3
LV 4 Badge

BEFORE READING, EXPECT THIS: MC is a Alpha Cringe MC currently ch 54 - MC being cringe tortures 2 receptionist because Eina cried, but the 2 receptionist only said that the MC might have died in the tower and then Eina cried and didnt want to believe. like seriously how cringe is that.

4mth
查看0條回復
Marcus_2007

I HAVE ONLY READ 20 CHAPTERS TILL NOW Writing quality: There are spelling mistakes, (Rare but, since it is not perfect, we won't giving full score) and the tone seems redundant i.e bland. It feels like an essay written by a kid or just the thoughts you have before writing story .. Story development: Till now i feel it is heavy info dump. Which i personally feel are not looking natural when they are said. It feels disconnected somehow ... This not a big issue hence 4 stars. Character Design: He is an EDGE LORD .I am sorry for the 1 star. Although character design is proper i.e his backstory and behavior are in sink. I hate non-expressive, self-superior, edgy characters .... Hence i am giving it only 1 star.. With all that being said , The story is good till now.. I recommend it.. If you hate

4mth
查看1條回復
Raylen2222_Hunt

I gave on the story it was great but the Mc character and personality is just not to my liking the world where he went to genshin impact ruin any hope I have for.this story and I won't go on to details because it's a waste great job on ruining your story.

5mth
查看0條回復
Molly_DV

yep in the beningging it's really cringe and edgy, but as story goes it's really good maybe it's good bcz im not reading annoying comment anyways i love you author

img
5mth
查看0條回復
Gold_Phoenix777

Dejo esta historia, vi solo hasta que se fue de Danmachi. Cuando apareció el otro reencarnado ya había perdido el interés pero seguí leyendo, ahora otros dioses dimensionales y personajes de novelas chinas fue mi limite. Quería ver una historia donde el MC supera mundos de Anime a su manera pero viendo como terminaste la saga de Danmachi ya me hago una idea de como van a ser los otros mundos. La personalidad del MC también es horrible. El comienzo de la historia es poco claro, entiendo que quisiste darle un pasado misterioso al MC pero exageraste demasiado. El Harem si me gustó y las personalidades, crecimiento y cambios de las chicas también. Si piensas en una reescritura te aconsejaría cambiar la personalidad y desarrollo del MC, darle un comienzo mas claro a la historia y centrarse solo en los mundos que visita sin otros reencarnados ni dioses dimensionales y darle poderes mas claros y equilibrados al MC, tal vez relacionados con los mundos que vaya visitando,

揭示劇透
5mth
查看0條回復
AURA_X_Legend

Really enjoy reading this book. . . . . . . . ..

img
6mth
查看0條回復
DrDedot

I don't necessarily dislike this fic but the one glaring problem that I have with this is the MCs personality I appreciate that this MC is not some cookie cutter goodie two shoes protagonist, but the fact that the MC here is just down right insane, some of his actions are really questionable Here's an example, when the MC just downright started to antagonize Ais and the Loki Familia for absolutely no reason is when I started to dislike the MC, and instead of a character development, the MC goes through a character regression where he gets worse and worse every chapter I just concluded that the author probably read too much chinese cultivator ching chong manhua, the MC has the mindset of a cultivator even though he is not in a cultivation world

7mth
查看0條回復
QuinnTomako12

It's a good fanfic, and I really enjoy reading it. if possible, can you please update more chapters?

7mth
查看0條回復
Kei_Tsugamei

Overall I am very satisfied with the Story especially to the Latest Volume Keep up the good work

7mth
查看0條回復
Lakshay_Thakur_9837

Hello, Readers. This is my first novel so you can say I am a noob. Hence, I won’t be surprised if the beginning was not to some of your liking. However, I ask you stick with me at least till chapter 110-120. If you still don’t like it then you can drop it. That’s all I want to say. Regards.

7mth
查看1條回復
karuko131

........................................

8mth
查看0條回復
LyralGod

Ugh, I wish I hadn't read this. .

8mth
查看0條回復
karuko131

........................................

9mth
查看0條回復
karuko131

........................................

9mth
查看0條回復
kal90
LV 4 Badge

No chapter today ??,......................

9mth
查看1條回復
BoTMaster

MC character ruins everything............................................ ....................................................... ..............

9mth
查看0條回復
WanderinGlance

I will immediately write, that everything described below is only mine and only my subjective opinion. There is no need to judge the entire book only by such a review, although I do not rule out a selfish desire to take into account my opinion, which has taken form of a review. Well... normally, I wouldn't write a review or rate anything at all, untill the very end, but something prompts me to make an exception. I placed my stars in the rating, as I rated the whole thing at the time of me reading chapter 130... I say right away, this will be... forgive me, author, and don’t accept this as your translator, if this is a translation... but this is quite difficult to read. Almost entire Dungeons arc, but I still didn’t understand, why the hero needed all this movement. Throughout the whole time there were a couple of very small references to the past of the main character, and this, as for me, is not enough to justify everything that he does... other than just the author’s idea, it seems. And this does not create even the slightest feeling... of reality behind the story. He just... is. He simply follows the road, that the system showed him, towards a goal that it is unclear? Why he, already distorted by rebirth and a harsh new life, needs it?! Without this connection to the past, the present... it is impossible for me to continue to follow the adventures of Primis, contrary to the warning of anyone, who wants to read this story.

10mth
查看0條回復
Kaan_Acar

I think it's one of those rare books where the main character makes himself worse instead of improving himself. Unfortunately, I don't like this writing style at all, bye...

10mth
查看0條回復
Sunnnny
LV 13 Badge

I’ve managed to get through 100 chapters of this story solely for my love of the select franchises that the author fortunately creates a story around. However, in the end, I just can’t continue reading this. I’ve had my share of interesting psychopathic, sociopathic, deranged main leads; however, this one is hardly someone worth rooting for. It also doesn’t help how part of his character is of a young master of some Chinese cultivator novel, then meshing it up (unsuccessfully) to shows that aren’t was off putting. Maybe the story does pick up later down the line; if so, the author has got to revise his early chapters. Reading through those chapters was a pain. Issues with the grammar didn’t help with the experience neither. tldr: I like the chosen worlds, however it is poorly executed.

10mth
查看0條回復
Elis_Roo

Llevo tiempo leyendo novelas aquí, pero es la primera vez que me entretengo tanto con una sola y me agrada decir que me encanto. Y espero con ansias los próximos capítulos de esta gran novela

11mth
查看0條回復
Unknown_Entity_9922

MC has a cultivator mindset in non-cultivator worlds, and the people just accept it. He has minimal quality interaction with the world, sexually harasses women, collects & abandons wives for long periods and treats everything like it's simply beneath him. The way the worlds treat the MC feels horrendously empty, the way they react to his worst behavior feels completely tacked on and half-blind.

1yr
查看4條回復
Daoist3jFyOj

As you captured my interest by these novel.Author, I declare you as my favorite one!That's all hehe

1yr
查看0條回復
Mert_Aga

Instant 5* why this gem have low score compared the other rubbish books. I forgot the review before so I highly advise the other readers [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=update][img=update][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

1yr
查看0條回復
SimpForGoodNovels

Review as of 150; story has been very interesting and there have been many twists and turns. Grammatical and spelling errors are seen in most chapters but do not take away from the story whatsoever. Really interested in the future development of the story.

1yr
查看0條回復
Siege_Jay

I've not read a word yet but I saw he has guilty crown as a world which is something I don't see that often

1yr
查看0條回復
next page